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Writing that Works for You

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Services for Real Estate Pros with R. Michael Brown LLC Digital Marketing & Public Relations

Writing to market your products, services, and relationships is not as easy as you would think.  To be successful, you must answer, by quantitative measurement, these questions honestly:

Is anyone listening?  Are they acting on your words?  Do you get more qualified leads, traffic, sales, or relationships that matter?

I've always written to engage people as simply and personally as possible with the idea that a personal, helpful approach leads to a relationship.

Add Value
The point is to add value to someone else. Adding value in relationships leads to two-way influence. A sale can come from that relationship - or not. You might get something better... world changing advice, a great friend, a business partner, or more.

What do you Sound Like?
Many in marketing and the Social Media world write like they speak or sound like they do at work.

As William Zinsser says in his classic book On Writing Well, "Clutter is the disease of American writing. We are a society strangling in unnecessary words, circular constructions, pompous frills, and meaningless jargon." I would add acronyms to that list.
 
An Example: Speeches for Executives
When I was writing speeches for IBM and Motorola executives, I would ask to interview the speaker at their home. Most thought it strange but went along with it. The reason was to find out what they sound like when they are a real person. Not their work voice - their personal voice. A spouse or kids won't put up with corporate-speak. Those tech and "leadership" words make executives all sound the same at work and bore an audience.

Social Media has become a vortex of content.
Don't sound like everyone else. Sound genuine.

Big or "cool" words make you sound the same as everyone else on social networks.  Be yourself but practice the craft. The art of writing is re-writing.

Hire a Pro
If you aren't getting more leads and meaningful business relationships with your website, blog, marketing material, or on social networks, consider hiring a professional writer. Professional writers help your content break through the clutter. They know, and have practiced, how to reach your audience, where to reach them, and start relationships.  Hire a writer today. I can introduce you to some.

James Lyon
Vista Pacific Realty - Sacramento, CA

What?? I cant hear you, what was that. Just kidding around nice post.

 

Feb 06, 2010 03:50 PM
Lanre-"THE REAL ESTATE FARMER" Folayan
Samson Properties - Bowie, MD
I don't make promises.I deliver results.SOLD HOMES

Mike you are absolutely right. Write what works for you. Very well written blog that I will re-read again. Thanks for sharing. Have a great weekend. Great post.

Feb 06, 2010 03:59 PM
Lanre-"THE REAL ESTATE FARMER" Folayan
Samson Properties - Bowie, MD
I don't make promises.I deliver results.SOLD HOMES

Mike you are absolutely right. Write what works for you. Very well written blog that I will re-read again. Thanks for sharing. Have a great weekend. Great post.

Feb 06, 2010 04:00 PM
Elite Home Sales Team
Elite Home Sales Team OC - Corona del Mar, CA
A Tenacious and Skilled Real Estate Team

Adding value in relationships is what it is all about and not looking for a return.

Feb 06, 2010 04:43 PM
Dan Tabit
Keller Williams Bellevue - Sammamish, WA

Mike, I think the trick would be to hire someone who would be willing and able to speak in the voice of agent.  I can envision an agent using professionally prepared pieces building up their image, only to disappoint the consumer when they can't live up to the online persona. 

Feb 06, 2010 05:05 PM
R. Michael Brown
R. Michael Brown LLC Digital Marketing & Public Relations - Lake Placid, FL
Communication that increases sales!

Dan:  You're absolutely right.  That's why when I wrote speeches for executives, I went to their house to interview them. A writer has to get to know you, your mannerisms, the cadence of your speech, and vocabulary.  It's the same with real estate brochures, ads, news releases.  The more your material "sounds" like your brand and personality, the better the experience is for the reader that would "fit" with you, and the more likely that they will look to you for help.

It shouldn't be faked. Long term it doesn't work. You are what you are and success will only come from being genuine.  To help define your brand personality better, see: The Hero and the Outlaw: Building Extraordinary Brands Through the Power of Archetypes by Margaret Mark and Carol Pearson.  Once you know and have the mindset of your brand, it will come out in your writing.

Feb 07, 2010 05:39 AM
Mary Yonkers
Alan Kells School of Real Estate/Howard Hanna Real Estate - Erie, PA
Erie/PA Real Estate Instructor

Mike--Being part of ActiveRain has been a very valuable experience for me.  There are so many very knowledgeable members who are very willing to share what they know.

Feb 18, 2010 10:31 AM