Ha ha -- made you look...

Whether writing a blog post, a classified ad for your listing, an Adwords Ad, or anything else - the headline is 90% of the equation when it comes to readership. A boring headline (whether relevant or not) could get 99% less traffic than a compelling headline.

I'm on vacation with my extended family, and my brother took a great picture of my daughter and me playing in the waves.  When I shared with my Facebook & Twitter friends, I used a headline something to the effect of "Playing at the beach in North Carolina" I got less than a dozen views in the first hour.

Then, I thought of a funny headline, so for kicks, I deleted the old post and reposted the picture. The jump in response rate was pretty interesting...

 

 

 

Even though it was the same exact picture, and only an hour after the first time I posted, it, my twitter post of "Getting my daughter high at the beach" got over 100 views before an hour had passed. (152 views after 77 minutes, to be exact.)

Next time you're writing an ad that you want to get as many eyeballs on as possible, it might be worth your while to do some pre-testing of a couple titles to see which is the most catchy. Below are a few ways to do your testing:

  1. Set up a BudURL.com account to track your clickthroughs, and post a couple different titles to your Twitter account with a budURL link pointing at your blog post.  If one gets a better clickthrough rate than the other, use that title & you're likely to get better readership over time.
  2. If you're testing website content, it might be worth pre-testing by running a couple different Adwords ads with different headlines. Whichever ad has the higher clickthrough rate (which Google automatically tracks for you) should be the winner. Take that ad copy, incorporate it into your web copy, and you'll likely see an increase in the number of website visitors that turn into leads! (For more information from me about Adwords as a traffic source, visit TripleYourTraffic.net.)
  3. Mturk.com is probably one of the best websites I've ever found for testing headlines.  In a nutshell, you can get instant feedback for as little as a few pennies per opinion.  If you're debating between a couple different headlines for your blog post, press release, or classified ad, "just mturk it"!  All you have to do is bid a few pennies per opinion, and ask "Which headline makes you more interested in reading the article that follows: "A) Cute picture of me & my daughter jumping at the beach or B) Getting my daughter high at the beach."  For a total of $2.50 (a nickel per opinion) -- 10 minutes later, you could have 50 "votes" from people around the united states who will chime in with what they feel is the more compelling headline...

Next time you want to get traffic to your blog, website, or phone - try adding a little extra zing to your title or headline... I bet you'll see a big difference in response rates.

 

 

 

 

 

 
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32 Comments on Getting My Daughter High at the Beach.

JUL
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281,288 Points Localism Sponsor Outside Blog

Your headline did catch my eye. Great picture and great traffic tips. Thank you!

I hope you'll remember me if you learn of anyone moving to "The OC" and I will do the same!

 Best regards.

Michael Caruso, Broker ABR ABRM CRB CRS GREEN GRI

2007 President, Orange County Association of Realtors           

 

3:44pm • #1
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Thanks for your tips. Very often we forget to track our success, thanks for the reminder!

3:46pm • #2
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Yes,  Your subject line...grabbed me.

Thanks for sharing,

Ginger

3:50pm • #4
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It just shows where the head of the public is, which does not fair for good for anyone with morals. You could have used any scenario of off color topic words and got the same result. But that doesn't give me a good feeling of how you think, in fact one could think your thoughts are in the gutter although that I'm sure you don't mean to convey.

I was used a headline here on A/R that read "too sexy for my shirt" which referred to me loosing my shirt in a deal. That didn't fair well here either and I actually thought it was good. It was the first time and the last for me because after much thought I could see where it could be misconstrued.

3:52pm • #5
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Good ideas!  I also opened it to see what your content was.  I thought this guy is probably going to jail. LOL

3:54pm • #6
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Great tip Joel.  As for the title of your picture, yep I noticed it, and thought "this should be an interesting play on words!" before checking out the picture.

3:56pm • #7
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oh, and by the way, quit working- you're on vacation, remember?

3:57pm • #8
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I LOVE that! Great example with hard numbers to back it up.

4:00pm • #9
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Michael - will do. I visit the OC area all the time and have many friends there.

Eileen & Alan - thanks for the complment.

Ginger - thanks. That was the idea.

Charles - Whose mind is in the gutter?  I was simply referring to the altitude my daughter and I got while jumping over waves at the beach. ;-)

David - Thanks!  I'm glad you got both a laugh and some information out of the deal.

Matt - Yes - I am on vacation, but the kids are taking naps from all of our playtime this morning, and I don't nap.  I'm fortunate enough that pecking away on my computer is my form of relaxation :-) So when will I see you next? NAR San Diego?

 

4:04pm • #10
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HI Joel, 

Ok, you got me, I was about ready to report you to the authorities! But on the subject, your headline is the most important part of a blog. Not only for catching eyeballs, but for catching the eye of the search engines too. 

-Lisa

4:05pm • #11
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Kim - thanks, I'm glad you liked it.  (As I was typing away - My Dad complimented me about how I can find a way to make a work analogy out of just about anything.)

4:05pm • #12
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I love this post! What a wonderful tip. You are bookmarked! Hmmm.........think I might go back and look at some of my headlines.

 

4:09pm • #13
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Great tips, Joel!  When I think about it.... well, duh!  Of course the headline is what grabs you.  Yours certainly grabbed me.  So thanks for the info and the post.  It's certainly something I'll think about from now on.

4:23pm • #15
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Joel...

The trick has always been to make a reader curious. Curiosity kills the cat ya know :)

TLW...ROAR!

4:30pm • #16
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Joel - Great post and tips!  You pulled me in with that headline.

4:35pm • #18
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Great photo!  And the headling does make a difference.  Thanks for all the great tips.....I didn't know anything about any of them.  Love it!

6:13pm • #19
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Joel - You are one of today's "catchiest headline award" winners.  I also use BudURL to track clicks, etc.  I know the guy who owns the company.

6:26pm • #20
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Hi Joel ~ These are new to me - thanks for the tips.

Liz

6:47pm • #21
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Joel... you make a good point... and I think it is really good when you are social networking. ...  ie : here on AR, through Twitter, and maybe facebook. I think you would have a better click rate on AR and Twitter, before facebook.  But I will disagree and say that I could do better by building an online presence by blogging, with rich key words.   I don't consider myself a pro at this... and twitter and several others are really new... but I bet I could get more leads off a well written blog with key words than I could with a catchy title. I guess it depends on your audience and what you are trying to accomplish. Again, I think you have some good tips, but this could be misleading to many new members on AR....  they might do catchy titles on here, but lack searches. Keeping in mind that your subject alone, with the right key words, could be powerful and get better searches... just my .02.

jeff belonger

9:48pm • #22
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Hi Joel -- It looks maybe like you were in the Outer Banks?  I've been there many times and what a fun place.  And, what an exceptional photo, what a treasure.  Thanks for the practical tips as well.

10:41pm • #23
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Your title definitely caught my attention, and you've given us a lot of good ideas to make sure that we've written catchy titles.

11:25pm • #24
JUL
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All great tips -- thanks for the advise and tips -- and have fun at the beach.

2:59am • #25
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You definitely got my attention, Joel. It was good that you actually explained why you used the title that you did for this blog entry. I didn't think your mind was in the gutter, but I did raise my eyebrow a bit when I read the title, and thought, WHAT????

8:13am • #26
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Wow. that is a strong stat. great way to illustrate your point.

12:25pm • #27

Well you got my attention! I had to check this out to see exactly how high your daughter got!!! I have two little girls, too!

1:12pm • #28
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Joel. thanks for the tips.  The title was great...and definitely caught my eye.

2:42pm • #29
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Thanks again for the kind words everyone.  I'd love to address each one of you, but as Matt said -- I am still on vacation ;-)

Jeff B - I agree with you 100%, and you're right - I could have pointed out that keywords are still important.  However, every post can't be completely keyword optimized. Otherwise, readership would suffer.  Although I agree that keywords are very important if you want to be found by the search engines, clickthroughs will suffer if a title tag looks spammy like this:

Denver CO real estate | Denver Metro homes for sale | Denver Colorado Realtor®

vs.

Instantly access thousands of Denver CO homes for sale. No registration required.

OK - kids are done with naps... Back to the beach ;-)

3:20pm • #30
JUL
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Joel.....  true, about how you tag something.  But your post was about catchy titles....  which in many cases can be handled differently. .. at least in my opinion.   thanks for the feedback.  And have fun on your vacation. I will be on one for 7 days at the end of this month.

jeff belonger

1:38am • #31
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Jeff: When I refer to "Title Tag" I'm referring to the title (or headline) that shows up in the SERPS, not tags themselves.  I think we're saying the same thing.

5:37am • #32

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