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If I Were A Poet......Sunset At My Cabin

By
Real Estate Agent with Karen Parsons-Fiddler, Broker 949-510-2395 BRE# 01494165

 

 

I was born with ordinary talents! Maybe if I took the time I could....

learn about phrasing, and be a poet
learn about perspective, and be an artist
learn about timing, and be a composer.

But I haven't taken the time!

 

I can't write about the golden color of the trees and sky. I can't explain how the light bounces off the water and into the clouds. I can't create the feeling I get watching the pine needles quiver in the breeze.

I'm not a poet!

I can't take my brush and put movement onto the canvass. I can't pull you into the moment with color and style. I can't blend the blue into the white into the golden and into the silhouette of the hills.

I'm not an artist!

I can't sit at a piano and make the music carry you away with the sun. I can't bring flute, trumpet and snares together to give you the feeling of the last flight of the mountain jay....or the first appearance of the bat.

I'm not a composer!

And as much as I wish I were.....I can appreciate the incredible beauty of tonight's sunset. The last few moments when the pine trees glisten a vivid green and then fade; the feeling of a perfect summer evening...and I'm so grateful to have this moment. That....I can do!

Comments(17)

Joan Whitebook
BHG The Masiello Group - Nashua, NH
Consumer Focused Real Estate Services

I think you captured "natural poetry"  I love this post!  Have a great weekend and enjoy all those beautiful sunsets!

Aug 13, 2010 04:01 PM
Kay Van Kampen
RE/MAX Broker, RE/MAX - Springfield, MO
Realtor®, Springfield Mo Real Estate

Great photo, Karen.  You described it better than I could.

Aug 13, 2010 04:04 PM
Kent Dills
Broker, Dills Real Estate - Bellingham, WA
Real Estate 817-495-8028, Bellingham, Washington

Uh huh!  But you have turned into a very good blogger my friend.  One with a true appreciation for others' talents too!

Aug 13, 2010 04:10 PM
Matt Grohe
RE/MAX Concepts - Des Moines, IA
Serving the metro since 2003

Karen: In your own way you seem to have described it well.

Aug 13, 2010 04:21 PM
Marchel Peterson
Results Realty - Spring, TX
Spring TX Real Estate E-Pro

Karen, It is a great photo but I wish the picture was bigger as my eyes are old LOL; does that rhyme.

Aug 13, 2010 04:23 PM
Ted J. Macy
Top Agents Atlanta Metro - Milton, GA

Karen, writiing is part are, part science and part knowing how to spell, or at least use spell check,

I thought your work today is Outstanding. keep up the great work and C U Tomorrow.

Stay Cool

Aug 13, 2010 04:24 PM
Robin Dampier REALTOR®
Coldwell Banker King - Hendersonville, NC
Hendersonville & Western NC Real Estate Source

Humm, you sound like a poet to me and well written.  I love the photo but agree with Marchel that a  bigger would have shown that beautiful off even more.  You are a poet of photography!

Sue of Robin and Sue

Aug 13, 2010 04:39 PM
Paige Walker
Paige Walker - Pineville, LA
Real Estate Guru - Alexandria Pineville LA

Karen you obviously have some great talents....writing and photography! I love that photo! Beautiful!

Aug 13, 2010 04:46 PM
Tony & Darcy Cannon
Aubrey and Associates Realty - Layton, UT
The C Team

Karen, great post, love the sunset picture!

Aug 13, 2010 04:48 PM
Jane Peters
Home Jane Realty - Los Angeles, CA
Los Angeles real estate concierge services

Oh, I don't know, this is pretty poetic to me.

Aug 13, 2010 04:49 PM
Debe Maxwell, CRS
Savvy + Company (704) 491-3310 - Charlotte, NC
The RIGHT CHARLOTTE REALTOR!

I'm with Jane--pretty awesome job for someone who professes NOT to be poetic!

Love the photo too!

Aug 13, 2010 04:57 PM
Jim Hale
ACTIONAGENTS.NET - Eugene, OR
Eugene Oregon's Best Home Search Website

You may not be a composer or a photographer or a poet by profession.

But your prose has a certain music to it.

 

I am convinced:

You're A Poet

And don't know it.

 

To coin a phrase......not as lovely as yours.

Aug 13, 2010 09:02 PM
Ginny Gorman
RI Real Estate Services ~ 401-529-7849~ RI Waterfront Real Estate - North Kingstown, RI
Homes for Sale in Southern RI and beyond

Karen, i think you said in pictures what you perhaps could put in words or on a canvas ...it's a great medium to share with all...what a scene

Aug 13, 2010 11:54 PM
Glenn Roberts
Retired - Seattle, WA

Sure you can. And you do it so well. Smashing picture from the cabin.

Aug 14, 2010 02:56 AM
Kat DeLong
Realty ONE Group Mountain Desert - Prescott, AZ
REALTOR

Well, I think you're a poet and just don't know it. :-)

Aug 14, 2010 03:18 AM
Anna "Banana" Kruchten
HomeSmart Real Estate - Phoenix, AZ
602-380-4886

I was wishing you could make it bigger - it's gorgeous Karen.  You are a poet of words!

Aug 14, 2010 05:41 AM
Karen Fiddler, Broker/Owner
Karen Parsons-Fiddler, Broker 949-510-2395 - Mission Viejo, CA
Orange County & Lake Arrowhead, CA (949)510-2395

I have issues with this picture. I think my camera took it in a format I can't expand...it gets fuzzy. Ugh.

Aug 14, 2010 05:49 AM