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HAVE A CUP OF COFFEE ON US!!

Thank you once again for taking the time to read our newsletter (courtesy of The Smith Team). Please submit your response to the number of punctuation errors found in the cover letter and you will receive a Starbucks(R) gift card (First 50 people to have a CORRECT response). Simply leave your full name (we have your contact information) in the "comments" section below. Good Luck and Happy Holidays!!!

Have a cup of Coffee on us!! The Smith Team Keller Williams Realty Brazos Valley B/CS Real Estate

Posted by The Smith Team on 12/07/2007 03:37 PM

Comments (16)

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16 Comments on HAVE A CUP OF COFFEE ON US!!

DEC

2007

I love the coffee idea for the correct number of punctuation errors. I just got it in the mail today...and since I'll do anything for free Starbucks!
I counted 10.

Way to make lemonade!

Heather

I also counted 10 punctuation errors.

BTHO Penn State,

Gerald

DEC

2007

I counted 8 missing apostrophes, which I am assuming is due to the software error. There are a couple of other comma usage issues, but those are more subjective and not necessarily errors. There were 2 other typos ("thru" rather than "through" and "of" instead of "or").

Daniel

Howdy - I don't get your newsletter, but I noticed that "receive" is misspelled in the posting above. ;-) I like your promotional idea, though!!

- Ken

SInce I is an Aggie we are making since of what you did say in the newspaper. Is it just the air or?

DEC

2007

Thank you all you submitted responses this weekend!! The game is still on.... good luck... (oh, and thanks for the other corrections.. that must have been a software error too ;) !!!

Punctuation? What's that? If it cannot be written in a run-on sentence what's the point in writing it? LOL!

I counted 10 punctuation mistakes, but you actually had a spelling mistake as well. It should read (or if you have five or more......) not (of if you have......) Do I get bonus points!!!!!!

Have a great Christmas!

DEC

2007

New Address: 8789 CR 192 ,anderson TX 77830

I quickly counted 12 errors. Thanks

I counted 11 punctuaion errors. 10 in the newsletter and one more in the P.S. section. (Plus 2 spelling and 2 capitalization).

Kim Maass

I counted 10

There are 10 apostrophes missing. In your correction letter, "manor" should be "manner". I love the coffee idea. We have Starbucks in Ames, IA. :) Thanks for the birthday card you sent Eric last week - very classy.

DEC

2007

great idea - thanks for sharin!

I noticed 9 missing apostrophes. Although hyphens appear throughout the rest of the letter, I believe that "jam-packed" (second line of the letter) should be hyphenated.

That was fun, thanks for the challenge.

Toni

DEC

2007

Thanks to everyone for submitting your responses for this week... We enjoy reading everyone's comments and corrections...WOW, there must have been a major software issue, he he ;) !!! It has been a great week, let's get some more winners!! ***We'll be sending out the gift cards pretty soon...We'll keep in touch!!

DEC

2007

I guess I need the newsletter!

Ed Nailor - Charlotte Mortgage Loans

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