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This is the 3rd of 17 entries I've written for the "Mortgage Creative Writing Challenge".

The traditional Japanese Haiku format follows the syllable pattern of 5 - 7 - 5.
The writer might bring in a word or concept (kiga) that evokes memories of a particular season.
The last line is usually in sharp contrast (caesura) to the body of the poem.

I chose to backdrop each poem with a traditional Japanese watercolor or photograph. Some in contrast, others not.

To the Haiku purist the following might not be proper in the strict sense. Your latitude is appreciated.

Mortgage Haiku #3

Why 17? It is the total number of syllables in a Haiku, no other reason.
Why separate them? Each one should be read and engaged individually.

You can find my whole series here: Mortgage Haiku

 


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7 Comments on Zen and the Art of Mortgage Haiku (3 of 17)

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19
2008
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I just read your response to my question about the definition of a Haiku, on your last post. Well, now I'm officially more confused than ever, but I really like the photo in this one. LOL 

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20
2008
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This is oh so true! You're very expressive!!
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2008

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