With this technology communication era we exist often our first impression and interfacing with a potential client is through our voicemail message and e-mail responses.  More than ever it is paramount to have good e-mail etiquette manners and thoughtful voicemail message.

Voicemail - thoughts to consider:

•  Content of your greeting.  What do you wish to say?  Map out key points or even write up the message.  Make sure it is concise, professionally worded.  If you have a short fuse time for someone to leave a message you may say leave a short message to tip them off.  Nothing more irritating than to leave a message to have to re-record because you get quickly cut off.

•  Recording your greeting - make sure you are located in an area that no noise will be heard in the background (people talking, phone ringing, dogs barking, etc)

•  Voice - speak clear and in a normal tone with some energy.  You do not want to sound like you are reading anything or mono tone.  People want to work with an agent who has energy.  This is not a race to see how quick you can speak.  If you are a fast talker, tempo the speed down a tad so that the caller can catch your content of the message.  As I tell people, I have Southern ears so speak slowly.

•  Listen to your message - are you happy with it?  If not re-record until satisfied. 

My voicemail message is - Thank you for calling Connie Goodrich with Keller Williams Realty.  Please leave a detailed message and I will get back with you as quick as I can.  I appreciate your patience and look forward to visiting.  Thank you for calling. Note - I did not say I would call them back in 5 minutes or a time frame.  If you do then you darn sure better meet that expectation.  I do call back promptly but if I am tied up in a meeting, etc. it will be a short time before a break. 

Your e-mail correspondence:

•  Your e-mail is just like a handshake - judged on how it is delivered.  You are judged by the content and professionalism.

•  When corresponding with clients or other professionals - treat them with professional courtesy of a business communication.  Do not get too cute with LOL or other informal dialog until a relationship is established.  That way you can better temper future e-mails to mirror the image you need.  It may be that fun communication will be for the future.  Do not assume until you know.

•  Make sure your e-mail utilizes proper grammar, spelling and punctuation.  This will lay the ground work that you are an educated professional.  Use word check and be sure to mix up similar words to not be repetitive.  Example - It was so great to hear from you.  It will be great to visit and great to find that special home.  GREAT - you need to read what you write and be thoughtful in content or you will begin to grate on them before you even meet.

•·     Avoid long messages - be concise.  Remember we are in an age of speed and immediacy.  Information now, quick and move on.

•  Subject Line on the e-mail - state the purpose.  This will grab the reader's attention quick rather than put it off for later or delete.

•  Select your words wisely - the reader cannot see your body language or facial expression.  Make sure the right written tone is being utilized.  Some messages are better delivered in person or by telephone if the topic is a sensitive one.  Read over you message and if you feel it is harsh or written with anger you may just want to delete and cool off.  Once you send unless you have a delay send implemented on your system that is it.  No take backs.  You may wish to save as a draft and think about it and step away for awhile.

•  Do not forward someone's message without permission.  Think twice before you Reply to All.  You may be passing on a confidential message or communication. 

•  When you do forward a message make sure you read through the body of what you send.  I once received a forwarded e-mail from a Realtor.  I read my intended message but scrolled down to a communication between her and the client.  I found out that they had put in two offers on homes at the same time.  The agent just gave me huge fuel to share with my client as we had a multiple offer working on the property.  As you would say ... her bad!

First impressions and professional communication will set the right tone from the start of a respectful and GREAT relationship.

 

 
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50 Comments on The Right First Impression & Avoiding Pitfalls with our Voicemail and E-Mails

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Connie - great reminders for all.  Thanks.  My voicemail message gets changed regularly and at the moment it says "This is Susan Emo with Remax and It's a great time to buy or sell Real Estate - leave your message and I'll get back to you ASAP"!!

 

3:05pm • #1

Connie, Thank you. I have to fix a few things on my voicemail.  Scott

3:08pm • #2
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Susan - Nice message, to the point and positive!

Scott - First impressions and we can make it what we would like the people to be introduced to us like.  Good luck making it right for you.

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Connie, very good tip. I will also update my voicemail accordingly.

3:17pm • #4
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Huiting - hope you got some good ideas!  Thanks for visiting my post.

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Just listen to your message. Have someone listen to the message. Have heard some really awful messages lately.

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Wonderful tutorial about our two most valuable communication tools, the telephone and the e-mail.

New agents should read this.

 

3:24pm • #7
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Nice reminder. I am often rushed and forget the pleasantries in my emails.

3:27pm • #8
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Excellent post! Two crucial things I see all the time -

1. Call people back promptly no matter what your voicemail says.

2. Don't forward emails that have confidentiality disclaimers!!

3:30pm • #9

Great reminders for everyone to think about! Excellent post and thanks for sharing.

3:36pm • #10
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Connie: Very well stated.. Voice mail can turn off a potential client.

3:49pm • #11

Great post Connie!  I probably need to listen to my voice mail more often to make sure it reflects what I want it to say.  As for email - I try hard to write well, but am probably guilty of having them be too long.  Concise doesn't always cut for me, but I have been practicing.  Thanks for the reminders!

3:49pm • #12
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Norma - Listening is key - I also have heard some really lousy messages that is why I thought about the background noises and content with tempo not like you are about to take a nap.

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Connie - You've made some terrific points in this post.  I also think it is very important  to reply back to emails quickly too.  I know that it can sometimes be difficult but I have found consumers to engage more readily when they receive a quicky reply back.  Your mention of short consise messages is right on target.  This creates that wonderful back and forth rapport in developing our relationship with our prospects and clients.

3:53pm • #14
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Great information and a well-deserved gold star! I have work to do in regards to leaving voice mails. I tend to leave wordy messages, and I really need to curtail them. Thanks for the wake-up call! Cheers,

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Lenn - thanks, I am a teacher by background so I certainly try to tailor my posts in that direction of sharing information that would be of benefit.

Kelly - Don't have to go on and on.  Some personalities of the reader is very direct, get to the point and cut out the fluff.  You learn that tempo after you read how they write as well. 

Dawn - critical points.  Thanks for visiting my post!

Jessica - thanks for the compliment and thank you for reading.

Roland -You are so right about the voicemail and the immediately connecting with you or disconnect.

Sheila- I am a person of many words as well.  Sometimes you just take the tempo off of the writing style of the person emailing If they are long then OK for you.  If they are short to the point, respect that and try to mirror that as well.

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Connie ~ these are good reminders for all of us, thanks for posting them.  I've often heard from clients that the reason they hired me is that I replied to their emails very quickly (perhaps my competition did not).  Same with VMs ... I try to get back just as soon as possible.  In today's busy world, people don't like to wait do they?

3:59pm • #17
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Maureen -Setting the tone that you care and are easy to reach when possible is excellent.  The early bird gets the business! 

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I change my voice mail daily. But you are right. If you are going to do this you can never miss! Great topic. I also use eyejot.com to reply to new contacts. It is very necessary to be real when utilizing video email.
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Connor - Great way to reply to new contacts, leading edge and show how creative and on top of things you are. 

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You are smokin hot with your posts right now !!!

This is such a 'taken-for-granted' post, where most people just slap a message up on their voicemail or whiz off an email, without Really thinking how it comes across.

I just heard a voicemail last week where a mortgage rep obviously recorded his voicemail 'outside' because as he is finishing his message, you hear in the background someone yell "yeah screw you too!"  ... the saddest part is that he obviously didnt review the message before he made it his choice.

... I alerted him to it, and he was extremely grateful !

        ...... maybe I should fwd him your post too :o)

Great job as always Connie !!!

Sheldon :o)

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Connie-Excellent stuff and watch those forwarded emails.  I sometimes tend to forward but delete previous correspondence unless its needed for the papertral

4:37pm • #22
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Sheldon - you just manage to make me laugh ... great gift!  I wonder how much business he was "screwed out" of because of his message before he got your heads up.  Nice that you brought his attention to it.  I do this too with messages - I will be out of town from March 17 - 20 ... and you are calling on the 25th.  They either get no messages or no one is brave to correct.  I like to be brave.  Thanks as always for stopping off and thanks for the "smokin hot" (about my posts oh course). 

Midori - After reading that agent's forward email that compromised her client's position I just copy and past the intended message into a new email and highlight it in a color to set the communication off.  That way, no little embarrassing moments here.  Thanks for visiting!

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Hi Connie...These are certainly points that we know but may be guilty of not following.  Good reminder.

Thanks,

Kate

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Kate - thanks for the visit.  Just as in teaching, when you prepare the material you are reminded on the content better.  When I was writing this post I had to ask, am I doing this?

4:50pm • #25

Nice post. I totally agree about avoiding long messages on your email. Short and concise are most professional.

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Kelsey - People get tired of long messages.  Also when they are a frequent caller they don't want to have to listen all through it again and again.  Thanks for visiting!  Is that your child?  Darling!

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Connie,

Some good points here...especially keeping voicemails brief....I need to work on that one!

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Connie...

I would like to add to your list okay? I think everyone that uses a mobile phone or pda needs to be sure they're hanging up the phone. I've learned a lot of what goes on behind the scenes just cuzz someone forgot to disconnect. They're bad? Indeed :)

TLW...ROAR!

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Connie,

WOW!!! What an awesome post! I am going to print this out and give it to everyone in my office. Thank you for taking the time to remind us all of how truly important some of "the basics" can be!

Thank you and congrats on the feature. If it were up to me, I would feature all your posts!

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Lori - Hope this was of some food for thought.  Thanks for stopping off!

TLW - Well it looks like you are getting back in the swing of things!  I have a post on that very subject, a cell that dialed out and the conversation from other Realtors in the car discussing the client were over heard ... it was not a pretty clean up job either.

Cherimie - you are just too kind, showering me with the compliment ... blush, thanks!  I hope it helps out you office.  I love to teach and this just tickles me that you would find my material valuable to pass around.. Many thanks!

5:41pm • #31
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I would add to email that you should only send or forward when you have permission to do so. Also, if there are multiple email addresses that someone sent in the send to line, a pet peeve of mine, you really shouldn't forward and expose those emaill addresses to those who shouldn't have them. Everyone should learn to mail merge.

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Joe - Blind email with multiple addresses is great .. not used much but should be, good point.  Thanks!

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Connie - very well put !  People forget that impressions can be had just from voicemails and emails these days !  A great reminder.

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Connie:  You've come up with a splendid list of great things to do.  Thanks so much for sharing.  I think I am going to try and use several of your ideas.  Thanks again...  And... congratulations on getting your Featured Post and the Gold Star.  Hooray !

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Christopher & Stephanie - Thanks and we all need to remember that first impressions can come from many sources.

Karen- Thanks and glad you liked the list.  Hope some of these thoughts sparked some new ideas for you.  Good luck and thanks for reading! 

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Connie, two great posts, you hit it out of the park today.  This one brings to mind something I thought about blogging.  

An agent, whom I have never before met and just submitted an offer to sent back an e-mail and her signature was; 

xox  Jane Doe

Now, I know I am not her potential customer but unless the "xox" represents something other than kisses and hugs I found this slightly unprofessional.  Even though she is a very successful agent, I have a difficult time taking her seriously.  So to add to your point, even your sign-off is important.

7:25pm • #37

Connie, Thanks for the tips and reminders.  As for  your comment to TLW (about making sure to hang up cell phones) "I have a post on that very subject, a cell that dialed out and the conversation from other Realtors in the car discussing the client were over heard ... it was not a pretty clean up job either" . -- The very thing happened to me and there was significant damage control needed to clean up the mess.  It would have been so much easier to just make sure the phone disconnected.

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Mike - Now that is just funny.  Maybe the agent wanted to send you hugs and kisses to make the contract work.  I was very surprised by the two features as I wrote them on separate days. 

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Lora - I just here those awful in the moment stories.  I was the office manager at the time and needless to say the agent came in horrified to confess the sin and ask for advice.  It worked itself out just fine but it took a while before the agent could tell the story and laugh about it. 

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I miss phone calls. No one wants to use the phone anymore it is all email, text, twitter, or instant chat.

8:13pm • #41
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Teresa- embrace the changes but incorporate the old comfortable ways.  Refuse to give up all.

8:25pm • #42

Connie- these are some great points to think about as we leave voice messages and write emails.  I especially liked what you said about reviewing forwards.  We never know what the history of an email conversation may hold.

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Hi Connie -- Well said.  I'm off to improve my cell phone voice mail message! :-) Thanks for the motivating reminder.

11:01pm • #44
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Your post gives good advice.  Email is always a little tricky as it's short, instantaneous and doesn't convey tone, so people need to be extra careful.

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TLW nailed the issue of the "still active" open linebecause the call wasn't canceled.  How embarrassing can/could that be!!

When someone is calling long distance they don't want to listen to a long winded msg (that they are paying for) before they get to leave their msg.  Brevity and to the point is great.

Nice post on some very important reminders.

Sue of Robin and Sue

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Connie- Two great posts in one day- Congratulations on your Features.

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Communication and relationship building are 2 of the keys to staying strong in this business. Your phone greeting may be the first impression a prospective client has of you ~ it should be your best effort.

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You were busy this weekend I can see Connie - have you caught up on all your emails, voicemails and comments yet??  Congratulations on this stellar post!

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Connie, this is so true regarding your voice or email impression.  No matter what always have a presence.

Have a great and successful week.

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