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Real Estate Self-Promotion - How's your message machine voice?

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Real estate self-promotion - How's your message machine voice?

Real estate clients today can get acquainted with you before you have any personal contact. They read your agent bio, they look at your website to see how you present your listings, they read your blog and get a sense of your personality.

And then... they either call or email asking you to call them. So the phone becomes your first personal contact, and your voice may be the deciding factor in whether or not they choose you as their agent.

In this busy world, sometimes it takes a little "phone tag" before people actually connect, so you might be leaving a message for your future client.

I got to thinking about message machine voices because of a message that came in yesterday. man on telephone

When I hit play I heard a woman say "Hi, I'm......." Later on I caught the words "short survey" and deleted the message. Afterward I wondered who she was and what company she represented.

She was one of those people who speak in what I term a "machine gun" voice. (I know - that reference is probably not politically correct these days, but it still fits.) Their words come one at a time in short little clipped off bursts.

My brain just won't follow that, so I have no idea what those people are saying. Usually the speaker is a woman - perhaps mens' deeper voices don't lend themselves as well to this kind of "speed talking."

When a client or would-be client leaves this kind of message I simply hope that I'll be able to understand the phone number to return the call. (Sometimes my phone records it, and sometimes not. Don't know why.) Of course I don't look forward to the call, because it's embarrassing to have to keep asking people to repeat themselves.

But... quite often the person who left the impossible message speaks normally in conversation.

Other phone voices can also be off-putting.

Some people sound meek and unsure of themselves. They speak so softly that some of their words disappear. When it's a would-be client I replay the message several times trying to catch their name and phone number. Sometimes it works, sometimes not. That bothers me - I don't like people thinking I didn't return their call on purpose.

Some use enough volume, but mumble. I often get their names wrong, and sometimes their phone number too. Google can help with the phone number if I get the name and perhaps the city. Again, it bothers me when I simply can't return a call.

Some come on too strong. Like the satellite salesman who left a message yesterday. I guessed that I wouldn't like him if I met him in person.

Some sound arrogant. Yuck. I'll return the call, but will usually decline the work.

And then there are the callers I love...

They speak clearly in a friendly tone, state their name and the reason for the call, and repeat their phone number twice.

(Nothing to do with voice, but I also don't enjoy those messages that are simply a name and phone number. Why should I return this call when it might be someone trying to sell me a warranty on my refrigerator?)

Comments(27)

John G. Johnston
John G. Johnston & Associates, LLC - Westcliffe, CO
An Exclusive Buyer's Agent ~ Westcliffe, CO

Marte  So now you are telling me that I need to hire you to record my voice message!  Can't we just leave it that you wrote a great bio for me?

Apr 24, 2013 05:57 AM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

John - No way! I have enough trouble recording my own messages. And besides, I don't think we sound alike at all.

Apr 24, 2013 06:10 AM
Anonymous
Ashey Ouellette

I appreciate the reminder. I like to update my message, I smile when I record any message and I remind people to leave their number twice.

Apr 25, 2013 12:11 AM
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Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Ashey - A smile and a positive attitude always come through in your voice. Funny how that works!

Apr 25, 2013 02:56 AM
Debbie Reynolds, C21 Platinum Properties
Platinum Properties- (931)771-9070 - Clarksville, TN
The Dedicated Clarksville TN Realtor-(931)320-6730

Marte, It takes all kinds I guess. I want to hear the name and number twice, slowly and then what it is in reference to. That is just courtesy.

Apr 27, 2013 10:45 PM
Patricia Kennedy
RLAH@properties - Washington, DC
Home in the Capital

Hey, Marte!  I included this post in today’s Last Week’s Favorites.  Please drop by and check it out, and and enjoy the rest of your weekend!

Apr 27, 2013 10:50 PM
Kristin Johnston - REALTOR®
RE/MAX Platinum - Waukesha, WI
Giving Back With Each Home Sold!

I had to stop by since I saw your post on Patricia's wrap up....I can see why she included it! Thanks and have a great day!

Apr 27, 2013 11:11 PM
Kat Palmiotti
eXp Commercial, Referral Divison - Kalispell, MT
Helping your Montana dreams take root

What a great reminder.   I always repeat my telephone number and try to speak relatively slowly because I can't stand trying to decipher speedy/faint/garbled messages either and don't want someone frustrated with me!

Apr 27, 2013 11:20 PM
Kathy Streib
Cypress, TX
Home Stager/Redesign

Marte- I may not always comment on your posts, but I do read them because they are always "content rich."  You help us be what we hope to be as a professional!

Apr 27, 2013 11:37 PM
Rebecca Gaujot, Realtor®
Lewisburg, WV
Lewisburg WV, the go to agent for all real estate
Hi Marte, good subject for a post.... Now I will go and check out my message on my phone to ensure it sounds great. I repeat my number twice when leaving a message. Sometimes I have to replay a message 3-5 times to understand a caller.
Apr 28, 2013 12:59 AM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Debbie - I do too. Last week I had a message that was just a name and phone number. I wasn't sure I wanted to return the call.

Patricia - Thank you! I will go check out the others.

Kristin - Thanks, I wish you a great day as well.

Kat - It's awful when you listen 2 or 3 times and still can't get the name and number.

Kathy - Thank you. I learn a lot from your posts as well.

Rebecca - I do that too. Sometimes I think I sounded really dumb when I leave a message, but I make sure to repeat my number twice - and slowly.

Apr 28, 2013 02:27 AM
Maureen Bray Portland OR Home Stager ~ Room Solutions Staging
Room Solutions Staging, Portland OR - Portland, OR
"Staging Consultations that Sell Portland Homes"

Marte -- those callers who just leave a name and number with NO message whatsoever just strike me as being rude ... I mean, they could at least say they're interested in xxx and leave it at that!

Apr 28, 2013 03:36 AM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Maureen - I agree. It might be a potential client, or it might be someone wanting to sell you SEO services - or a warranty on your washing machine.

Apr 28, 2013 03:55 AM
Deborah Byron Leffler BzyBee Real Estate Lady!
Keller Williams Realty Boise - Nampa, ID

Oh boy....all of those are my pet peeve too!!!  I had an insurance guy call me from a leads type of a group I am ....I feel bad that I didn't call him back...but after listening to his message 3 times....and still not catching his name....I didn't call back.....I deleted!    Uuggghhh

Apr 28, 2013 09:02 AM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Deborah - It's frustrating, and I hate that someone who might need my services thinks I just didn't bother to return their call. If I can catch the name I'll Google it. That works if they have an unusual name, but sometimes I'm amazed when a name that sounds unusual to me turns out to be VERY common in other areas of the country. And of course, I never know if I'm getting the spelling right.

Sometimes I can catch the number but not the name - and if they haven't left the purpose of the call I'll Google that to get an idea of who they are. It works part of the time.

Apr 28, 2013 09:38 AM
William Johnson
Retired - La Jolla, CA
Retired
Hi Marte, I have no real idea what I sound like but I learned something a long time ago. To smile when your talking either for a recorded voice or when answering any call. I have had people say, you must liked that call and when asked why they thought that, the reply would be "because you are still smiling".
Apr 28, 2013 01:21 PM
Praful Thakkar
LAER Realty Partners - Burlington, MA
Metro Boston Homes For Sale

Marte, communication is the key - and that's the 'root cause' of all success (or decline).

And you have done a great analysis on people's voice messages! Now I'll listen to these messages differently. Thanks for sharing your expertise.

Apr 28, 2013 03:35 PM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

William - A smile really does change everything. Not just how you sound - but how you feel.

Praful - Isn't it strange - people are talking and making noise all the time - but very often not communicating at all. I think it's the key to success in all of our relationships - not just in business.

Apr 28, 2013 06:50 PM
Brad MacKenzie
Brad MacKenzie - Duxbury, MA
Turning Houses into Homes on the South Shore

I agree. I appreciate the golden rule for things like this, and I give my name, number and reason for my call.

Apr 29, 2013 04:20 AM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Brad - Funny how that Golden Rule is a useful guideline for everything we do in life.

Apr 29, 2013 04:51 AM