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Reading What I Mean and Not Just What I Write.

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Acquiring Your Writing VoiceReading What I Mean and Not Just What I Write and a Few Other Thoughts for Those New to Blogging.

Have you ever written a post when what you wrote did not reflect what you meant to say or how you intended it to sound. I suspect that it has happened to most of us at one time or another. Some of the best treasures in writing here in the Rain probably had to over come some of this as they attained more experience.

In blogging we acquire what we refer to as a writing voice. Naturally when we become new bloggers we want to develop that voice but in truth most of us have no idea what it means exactly. And I speak from experience. As I was developing as a writer here in ActiveRain, many comments from more experienced writers would refer it and though I was uncertain of exactly how one gets a writing voice, I did know I wanted one so I could fit in with my peers. Over time, it seemed like I had actually developed just such a quality but to define it is still a bit awkward. In fact today 4 years from when I began to write, I hardly even hear " writing voice" referred to anymore. Fine with me, I have no idea how to get one other than to keep writing and I suppose it evolves somehow. 

I would guess that we have all written posts when our facts were a bit loose or not totally clear and we were expressing ourselves as naturally as we knew how. Language skills aside, as real estate professionals we know our craft. But we are often at a loss at fully comprehending the nomenclature used through out all of our related industries and the abbreviated initials used by government programs, economists, and especially in our popular and useful social networks like Twitter and Facebook.

Sometimes when we are reading posts by our fellow members and other related professionals, we scan over their posts and we miss the point of what the post was actually about but we make a stab at it and leave a comment any way. Once in a while we may go back and reread that post and see that our comment is not even close to being relevant. But I would venture to say that after the writer rolls their eyes at the comment and realized that you missed what they were trying express, they still very much appreciate that you came by and left a comment on their post.

None of us always write as clearly as we might like to or as colorfully and entertainingly as we would intend. I know that there are also times when we hit a home run on a topic that gets a lot of attention from our peers and readers and it might even get featured. And if you are anything like me, you re-read the post and something sticks out as not quite right. Even to ourselves while we were writing the post, we didn't realize that what we wrote was not what we meant or at least as clear as we might have been. Best thing to do is to go back and clean it up, since the post will remain out there in Internet land for perpetuity. BTW, even after years of writing I still have to do it now and then. Actually more often than that, LOL

 

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Comments(49)

William Johnson
Retired - La Jolla, CA
Retired

Hi Steve, I am sure these thoughts have occurred to all of us. What made me write about is that I got bored writing about real estate and the problems that most of us just try to work though. Honestly, I felt I haven't got anything new to offer ( actually sick of talking about it anyway) and it's all about the changes that most of us can't do anything about except to implement them and make them work the best we can. So for me it is on to other things, LOL. Got some great new photos to post so that is what you will find me doing at least until I am inspired again with something worthwhile that 30 million other people haven't already written about :-)

Jun 08, 2011 02:44 PM
Cari Dandy
Russ Lyon Sotheby’s International Realty - Scottsdale, AZ
Homes for Sale - Scottsdale AZ

William - my first time to read your post and I am loving your voice! I am brand spanking new to this so it's very helpful to have people like you to look up to! P.S. I re-read my blog today and there was a typo!!!

Jun 08, 2011 03:06 PM
Ruthmarie Hicks
Keller Williams NY Realty - 120 Bloomingdale Road #101, White Plains NY 10605 - White Plains, NY

Finding one's voice takes time - and someitmes we develop many voices.  I have one style for local posts another for more industry related posts and another for humor.

Jun 08, 2011 03:22 PM
Geri Sonkin
Douglas Elliman Real Estate 516-457-7103 - Merrick, NY
Long Island Real Estate & Staging Expert

It took me a long time after I started blogging to find my voice.  I read so many other writers, some whose prose was lyrical, magical and meaningful.  The one thing I knew from the start was if I were to do this in a substantive way and ultimately successfully, I had to find my own voice.

Jun 08, 2011 03:29 PM
Christine Donovan
Donovan Blatt Realty - Costa Mesa, CA
Broker/Attorney 714-319-9751 DRE01267479 - Costa M

William - I think we all do it sometimes.  Hopefully we do it right most of the time.

Jun 08, 2011 04:10 PM
Sarasota & Manatee Counties FL
SaraMana Properties - QuickFreeMLS.com - Bradenton, FL
QuickFreeMLS.com - Listings In Paradise

I enjoyed reading your very well written blog post!

Jun 08, 2011 05:02 PM
Melissa Zavala
Broadpoint Properties - Escondido, CA
Broker, Escondido Real Estate, San Diego County

I find that this is actually a bigger problem in emails than in blog posts--where our audience can easily misinterpret our tone in simple emails.

Jun 08, 2011 05:04 PM
Allen 2222
Austin, TX

Writing is a skill that develops with time and practice. New writers tend to use very roundabout ways to say something and use many more words than are necessary. I think direct, even blunt, is better.

Jun 08, 2011 05:12 PM
Fred Carver Real Estate Consulant
Retired BC Realtor - Victoria, BC
Accredited Real Estate Consultant

Hi William....Congratulations on your feature! You're right I don't hear anyone talking about developing your writing voice...that's been a while.

Just write develop followers and follow back. You do find you favor other writings...mmm must be a voice they have developed you like.

Jun 08, 2011 05:16 PM
Aida Pinto
Independent Real Estate Broker - Los Angeles, CA
Real Estate Broker (562) 884-6196

 

Well said William.....I’m still trying to find my voice...still.... and when I read a post, and I totally agree with writer and just say "great post"  but some balk at those short comments....and sometimes I have nothing new to add and I want the writer to know that I appreciate his/her effort.....so I say: Great post, thanks for sharing.

Jun 08, 2011 06:06 PM
Kirsten Lindquist
Pacific Union International - Sonoma, CA
Realtor - Sonoma Wine Country

William:  I enoy your writing because of your voice.  I usually hear a "genuine" message in your posts....something that comes from your core.  That's what keeps me coming back!  Congratulations on the feature!

Jun 08, 2011 07:10 PM
Pamela Seley
West Coast Realty Division - Murrieta, CA
Residential Real Estate Agent serving SW RivCo CA

William, I enjoy your photoblogs very much. I've noticed in my blogging, sometimes I do not communicate my point very well and then it's easy to be misunderstood by readers. I think it takes time to develop our own unique writing voice. Thanks for the encouragement and inspiration.

Jun 08, 2011 07:58 PM
Deb Brooks
Brooks Prime Properties Wichita Falls Texas - Wichita Falls, TX

William, I must say I do love the word perpetuity. I'm not sure that I love what it means though. I may have to revise some of my 500+ posts or go through a long click/delete session. Your writing flows with a congruency of great thought and organization. At times I barely think about what is coming from my fingers. Those are the posts I had better revise! The whole idea of them remaining with perpetuity is a bit scary! I always enjoy your postings, my friend! 

Later in the rain~Deb

perpetuity,perpetuity,perpetuity...fun word. I will now perpetually pronounce perpetuity! And, then wipe off my computer screen! lol...

Jun 08, 2011 10:17 PM
Lenn Harley
Lenn Harley, Homefinders.com, MD & VA Homes and Real Estate - Leesburg, VA
Real Estate Broker - Virginia & Maryland

HA!  I follow a simple rule.  Say what you mean and mean what you say.  Works for me. 

I have to admit that I'm not as concerned with perpetuity as I am the NOW.

Jun 09, 2011 12:16 AM
Richie Alan Naggar
people first...then business Ran Right Realty - Riverside, CA
agent & author

I am OK with expressing my self...I have the other problem of saying just what I am thinking whether it be in person or in writing...Not everyone wants to hear, see or discuss what is really going on. Furthermore, perception plays a large part in the process too. We all send our messages out every moment of the day. Were they understood? Were they received?...Were they even wanted? good personal reflection post...thank you William

Jun 09, 2011 03:13 AM
Sandy Acevedo
951-290-8588 - Chino Hills, CA
RE/MAX Masters, Inland Empire Homes for Sale

So very true! Sometimes I read a comment which seems to have nothing to do with the post and I have to re-read the post and realize there was a disconnect somewhere.

Jun 09, 2011 08:47 AM
Victoria Stankard
Get Found Now - Tampa Palms, FL

Hi William, Fine job on this post - so well done. Finding your "voice" takes time. It morphs after writing many many articles, getting feedback from readers and basically feeling your groove. Can't tell you how many time I have gone back to earlier posts and completely rewrote them even when they had pretty good placement. Never a waste of time. Hey, sounds to me like you have found your voice!

P.S. Love the dog!

Jun 09, 2011 09:11 AM
Patricia Aulson
BERKSHIRE HATHAWAY HOME SERVICES Verani Realty NH Real Estate - Exeter, NH
Realtor - Portsmouth NH Homes-Hampton NH Homes

Well two heads are better than one as the saying goes.  So, with that said, I usually ask someone to read what I wrote for me and the run the spell check as well before putting it out there.  Better safe than sorry!

 

~Patricia Aulson/ Seacoast NH & ME

Jun 09, 2011 02:20 PM
Mel Ahrens, MBA, Kelly Right Real Estate
Kelly Right Real Estate - Hood River, OR
Customized Choices for your Real Estate Needs

I worry sometimes that folks won't pick up on my sarcasm or dry wit. So I've been trying to avoid it. In one particular blog of mine, a commenter totally missed my point. I don't know if she didn't get it or just didn't read the whole blog.

Gretchen

Jun 09, 2011 04:16 PM
Tammie White, Broker
Franklin Homes Realty LLC - Franklin, TN
Franklin TN Homes for Sale

Did you know Benjamin Franklin got his start in writing by re-writing the words of others. In a word, he "practiced" writing. Look at what that did for him.

Jun 09, 2011 04:31 PM