This is the first of 17 entries I've written for the "Mortgage Creative Writing Challenge".

The traditional Japanese Haiku format follows the syllable pattern of 5 - 7 - 5.
The writer might bring in a word or concept (kiga) that evokes memories of a particular season.
The last line is usually in sharp contrast (caesura) to the body of the poem.

I chose to backdrop each poem with a traditional Japanese watercolor or photograph. Some in contrast, others not.

To the Haiku purist the following might not be proper in the strict sense. Your latitude is appreciated.

Mortgage Haiku #1

Why 17? It is the total number of syllables in a Haiku, no other reason.
Why separate them? Each one should be read and engaged individually.

You can find my whole series here: Mortgage Haiku

Can You Haiku?

 


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13 Comments on Zen and the Art of Mortgage Haiku (1 of 17)

MAR
18
2008
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I love Haiku!  It relieves stress...

...markets bounce wildly

...uncle Ben puckers tightly

...Free money anyone?

10:55am • #1
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Rich - So, I struggle for hours and hours and then you pop in and lay down something as sweet as that?  I'm toast!  LOL

 

 

Can You Haiku?

 

10:59am • #2
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Nice Entry Mueller

Only sixteen more to read

Clever girls love toast :) 

11:33am • #3
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I will be back friend

See you on the twenty eighth

Mortgage Maniac

11:36am • #4
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Mike...that image, those words...very good. Keep 'em coming.

11:43am • #5
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Jennifer and Jason - Thanks.  Let's get it on!

Joey - It's truly a stark contrast to your first entry isn't it?

Eleanor - Thanks for the phone call.  There is only the one Haiku there for now.  In time there will be all 17 - but as I said, I'll post one in the AM, one in the PM.  What a warm and fuzzy feeling I get when someone calls me (even if I am on the phone and can't it goes to voicemail!)  Thank you!

 

 

12:16pm • #6
clever
1:11pm • #7
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Love it!  You are quite the creative guy this morning :)
1:54pm • #8
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 Belly Laugh Belly Laugh Mike

You are out of freaking control! Where does all this creativity come from.......?????

I kneel down on one knee for your creativity.





2:07pm • #9

Knowledge of mortgage

To each a different goal.

Mike tells us how to!

Thanks Mike for the fun and informative posts

5:49pm • #10
MAR
24
2008

That was funny... now I have to read the whole series.  good job!

 

3:44pm • #11
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Bailout for the Bear.

Smiling, Paulson bends over.

Baghdad Bob's cousin.

(remember Baghdad Bob?  City is surrounded and he gives a press conference, "The infidel is on the run.")

4:22pm • #12
MAR
25
2008
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Can't think straight - not now

Goddaughter's sister sneezed in

the face of my wife.

3:30pm • #13

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