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This is the 13th of 17 entries I've written for the "Mortgage Creative Writing Challenge". 

The traditional Japanese Haiku format follows the syllable pattern of 5 - 7 - 5. 
The writer might bring in a word or concept (kiga) that evokes memories of a particular season. 
The last line is usually in sharp contrast (caesura) to the body of the poem.

I chose to backdrop each poem with a traditional Japanese watercolor or photograph.  Some in contrast, others not.

To the Haiku purist the following might not be proper in the strict sense.  Your latitude is appreciated.

Mortgage Haiku # 13

Can you Haiku? 

Why 17?  It is the total number of syllables in a Haiku, no other reason.
Why separate them?  Each one should be read and engaged individually. 

You can find my whole series here:  Mortgage Haiku

 

 

2 Comments on Zen and the Art of Mortgage Haiku (13 of 17)

Bless you Mike, this one brought peace to me...maybe it was the backdrop.

03/25/2008 11:36 PM by Rich Sweum (Homestead Mortgage)


Rich-

Thanks.  Visually, this is one of my favorites!

 

 

 

03/28/2008 12:49 AM by Mike Mueller (Mike Mueller, Inc.)


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