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 A word of warning -- press releases tend to be pretty boring.  No way around it.  But, we all need to write them, or have someone write them for us.  For print marketing, what better way to go than "FREE"!

Basically, a press release is a small, short news article that will get your name mentioned in the local paper.  Whenever you do something "remarkable", os even out of the ordinary, you should write a press release and send it to the paper.  For example, did you particiapte in the three-day breast cancer walk?  Did you just win an essay contest at HP (http://activerain.com/blogs/lisahillrealtor)?  Did you just sell your 100th home in the area?  Your 1,000th?  did you just get a new RE designation?  Send a press release!

When you write a press release, you need to keep several things in mind. 

1 - Always write in the third person.  "Scheffer attended...", not "I attended..."

2 - Chances are they will only print the first few paragraphs.  Write in the inverted pyramid style. In other words, put the most important information at the top, and the stuff that can be cut at the bottom.

3 - Keep paragraphs short and words simple.  Write for a typical high school senior.

4 - ALWAYS have someone who writes better than you do, proof read for you.  Mistakes only tick off editors, and your next press release may be put on the bottom of the stack, to be read later.

5 - Use an active headline.  "Scheffer attends...", not "Convention was attended by..."

6 - Remember to put your contact information in the press release!

Now, a better idea than just writing and submitting a dry press release?  Send the press release, then call the paper to see if they got it, and would they be interested in doing an entire article about it.  This works especially well for smaller papers, in smaller towns, or for larger papers with a local section.  In my area, the Kitsap Business News may be interested, as well as Bremerton Neighbors.

I put my example below. 

SCHEFFER AND BEAM ATTEND ANNUAL CONFERENCE

LAS VEGAS - Janice Beam and Marlene Scheffer of Realty Station recently joined more than 30,000 other Realtors from around the country for the 2007 National Association of Realtors Conference and Expo in Las Vegas.

The annual convention, called "the premier event of the real estate industry", presented more than 200 programs to help real estate agents thrive in a changing market.  Beam and Scheffer attended seminars on practical solutions for today's home sellers and buyers, marketing ideas, and new technology.

Beam and Scheffer also had many opportunities to network with other real estate professionals, expanding their already well-established referral network. 

"I find the information at these conventions vital to our success as real estate agents," Beam said.  "By being on the forefront of the changes in our industry, we will be ready to help our clients with any of their real estate needs."

For example, Scheffer has a blog about real estate in Kitsap County, and she feels that the convention has helped her offer her subscribers a better level of service as well as more information through her blog.  You can view the blog at http://www.kitsaphomes.blogspot.com/.

Beam and Scheffer are already planning their trip to next year's convention in Orlando, Florida.

Realty Station is a full service real estate company in East Bremerton.  Realty Station offers seller representation, buyer representation, and property management services in all of Kitsap County as well as parts of Mason and Pierce counties.  Beam and Scheffer can be reached by calling Realty Station at 360.377.5699.

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I hope this helps some of you begin getting just a little more publicity.  Much success!

 

 

 

 

14 Comments on Writing a Press Release

You rock!!  Great thoughts.  Jess Rankin, Pickering Group

check out my profile when u get a chance.

11/19/2007 01:52 AM by Pickering Group


Great ideas. Glad you got to go.

11/19/2007 02:34 AM by Kay Perry (Classic Realty/GMAC)


Some of my press releases that are "older than dirt" still rank really high in the search engines.  You hit the  nail on the head!

11/19/2007 05:38 AM by Chris Elizabeth Griffith ~ Bonita Springs Fl Real Estate (Keller Williams Elite Realty, Bonita Springs, FL)


It appears you do a great job of this Marlene! I have an easier time writing for someone else than my own releases. Joan Stewart of 'Publicity Hound' recommends many of the same points, but suggests to write at grade 7 level - to appeal to a wider group - apparently more people comprehend, as many are not great grammatical or literary students. I was surprised!

 http://www.publicityhound.com/

11/19/2007 06:30 PM by Deborah Pearce - Living Spaces - Kelowna Home Staging & Interior Design (Living Spaces Interiors & Home Staging)


Good tips, I dread writing press releases.plu

11/19/2007 06:38 PM by Christina Bennani (RE/MAX Colonial)


Kris, you crack me up!

Vincent, nothing new here, just a reminder of things I learned in college all those years ago.....

Chris, if I can get my "older than dirt" press releases to come up in any search engines, then I'm happy!

11/19/2007 08:40 PM by Marlene Scheffer, Realtor to Kitsap County, WA (Realty Station)


Deborah, I think they taught us to write to the tenth grade level because we want to write for the audience most likely to be reading the papers.  Most of those people have graduated from high school, or can at least read at a high school level.  Plus, they look for the middle ground so as not to offend the people that have master's degrees. 

Christine, just sit down and do it.  Get it over with.  I always do mine first thing, then let it sit for a bit.  When I come back to read it later, I'm usually surprised that it isn't terrible!

11/19/2007 08:45 PM by Marlene Scheffer, Realtor to Kitsap County, WA (Realty Station)


I was a Public Relations Director for two years and while yes press releases can be a bit boring, they are very professional and they do the job.  Good letter! 

11/19/2007 10:00 PM by Tyghre Collentine (Coldwell Banker Burnet)


That's good to remember Marlene  - I like your advice to to Christine - I do the same- funny the way that happens!

have a great week!

11/20/2007 01:04 AM by Deborah Pearce - Living Spaces - Kelowna Home Staging & Interior Design (Living Spaces Interiors & Home Staging)


Tyghre - cool name......  Thnks for the compliment.  We sent them out yesterday, now we wait to see if they get published.  Put a kill date of 11/30, so....

Deborah, that advice is how I get half my work done.  The other half gets done by deadline only, LOL!  I am trying to get better about working by routine.

11/20/2007 05:59 PM by Marlene Scheffer, Realtor to Kitsap County, WA (Realty Station)


Marlene-

Have you gotten any bites?

11/26/2007 04:30 PM by Alice Benjamin (Bernadette Interiors)


You know, Alice, with everything else that has been taking up my time, I haven't even thought about the press release since I sent it out.  I will have to make some phone calls over the next couple of days.....

11/26/2007 04:43 PM by Marlene Scheffer, Realtor to Kitsap County, WA (Realty Station)


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