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Traverse City Complimentary Virtual Tour

This is a recent sales letter that was written for one of our dealers in Northern Michigan. I really like the way this one came out. Looking forward to any comments/suggestions/feedback from the AR community. I will be posting a few other sales letters that we recently wrote for Beta testing in select areas of the country. Please feel free to tell me your opinions.

Thanks!

Traverse City Michigan

We Want to Give YOU
a Complimentary
INTERACTIVE 360 VIRTUAL TOUR!

Are we crazy??

No… We are just excited to show off our uniquely powerful online marketing tools for 2008…

...and what better way to announce a Grand Opening!

If you are like most business owners or real estate agents, you have already tried some form of online marketing. Maybe you have a website or an online ad, but so does everyone else. How do you set yourself apart in this competitive market?

How do you keep the online YOU looking your best and working for you 24/7? How exactly do you get more eyes on YOUR business and increase traffic to your website?

My name is Jason LaVanture and almost 9 years ago I started an internet marketing company named Real Tour Vision that has since grown to become the largest virtual tour company in the World with providers in 26 countries and growing.

And, I started it right here in Traverse City, Michigan.

Now years later, I have teamed up with local 35 year photography expert, Jim Blue, formerly of local retail store Blue Photo Co Inc, to offer this incredible technology through BlueLaVaMedia right here in Northern Michigan. With our combined experience in photography and online marketing, we will make your business and listings stand out, drastically increase the traffic to your website and ultimately increase your referral base.

Whether you are a real estate agent or a business owner looking for the most affordable and proven marketing strategies, BlueLaVaMedia will help. Give us a call right now for an over the phone web based presentation or setup an appointment for an in-person presentation. We have product that you have NEVER seen before.

BlueLaVaMedia is fully insured and Lock Box certified!

Visit http://www.bluelavamedia.com/ now and learn about our state-of-the-art marketing tools.

When you contact us, be sure to ask about our virtual tour giveaway!

Get started maximizing your online exposure today!

Jason LaVanture & Jim Blue
BlueLaVaMedia, a Division of LaVaWorks LLC
Traverse City Virtual Tours
Toll Free (877) 941-TOUR (8687)
Local 231-946-1360

P.S. – Join us on http://www.facebook.com/ (Search Group TAAR)

That's it folks... so what do you think? like it? hate it? tell me what you think and whether or not you would respond to the offer if you were in Traverse City.. because (blush) you are our target market... so who better to ask ;)

Posted by Cheryl Waller National Marketing Manager on 02/27/2008 01:21 AM

Comments (3)

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3 Comments on Traverse City Complimentary Virtual Tour

This looks good to me. Now if you can just get some agents from Grayling or Northern Michigan to join AR.

02/27/2008 01:30 AM

by Susan Peters - Seattle Realtor/Staging Specialist (Re/Max Mutual Realty)

Hi Susan,

Funny that you mention that. He actually plans on introducing all of his agents/clients to AR to help them with their marketing (amongst other marketing tips he plans to share)...

02/27/2008 03:38 AM

by Cheryl Waller National Marketing Manager (Real Tour Vision)

Ok... since you invited comments and I love playing with words & writing ads, here is one of my impressions for the intro of this letter:

We Want to Give YOU
a Complimentary
INTERACTIVE 360 VIRTUAL TOUR!

- too many words in the opening

-too many big words (complimentary & interactive)

-We Want to Give YOU sounds sort of passive & weak--- not action-packed (or maybe I associate 'complimentary' with breakfast in the morning), so doesn't grab or give a punch (ie HERE IS YOUR FREE TOUR! or THIS ONE IS ON US)

When you contact us, be sure to ask about our virtual tour giveaway! - this sounds like an overload of instruction; this seems like a "task"... can you make this easier? tell them right after the opening, ie HERE IS YOUR FREE TOUR CODE (or 'press here' if internet mailing, etc.) They might not read all the way to the place where you tell them how to get the free tour. Just some thoughts... (and it does sound very cool!)

03/01/2008 09:43 PM

by Mara Hawks, REALTOR®, HOMES FOR SALE in Auburn Alabama Real Estate - Lee County (FIRST REALTY)

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