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Baseball, DishTV, and Angry Moms - Lowering the Bar and Lowering Standards by Using Slang Words in Advertising

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Real Estate Agent with PREA Signature Realty - www.preasignaturerealty.com

PREA Signature Realty - Use of LanguageWhen it comes to blog titles, we all want to use some clever slogan to attract attention or generate a buzz.  A clever title draws the reader in and makes them want to click through and read the entire article. 

Now, over the past few months, I have noticed the term "sucks" used in over 100 posts and I don't really get the motivation for using it.  It is debatable whether it is profanity or not.  Whether it is or isn't, it may turn off customers, colleagues and idle readers.  Here are some stories about the use of the term:

  • In 2005, USA Today did a story on linguistics and baseball that debated whether "Yankees suck" on t-shirts was profanity on not. 
  • Recently, the issue has reared its head in Baltimore, Seattle and Arlington where fans have been asked to either remove their t-shirts or leave for violating bans on profanity contained in the fan code of conduct and ticket license agreement.  Here is a recent story from the Dallas Morning News involving the Texas Rangers. 
  • In contrast to the stance of Major League Baseball teams, other businesses don't view it as profanity.  In fact, Dish Network recently used it in an ad campaign featuring the slogan "TV doesn't have to suck."  The ad campaign struck a nerve with OneMillionMoms.com which launched an e-mail campaign protesting the use of crude language in advertising.  It also drew a commentary from the National Review Online that stated as follows:

"But why does DISH think it's acceptable to offer up, as a reason for customers to subscribe to it, the opinion that it doesn't "suck?" The entire campaign is infantile. It captures the language of 13-year-old boys in an attempt to persuade parents to buy a somewhat expensive luxury product. It seems to have sought the lowest common usage with which to describe the lack of quality, and it has built its entire public image around this usage. Which, if you think about it, is very bad marketing. DISH Network has associated itself with a word that is counterproductive to its goal."

Whether it is profanity or not, I know that my older, educated customers either view it as a vulgar term with a sexual connotation or, even if not profanity, they view it as a low class slang word.  I suspect that some would simple delete the post, unsubscribe and stop reading.  Now, I'm not a prude.  I simply am cautious or judicious with the language that I choose to use so that customers see me in the best light, strongest terms, most positive circumstances, etc. 

Maybe Dish Network's plan succeeded.  If its goal was to shock people and generate publicity, it probably did work as you can see that some are talking about it more than 4 year later.  However, as a profession whose target market isn't 13-year old boys who watch Beavis and Butthead and laugh at fart sounds, it seems like we can do better.

So, it leads me to the question:  If the term offends some as profanity, why use it?  If you have used the term in a blog post, did it really attract readers to your blog?

Interested in developing clever marketing campaigns that don't use profanity and that focus on simple values to sell your home in St. Louis, Missouri? Contact Ryan Shaughnessy at PREA Signature Realty at 314-971-4381 or send an e-mail to Ryan@PREASignatureRealty.com.

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Comments (17)

Tim Bradley
Contour Investment Properties - Jackson Hole, WY
Commercial Real Estate Expert in Jackson Hole, WY

I'm guessing that those who use it don't consider it profanity, so it did not occur to them that the term might be offensive.

Jun 22, 2009 05:08 AM
Pat Champion
John Roberts Realty - Eustis, FL
Call the "CHAMPION" for all your real estate needs

It is good to be reminded of targeting our audience-we choose our audience by what we put in the public eye and you are right we do need to be aware of what we post.

Jun 22, 2009 05:12 AM
Ryan Shaughnessy
PREA Signature Realty - www.preasignaturerealty.com - Saint Louis, MO
Broker/Attorney - Your Lafayette Square Real Estate Partner

Tim - I'm not offended by the word.  I do think it represents the dumbing down of American lexicon.  Having said that, I just don't see the need to use the word if it doesn't add value to my post or advertising and has the potential to turn off or turn away prospects.

Pat - I did a post on language not too long ago.  I used the phrase "This Lady has Good Bones" to describe a house that had a good structure but needed renovation.  I received a few angry e-mails about my choice of words.  In that case, I replied to each one pointing out its common usage - literally 100s of other MLS listings using the same words.  However, although I may have been right and it may not have been a sexist phrase, I don't think I won any points with the people who sent me e-mails.

Jun 22, 2009 05:19 AM
Team Honeycutt
Allen Tate - Concord, NC

I agree! We always should be aware of everything that we post!

Jun 22, 2009 05:20 AM
Betina Foreman
WJK Realty - Austin, TX
Realtor, C.N.E., with WJK REALTY

Every word is not for use for every person. You need to consider your audience and the situation and speak or write accordingly.

When I ran the DPR Construction office at Children's Hospital in Austin TX, several times I made workers turn their offensive shirts inside out if they wanted to remain on the job. If they continued to wear in appropriate work clothes they would be asked to leave. Those men usually had some pretty vulgar words for me. My feeling was I am in charge of runninga construction job-site in a CHILDREN'S hospital that is run by a CHURCH.  I was not about to allow those men to run around wearing shirts promoting Jack Daniels and titty bars with vulgar curse words. I am no prude, but there is a time and place for everything.

Your reputation is impossible to rebuild once you loose it. I say stick to your guns, keep it clean!

Jun 22, 2009 06:06 AM
Ryan Shaughnessy
PREA Signature Realty - www.preasignaturerealty.com - Saint Louis, MO
Broker/Attorney - Your Lafayette Square Real Estate Partner

Team Honeycutt - My mother was a H.S. English teacher and a stickler about language.  If I wouldn't use the term in front of my mother, I wouldn't use it online.  Pretty simple test for me. 

Jun 22, 2009 06:18 AM
Ryan Shaughnessy
PREA Signature Realty - www.preasignaturerealty.com - Saint Louis, MO
Broker/Attorney - Your Lafayette Square Real Estate Partner

Betina - Real life example... I absolutely agree... there is a time and place for everything.  However, if you blog as part of a business strategy, I would keep it clean and would stay away from slang - whether deemed profanity or not.

Jun 22, 2009 06:20 AM
Richard Weisser
Richard Weisser Realty - Newnan, GA
Richard Weisser Retired Real Estate Professional

Ryan...

I agree that language is powerful, and that sometimes words are used to incite passion. I think that some would relate to what I would call slang rather than profanity, some would not, but I can live without it!

Jun 22, 2009 09:39 AM
Ryan Shaughnessy
PREA Signature Realty - www.preasignaturerealty.com - Saint Louis, MO
Broker/Attorney - Your Lafayette Square Real Estate Partner

Richard - same thoughts here... not offended... but it just doesn't contribute anything to the discussion in my book.  If you want to shock, join Howard Stern with his antics.

Jun 22, 2009 09:45 AM
Tom Braatz Waukesha County Real Estate 262-377-1459
Coldwell Banker - Oconomowoc, WI
Waukesha County Realtor Real Estate agent. SOLD!

Ryan

So true; if we don't care for it, and don't care for it why would our audience. There is no value to add it to anything on-line.

Jun 22, 2009 10:09 AM
Ryan Shaughnessy
PREA Signature Realty - www.preasignaturerealty.com - Saint Louis, MO
Broker/Attorney - Your Lafayette Square Real Estate Partner

Hey Tom - Thanks for reading.  I should start looking to see the age of the author.  Maybe I'm just getting old and cranky... or still young enough to remember that my mother would rap my knuckles if she saw me using that in a header.

Jun 22, 2009 11:37 AM
Sharon Alters
Coldwell Banker Vanguard Realty - 904-673-2308 - Fleming Island, FL
Realtor - Homes for Sale Fleming Island FL

Ryan, you can definitely tell the age group creating the advertising by the language and topic/slant. But now it's creeping into older generations and going mainstream. Not very attractive or appealing, IMO.

Sharon

Jun 22, 2009 02:16 PM
Ryan Shaughnessy
PREA Signature Realty - www.preasignaturerealty.com - Saint Louis, MO
Broker/Attorney - Your Lafayette Square Real Estate Partner

Sharon - I agree with you - not attractive, not appealing... likely to make me to not read or not buy product or not use the service.

Jun 22, 2009 02:19 PM
Jenny Kotulak
RE/MAX Real Estate Centre Inc., Brokerage - Oakville, ON
Broker - Oakville Ontario Real Estate

Hi Ryan,

I can't wait to hear Karen Anne Stone's comments to this one.  It sounds like she and your mother would have gotten along famously. I'm going off topic at tad.  I am starting to notice in newspaper articles even, when the writer is a younger person.  The grammer just isn't the way it used to be.  I am a stickler for speelling and I used to do very well in speliing beas. 

Once I wrote an e-mail to the entertainment writer at the Toronto Star.  His story was so full of spelling mistakes and I asked him if he didn't have a proof reader.  He e-mailed me back about rough copy, deadlines, no time, yadda yadda.

My kids used to do this also.  Write a rough draft first.  I couldn't figure out why they wouldn't just spell the words correctly in the rough draft. 

Jun 22, 2009 04:26 PM
Ryan Shaughnessy
PREA Signature Realty - www.preasignaturerealty.com - Saint Louis, MO
Broker/Attorney - Your Lafayette Square Real Estate Partner

Jenny - Too funny... you mean to say that the Toronto Star doesn't have spell check on Microsoft Word like the rest of the universe...

Jun 23, 2009 12:23 AM
The Somers Team
The Somers Team at KW Philadelphia - Philadelphia, PA
Delivering Real Estate Happiness

Ryan - Good question !  It does not make sense to me to lower standards just to get a few more readers.  But I guess for those that are in the media industry where that traffic means everything, maybe they are more pressured.  Similar to the boundaries of sex being pushed as that gets people attention faster as well !  Will be interesting to see how blog titles evolve but for now we will refrain from using vulgarities or pushing the envelope : )

 

Jun 25, 2009 01:11 PM
Ryan Shaughnessy
PREA Signature Realty - www.preasignaturerealty.com - Saint Louis, MO
Broker/Attorney - Your Lafayette Square Real Estate Partner

The Somers - I agree with your approach.  I want to be noticed because of the value I bring to the transaction or the content that I generate.  I don't want to attract readers based on shock value and don't want to be the blogger version of Howard Stern.  It, however, doesn't mean that I won't use clever headlines intended to get readers to read the post.  My post about social media got some attention based on the title.  People opened the post thinking that I was about to criticize the effectiveness of social media.  There was some interest created by the title - but it wasn't based on using profanity or sexual innuendo.  Thanks for reading - I hope everything is well in the Philadelphia market.

Jun 25, 2009 01:26 PM