This is the 7th of 17 entries I've written for the "Mortgage Creative Writing Challenge". 

The traditional Japanese Haiku format follows the syllable pattern of 5 - 7 - 5. 
The writer might bring in a word or concept (kiga) that evokes memories of a particular season. 
The last line is usually in sharp contrast (caesura) to the body of the poem.

I chose to backdrop each poem with a traditional Japanese watercolor or photograph.  Some in contrast, others not.

To the Haiku purist the following might not be proper in the strict sense.  Your latitude is appreciated.

Mortgage Haiku # 7

 

Why 17?  It is the total number of syllables in a Haiku, no other reason.
Why separate them?  Each one should be read and engaged individually. 

You can find my whole series here:  Mortgage Haiku

 haiku? You can?

 


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7 Comments on Zen and the Art of Mortgage Haiku (7 of 17)

MAR
21
2008
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I'm confident they will Mike, in due time....
9:57am • #1
MAR
23
2008
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Again... what are 1003's??
12:24am • #3
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I'm with Jennifer. What are 1003's? But I have officially given up on figuring out this Haiku thing. Woo Hoo Sally should be here. 
5:10pm • #4
MAR
24
2008
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Jennifer and Lisa - a 1003 is the name of the form that is a mortgage application.

It's pronounced "Ten - OH - Three"

 

 haiku? You can?

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