Keep your opinion to yourself when writing listing descriptions!   la quinta fabulous


Congratulations on your new listing!

Now it's time to write up that description and put it in the MLS.  You have seen the house, and you have good and bad feelings about it.  You have your opinions about the "amazing"  kitchen and materials used.  You may love the small "cozy" living room.  You may think the views are "fabulous!"   But when writing up your description... keep your opinions to yourself! 

Sweeping adjectives like “fantastic”, “spacious”, and “charming” are subjective and buyers aren’t looking for opinions, they’re looking for facts.

Don’t tell them the home is fabulous, show them that it’s fabulous by revealing it’s best features. Showcasing specifics using descriptive, straightforward terms like "Stone Fireplace",  Inlaid Marble,” “Granite,” “Spiral Staircase,” “Gourmet Kitchen with New Viking Appliances,  “Solid Bamboo Flooring” , "Fairway View",  will get you the most bang for your buck.

Vague terms may also be misinterpreted as a cover up. In a recent article about the secret language of listings, Real Estate and Lifestyle expert, Michael Corbett, offered the following reality check translation guide:

  • Charming = Small
  • Cozy = Even smaller


  • Needs TLC = Needs a remodel
  • Steps from pool = Can be seen as "discriminatory against handicapped "
  • Partial view = If you are standing on the roof, or you lean out the second-floor window
  • Handyman’s special = That’s a three-to-four-hammer job. You’ll be hunting down contractors for help with this one.


  • Up-and-coming neighborhood = Paint your fence with antigraffiti spray.
  • As is = There is something very wrong that the seller doesn’t want to fix.
  • Diamond in the rough = No jewel here—way too much work.


Don't take a chance that your description will be misinterpreted. 

Stick with the facts and you’ll generate legitimate interest and prevent wasted showings on buyers who don’t share your idea of an “amazing” kitchen.

 

                                                                            

Kathy Schowe   760.333.8886  

Intero Real Estate Services in Old Town La Quinta          

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10 Comments on Keep your opinion to yourself when writing listing descriptions!

JUL
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Kathy,

Good lists of adjectives.  My pet peeve is homes that boast granite counters and other luxuries...It is a grammatical error, a home is an inanimate object and cannot boast, and everyone's parent told them that boasting is a no-no!  LOL A

1:37pm • #1
1,445,013 Points 26 Featured Posts Outside Blog Called Shot Master

Excellent advice for listing agents.  Much of the time, comments on listings fail to provide the information desired by prospective purchasers.  

4:21pm • #2
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Thanks for the comments... and Roy-- thank you for the flower!  :-)  K

4:27pm • #3
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Kathy I had not thought of that before, but after reading your blog it makes sense.

4:44pm • #4
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Kathy, I would be careful about using those words to describe a listing.

6:27pm • #5
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I like the "up and coming neighborhood" what that really means, isn't that the truth.

7:29pm • #6
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Yeah I would not like to use those words either as all buyers now know what they mean. I think your suggestion is better.

8:41pm • #7
JUL
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Thank you so much Marti!  I am honored!  Kathy

11:43am • #9
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Oh brother.....now I am going to freak out everytime I have to input a new listing.  I hear what you are saying.  How about if I do this.........in this Realtor's opinion, the fews are fabulous and the living room is cozy?

1:29pm • #10


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