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This is the 4th of 17 entries I've written for the "Mortgage Creative Writing Challenge". 

The traditional Japanese Haiku format follows the syllable pattern of 5 - 7 - 5. 
The writer might bring in a word or concept (kiga) that evokes memories of a particular season. 
The last line is usually in sharp contrast (caesura) to the body of the poem.

I chose to backdrop each poem with a traditional Japanese watercolor or photograph.  Some in contrast, others not.

To the Haiku purist the following might not be proper in the strict sense.  Your latitude is appreciated.

Mortgage Haiku # 4

 

Why 17?  It is the total number of syllables in a Haiku, no other reason.
Why separate them?  Each one should be read and engaged individually. 

You can find my whole series here:  Mortgage Haiku

 

 


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5 Comments on Zen and the Art of Mortgage Haiku (4 of 17)

MAR
19
2008
420,091 Points 71 Featured Posts Outside Blog Called Shot Master
You continue to do good work on these Mike.  Like your new 'The Haiku Guy' spirit:-)
6:11pm • #1
289,090 Points 66 Featured Posts Outside Blog

Thanks Buddy!  You may be needed to help decipher the next one (tomorrow).  It may be a little too out there.

Did you notice what happens when you click on The Haiku Guy? 

 

 

6:14pm • #2
420,091 Points 71 Featured Posts Outside Blog Called Shot Master

I'll be glad to try to help decipher anything, I'm good at that once in awhile:-)

Until I clicked, no......quite clever though:)

7:51pm • #3
591,941 Points 22 Featured Posts Outside Blog Attended Rain Camp

AAARRRRGGGHHHH! You're killing me!

crazy

And I just saw your not to Jason, about tomorrow's post. I suspect my problem in understanding this Haiku thing is because I tend to see everything in black and white/right and wrong.

You would have been better off to just tell me they were random poems. LOL 

11:14pm • #4
MAR
20
2008
164,399 Points 10 Featured Posts
This is telling it like it is. So few really understand the beating you're all taking. It's really too bad :(
12:21pm • #5

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