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I cannot take credit for this work.  However, I can take credit for having a hand in creating its creator: my 15-year-old son.  I was so impressed when I was typing it up that I had to share.  He has given me permission to reprint it here.  It's a simple premise: a bike ride, told so beautifully.  Yeah, I'm a proud mama.

Canvas

 

The wind blows past my face, gentle and cool.
The asphalt below burns hot, but I never touch it.
The seat of my bike is hard and I slide forth with every push.
Canvas - a poem by Christopher ChavezAs we climb as one being, I feel its heart beat,
Apart from my own but present as the asphalt's heat.

Her tires slide to a halt and we part ways.
She waits, for my climb must be made alone.
The gravel crunches under my soles and the world gossips.
Ants march their rounds and the green lizard shouts silence.
The sky crests the top of the hill, the clouds watch my ascent.

The top is reached, my eyes are closed and the world speaks to me.
Through darkness, I feel the wind grasping my hand.
The sunlight meets my skin, a blind date of my arrangement.
Smells of the sand reach my nose.  They dance.
My eyes finally open and a flash of valley canvas appears.

These films play around me, my senses the projectors.
I am the canvas of the world.

- Christopher Chavez

 

Heather Chavez, Real Estate Virtual Assistance - Second Self Virtual Assistance: When There Isn't Enough of You to Go Around

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Emily Medvec
eXp Realty LLC - Santa Fe, NM
Broker | Realtor | Serving Santa Fe & Northern NM

How wonderful for you and thanks for sharing his remarkable spirit and gifts!

Jun 03, 2010 03:29 AM
Roy Kelley
Retired - Gaithersburg, MD

Thanks for sharing. You have every right to be a very proud mother. Look's like you have done a good job!

                 Blooming for bikers in Maryland.

Jun 03, 2010 03:29 AM
Jerry Murphy, CRS, SRES
Long Realty West Valley - Anthem, AZ
Anthem, Phoenix, and Scottsdale AZ Real Estate

Kudos to Christopher. As a fellow cyclist and sometimes writer I applaud his efforts.  Great job.

Jun 03, 2010 03:30 AM
Kathleen Daniels, Probate & Trust Specialist
KD Realty - 408.972.1822 - San Jose, CA
Probate Real Estate Services

Heather - Wow - Incredible.  He may be 15 years old ... his soul has undoubtedly lived many lifetimes.  This is very powerful ... thanks for sharing Christopher's work with the Active Rain community.  Have a blessed day!

Jun 03, 2010 03:31 AM
Heather Chavez
Second Self Virtual Assistance - Caldwell, ID
Real Estate Virtual, Assistant (928) 692-3235

Thank you for the compliment, Emily.  I was so impressed by his work when I typed it up for him.

Jun 03, 2010 04:04 AM
Heather Chavez
Second Self Virtual Assistance - Caldwell, ID
Real Estate Virtual, Assistant (928) 692-3235

You're sweet, Roy.  He loves riding his bike.  It's his first taste of freedom, being able to get away without having to rely on your parents. 

Jun 03, 2010 04:05 AM
Heather Chavez
Second Self Virtual Assistance - Caldwell, ID
Real Estate Virtual, Assistant (928) 692-3235

Thanks, Jerry.  Writing and riding bikes.  One's good for the body and one's good for the soul.  :)

Jun 03, 2010 04:06 AM
Heather Chavez
Second Self Virtual Assistance - Caldwell, ID
Real Estate Virtual, Assistant (928) 692-3235

Thanks, Kathleen.  As I said before, I was so impressed by the level of maturity in this poem.  And, even if you're not a bike rider, you can take away a nice positive message from it as well.

Jun 03, 2010 04:07 AM
Crystal Morris
Second Self Virtual Assistance - Bremen, GA

Looks like he'll be going great places with a mind like this. You should be extremely proud. How awesome.

Jun 03, 2010 04:25 AM
Heather Chavez
Second Self Virtual Assistance - Caldwell, ID
Real Estate Virtual, Assistant (928) 692-3235

I've always loved to write, Crystal.  I'm glad he enjoys it, too.

Jun 03, 2010 04:34 AM
Carra Riley & Declan Kenyon
Brokers Guild Cherry Creek Ltd - Westminster, CO
Helping people Transition at all ages!

Heather.....Your son has a depth of vision and emotion.  I think he has real talent.  Congrats to Christoper and of course to his proud mama!

cosmic cow

Jun 03, 2010 05:07 AM
Heather Chavez
Second Self Virtual Assistance - Caldwell, ID
Real Estate Virtual, Assistant (928) 692-3235

Thanks, Carra.  I was impressed with the layers you could read into it myself.

Jun 03, 2010 05:09 AM
Anna "Banana" Kruchten
HomeSmart Real Estate - Phoenix, AZ
602-380-4886

Heather - this is a wise old soul in the body of a teenager.  What an amazing kid - you must be a very very proud Mom!  Congrats to Christopher!  Has he entered poetry contests?  Our son did so in high school and was published several years in a row.

Jun 03, 2010 07:00 AM
Lee & Carol Barbour, REALTORS
Murphy and Hayesville, NC; Hiawassee, Blairsville, Blue Ridge GA - Murphy, NC
Mountain Living Team in Murphy NC and North GA

You should be proud of Christopher! He is very talented and should enter "Canvas" to some mountain biking magazines.

Jun 03, 2010 01:00 PM
Heather Chavez
Second Self Virtual Assistance - Caldwell, ID
Real Estate Virtual, Assistant (928) 692-3235

Thanks, Anna.  No, he has not entered any contests...yet.  But, I'll keep an eye out.  You never know.

Jun 03, 2010 01:03 PM
Heather Chavez
Second Self Virtual Assistance - Caldwell, ID
Real Estate Virtual, Assistant (928) 692-3235

I am very proud of him, Lee & Carol.  But for so many different reasons, not just this. :)  Thanks.  He's becoming quite an amazing young man.

Jun 03, 2010 01:04 PM
Bruce Walter
Keller Williams Realty Lafayette/West Lafayette, Indiana - West Lafayette, IN

Heather, you have every right to enjoy the success of your son's literary work!  It would be fun for you to send this to his recent English/literature teachers in school.  (good marketing as well)  ^_~

Jun 18, 2010 04:15 AM
Heather Chavez
Second Self Virtual Assistance - Caldwell, ID
Real Estate Virtual, Assistant (928) 692-3235

Thanks, Bruce.  I've passed along all the wonderful comments to my son for him to enjoy.

Jun 18, 2010 06:35 AM
Debbie Walsh
SHAHAR Management - Middletown, NY
Hudson Valley NY Real Estate 845.283-3036

Heather your son is an amazing writer.  Someone like that will be published one day.

Jun 29, 2010 08:38 AM