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‘Twas the month before Clutter-mas, and all through the house
Not a creature could find anything, barely even their spouse.
The stockings were hung by the chimney with greed,
hoping for things that they didn't even need.

The children were nestled with lumps ‘round their beds,
While visions of Mortal Kombat danced through their heads.
Mamma had her list made for quite a long time,
Clothing, perfume, and purses - all the latest designs.

When out on the lawn there arose such a clatter,
I sprang from the bed but tripped on a ladder.
How did that get there? Oops, I've forgotten!
Out of mind now that I've stepped on somethin' rotten!

I made my way through the debris on the floor,
And suddenly thought of what I needed some more . . .
I caught a glimpse of the new SLX30,
as my neighbour drove passed - it shure was purdy.

When much to my displeasure, who should appear,
but a little boy and his dog going through the garbage out rear.
He lifted the lid and it fell from his hand,
As he shouted with glee at what he thought was so grand . . .

"Look! Chicken and veggies! Plus hardly used sneakers!
And a portable stereo with tiny little speakers!
From the top of the pile, to the bottom of the can
Let's stash this away! Pack it away!" They took it and ran!

They went down the alley and got quite a-ways,
When suddenly they stopped and seemed in a daze.
The boy looked down at all the things in his sack,
Guilt crossed his face; then he turned to bring it all back.

And then, like a tickle, a thought entered my head,
like a light breaking forth from a place that was dead.
It started out dimly, and got bright in a minute,
it grew and it grew, until my heart was committed.

I looked - he was dressed in rags from his head to his foot,
and his clothes were all tarnished with ashes and soot.
An ill-fitted jacket he had flung on his back,
and I knew he was homeless, carrying that pack.

But his eyes, how they twinkled when he saw those treasures,
in our trash heap of all places - oh what measures!
I realized, then, that he doesn't get many meals,
my head fell, unable to imagine how that must feel.

Shame coursed through my veins as I thought of our stuff,
I couldn't take it anymore, so I shouted, "Enough!".
We have and we have, and then want even more,
we have run out of places to keep it and store.

He was skinny and alone, with no place to stay,
a tear spilled from my eye as I was convicted that day;
We weren't any happier because of these things,
It is what we can . . . give . . . that happiness brings.

He spoke not a word, but went straight to his work,
And re-filled the trash can, before he turned with a jerk.
But I was down the stairs quickly and flew out of the door,
I desperately shouted, "Wait! We have so much more!"

"We have clothes and food and things that we waste,
Please come in from the cold, let us make haste."
Instead he gently urged, then vanished from sight,
"Give a happy Christmas to all, and to all a good life."

 

An original adaption by Deena Cottingham
Based on, "'Twas the night before Christmas" by Clement C. Moore

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Clutter and "stuff" (especially around the holidays) is an on-going battle in our household. We've evolved and made changes to how we choose to celebrate, reward and purchase throughout the years--admittedly, on a rather small scale. I lay awake the other night thinking about this issue and got inspired to write this. 

We received the World Vision catalog in the mail, and my kids decided that we should all chip in for several gifts this holiday season (Canada, US & international). There are many other people and organizations, even in our own backyards, that are also worthy of being remembered.

Happy Thanksgiving to my American friends.

 

Deena Cottingham

GreenApple Staging & Images
Serving Calgary and Okotoks, Alberta

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65 Comments on 'Twas the month before Clutter-mas (Warning: Reading this may result in an uncomfortable feeling)

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24
2009
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Deena WOW! This made my cry. I am so blessed and I will share those blessing with many this holiday season.

7:49am • #1
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Oh, my Gosh, Deena! This is wonderful! I'm recommending it for a feature.

7:50am • #2
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Laura and Jackie, thank you for taking the time to read such a lengthy entry. The funny thing is, I had no idea where it was going to go, until it did. Then it made me cry, too!

7:55am • #3
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It really makes you think about how wasteful and selfesh we can be when there is such a need out there.

8:06am • #4
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I am guilty as charged. However, being overwhelmed can get in the way of us doing anything at all. Despite the cliche, I may not be able to do everything, but I can do something.

Thanks for stopping by, Larry.

9:10am • #5
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Deena... you're a blogging machine!  Don't think I didn't notice you passing me back there.  Guess I have some writing to do to catch up ;)

Bernice

12:40pm • #6
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Deena, Very inspirational post.  It makes me thankful for all I have and look at how wasteful we fortunate people can be.  My wife read it too, and now she's crying.

2:03pm • #7
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Great message in your version of Twas the night before Christmas! Have a great day!

3:11pm • #8
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Denna, WOW...That was so powerful, I just loved it.  It carries so many messages....And I think you posted it in the perfect group, thank you!

 

Chi Award for Deena by Feng Shui Long Island & New York

4:56pm • #9
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Deena - You captured a big part of the season here.  Very creative and well-written!

6:14pm • #10
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I relate...very good, thank you for sharing!

6:21pm • #11

Hey Xmas Star, what a bright light you are for sharing this with us. I didn't realize there was a poet in our PRES group!

6:43pm • #12
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Good Job Deena.  I love this poem.  It actually makes sense unlike the original one.  Thanks.

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Deena,

This was a wonderful post..felt a tear as I read to the end. Thanks for sharing and congratulations on the feature..very deserving!

6:48pm • #14

We are surely blessed,   and more so when we share.   This was outstanding.

6:59pm • #16
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I think it sounds like my house.  We don't need any more "stuff"  Though I did have fun accumulating it all

7:13pm • #17
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Hi Deena -- You are quite a talented writer.  The holidays should always remind us on how fortunate we are compared to a good percentage of the world's population. Having traveled to several poverty-stricken 3rd world countries, it's heart breaking to see the magnitude of differences between various cultures.

7:26pm • #18
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Deena! Congratulations, that was outstanding! Have tears in my eyes commenting here. Profound indeed. 

7:28pm • #19

That... was awesome!

Very cool... between your touching poem and turkey coming up in a few days I just might be starting to get into the holiday spirit after all...  I do have one closing I need to get through first, though.. something else to be thankful for!

Have a great holiday, and thanks for sharing your poem!

7:36pm • #20
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Very nice, thought provoking post and so appropriate for the Holidays! Thanks!

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Thanks for the reminder and if we all give rather than receive to those that need help it can make a profound difference. Happy Holidays!

7:54pm • #22
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Deenaa, That was fun. I'm starting to get into the Holiday Spirit!

Congrats on the feature.

7:54pm • #23
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Wow, thanks everybody for stopping by, taking the time to read my piece and posting such nice comments! I've been working all day, barely paying attention to my Blackberry and made it home just in time to throw a birthday dinner together for my oldest son (he's turning a big 20!).

Anyway, thank you for the featured post! This one was from the heart.

I'm so touched that my words touched many of you. It was just pure Inspiration. I had the first stanza in my mind, the rest just flowed and I didn't know where it was going 'til I got there!

Enjoy your holiday weekend, all!

 

8:07pm • #24

Great Post!  Wishing you & your family abundant joy this holiday season!

8:08pm • #25
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Tim, congrats on the closing! Hope all goes well for you with that.

Carole, Gary - you are both sweeties.

Bernice - just finding my stride.

Dana - thank you for the compliment!

Dorie, Marian, Connie, Chris, Al & Peggy - it tugged at my heart, too, when the little boy appeared on the scene.

Thanks for reading, Cheryl, Monique and Rich. I feel like the Walton's naming everyone, but I really appreciate the encouragement! Sorry to miss a few. I will have to ponder later.

I'd better get to work on a report now!

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Deena, That was beautiful and sadly, such a true situation.  I've always been a firm believer in "giving back".  Our entire adult family members gave to charity last year instead of buying for each other.  I loved it....we all did.  I had an elderly woman and she cried when I delivered her gifts.  Now THAT is the meaning of Christmas, to me :)

8:37pm • #28
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Isn't it amazing, how much many of us "needed"- great post. You articulated the upside to this downside beautifully. Thank you.

8:38pm • #29
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Deena ~ what a great verse and story!  Thanks so much for thinking it up and then sharing it with us.  I know the Canadian Thanksgiving has already passed (I went to college in Montreal) but have a nice weekend anyway ....

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You know lots of people I encounter are very stressed this holiday season.  I get it, we all have problems but maybe putting a smile on our face to hide the pain and treat all we come across with complete respect and pleasantries would go a long way too.  It would seem to be an easier way to deal with it.  Maybe this post is a great reminder that we should be counting our blessings on what we DO have rather than what we can't give or don't have.  Bueno!

8:56pm • #31

Wow Deena you must have been the one student who loved when the poetry assignments came due!  This was very well written and so inspirational.  Thank you for taking the time to write it. I think we've all enjoyed reading it!  Happy Thanksgiving!

8:58pm • #32

Deena,

Very well said. It is amazing how superficial and materialistic we have become as a society. I think it is our obligation to give back to the communities who give our business to us.

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This is incredible -- what a wonderful way to remind us of all the "stuff" and what it really means.. and what is important... this is amazing... well done!

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Hello Deena.  This poem was anointed and touched the heart, and was meant to be featured.  I believe it will take OFF from it's starting point in the Rain!  It should be published in booklet, poster, picture, and greeting card form and circulated throughout the Internet.  It should also be placed under the trees, and read during the Christmas season.

Get ready to start signing autographs!

9:38pm • #35
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Deena,

This is very well done.  And, definitely a good reminder of what Christmas should be about.

10:10pm • #36
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You all have added so much reflection. Diane, you've made me blush. It was inspired.

Lynne, you have a great attitude about seeing your connection to your community and that they have supported your business. That's almost profound, too!

So many others have alluded to the tough times we've all experienced this year, and even last. I can relate, as my Hubby (and Calgary in general) is tied to the oil industry. There were some big shake-ups. Not to minimize any of this--as it was hard, too--but sometimes still being able to give does help lighten the load.

I am thankful right along with you this weekend!

10:16pm • #37
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Terrific post!  I would encourage everyone also to contribute to Heifer International, which helps give hope to countless impoverished people around the world!

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Deena, this was a very good repost. It does cause one to consider what is really important and meaningful in life.

11:26pm • #39
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Touching, thoughtful, and obviously a lot of work! Thanks for the effort and have a happy turkey day!

11:52pm • #40
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Oh how beautiful.  We waste so much that others could really use.  Its sad.

12:31am • #41

Enjoyed reading through the poetry.  Have a great Thanksgiving.

12:34am • #42
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Deena, thank you so much for bringing the Christmas spirit here with your heartwarming remake of Twas the Night Before Christmas...you did such a wonderful job of inserting your own feelings and message and making it your own! Congratulations on the well-deserved feature! :)

Leilani

12:36am • #43

I think that we can all be this way at times. Great post and well thought out.

1:13am • #44
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It Christmas blogs are starting already -- aghhh!  But I'm glad that they featured this!  Pretty good read!

2:39am • #45
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Deena, what a phenomenal re-write. Amazing. Youa re very talented, and make some extremely important points. Wow. Thank you!

6:30am • #46
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Deena,

Thank you for the poem. I wasn't sure where you were headed in th beginning. You are sooooo right. We all have so much to be thankful for and sharing is a great thing. I am so blessed and have so much wonder in my life...a great wife...loads of amazing grand childre (their parents are great too :~). I think my wife and I will try to "gift" differently this year. I really like Heifer International. Thanks again for your time and creativity. Happy Thanksgiving!

7:07am • #47
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Thank you for sharing Deena.  Very thought provoking poem.  Something we should all look at in our lives.  Very important points.  Have a wonderful Thanksgiving!

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Well done, Deena.

This is thought-provoking and touching and a good reminder of what the season of giving should really be about.

 

 

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Thanks again for all the comments!

Emily and Rich, I had never heard of Heifer (they mustn't have a real Canadian presence). Anyway, I checked out the website and this is exactly the same kind of catalog we ordered from. My kids really wanted to get a water purification system and a moringa tree. We also decided to purchase school supplies in lieu of teacher gifts this year.

Anyway, what organization doesn't really matter as long as it is fiscally responsible and doing good work! I'm sure there are lots of others, too.

10:10am • #50
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Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family Deena.

10:21am • #51
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Carla - this wasn't so much meant to be a "Christmas" post, as much as it was meant to encourage us going into all the "gift giving holidays" that perhaps we can re-think it a bit this year.

What that means for me is practicing more restraint in what I buy. For sure, we are still exchanging gifts. But what I will try not to do is picking up those cute, useless little things to fill the stockings that will be junk in the bottom of a drawer in January. Or buying excessive numbers of gifts and food and candy! None of us need that much of that stuff. And, as I already mentioned, diverting some of our holiday money to where it can be put to much better use than filling up my house . . . again.

My sisters and I have also stopped exchanging gifts between our families. Instead, we do a fun activity together, on top of spending the big celebration days together. One year we took everybody to play laser tag, then had a pizza party where we handed out various "awards". What made it memorable is that we all committed the time to go together--something that's getting increasingly harder to do as the kids get older.

Small things, but it's something.

10:24am • #52
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Thanks everyone for stopping by, reading and commenting!

10:28am • #53

Beautiful reminder Deena, thank you!!!

11:20am • #54
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Good post -- and good thoughts for the holidays.

11:33am • #55
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Wonderful reminder of what the season is all about.  Forwarding to my kids.

1:45pm • #56
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Deena, that was really great and very true.  I watched 'Hoarders' on A&E yesterday and it really had an impact on me about all the 'stuff' we carry around and why it seems so important to us.  There are people that don't have food and are much worse off than ourselves but somehow they are happier. 

2:08pm • #57

Excellent....and unfortunately too real. Happy Holidays!

6:09pm • #58
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Thanks again for all the comments.

Mike - let me know what they think!

Lyn - I know what you mean. It is amazing how much security and self-worth "stuff" can give us. I have lived there, too. (Maybe still have one foot in the door!) It is also amazing what a burden feels lifted when we finally choose to let go of some of it!

Christopher - I know, it is too real.

6:17pm • #59
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Deana, what an awesome poem you have adapted.

Time to really think about why we celebrate and not get sucked in by the latest and the greatest.

10:27pm • #60
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Terrific Deana, I hope you don't mind if I re-blog this one.

6:48am • #61
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Missy - you said it! Not getting sucked in! Let's face it . . . marketing has worked.

Gabe - Thank you!

7:43am • #62
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27
2009
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Denna,

 I sent your post to all my agents, friends and family. One person CAN change the way things are done. Hopefully this will help us ALL share more with others. Thanks again!

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Deena - In our 'consumer' society it is easy to become jaded with the fact that we have more and live better than most people around the world.  Sharing and giving is really the true meaning to the holidays.

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Wow, Rich - that's inspiring! I can't believe how far beyond AR this is going!

Thanks Debbie. It can somehow become a heart-hardening thing, can't it? Better to realize our good fortune and spread it around.

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