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How to Write Great Direct-Mail Letters for clients (step 1 of 5)

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Real Estate Agent with REMAX CREST REALTY WESTSIDE v60121

NewspapersNow that I've spend serious money researching addresses, owner names, their postal codes, and all that jazz... I'm not intent on sending useless letters to expensive addresses.

So, I armed myself with some tidbits about strong copy-writing and I'm sharing this with the rest of my community on AR.  

First, Your headline is the first, and perhaps only, impression you make on a prospective reader. Without a compelling promise that turns a browser into a reader, the rest of your words may as well not even exist. So, from a copywriting and content marketing standpoint, writing great headlines is a critical skill.

Here are some interesting statistics: On average, 8 out of 10 people will read headline copy, but only 2 out of 10 will read the rest. This is the secret to the power of your title, and why it so highly determines the effectiveness of the entire piece.

Remember, every element of compelling copy has just one purpose — to get the next sentence read. And then the sentence after that, and so on, all the way down to your call to action. So it’s fairly obvious that if people stop at the headline, you’re already dead in the water.

The better your headline, the better your odds of beating the averages and getting what you’ve written read by a larger percentage of people. This 11-part series will provide you with concrete guidance that’ll have you writing better headlines in no time. 

 

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Bob Miller
Keller Williams Cornerstone Realty - Ocala, FL
The Ocala Dream Team

Hi Jark, we agree and sometimes spend as much time on the title of our post as the post itself.

Aug 08, 2012 07:38 PM
Wallace S. Gibson, CPM
Gibson Management Group, Ltd. - Charlottesville, VA
LandlordWhisperer

I use my blogs as direct-mail pieces to area landlords 5X annually - I have a farming area of 400 property owners who do not live in the area!

Aug 08, 2012 08:35 PM
Jark Krysinski *PREC (Personal Real Estate Corporation)
REMAX CREST REALTY WESTSIDE - Vancouver, BC
TeamYVR Team Leader, BA,ABR,IRES,IMSD,LLB

Hi Bob & Wallace thanks for your comments.  I've been picking about 5-6 strata buildings in my area, for which I have websites built, and am farming these to the residents saying "hey I have a site for your building, if you need anything at all, don't hesitate to call because I've got all the stats and docs on it already."  I'm hoping (optimistically) that this will bring results after my first few mailouts.

Aug 10, 2012 08:07 AM