This is the last of 17 entries I've written for the "Mortgage Creative Writing Challenge".    Whew!

The traditional Japanese Haiku format follows the syllable pattern of 5 - 7 - 5. 
The writer might bring in a word or concept (kiga) that evokes memories of a particular season. 
The last line is usually in sharp contrast (caesura) to the body of the poem.

I chose to backdrop each poem with a traditional Japanese watercolor or photograph.  Some in contrast, others not.

To the Haiku purist the following might not be proper in the strict sense.  Your latitude is appreciated.

Mortgage Haiku # 17

Can you Haiku? 

Why 17?  It is the total number of syllables in a Haiku, no other reason.
Why separate them?  Each one should be read and engaged individually. 

You can find my whole series here:  Mortgage Haiku

 Can you Haiku Too?

 

3 Comments on Zen and the Art of Mortgage Haiku (17 of 17) Whew!

WOW! This is a terrific ending! I am sorry to see this series conclude, but you did so very eloquently. This message is very hopeful. I could use a little hope right now.

03/28/2008 09:27 AM by Portland Oregon Real Estate Broker * Jennifer Bukaty * (RE/MAX equity group, inc.)


Creative yes

Cutesy too

Mortgage helpful

Not a clue

Haiku

03/28/2008 10:27 AM by William J Archambault Jr (The Real Estate Investment Institute )


I love this one, very clever and gives a good volume of depth to your readers.  I hope these Haikus are visible to your prospective borrowers.

04/01/2008 10:43 AM by Rebecca Levinson-R.E. Blogger/Connect2Agent (Connect2Agent)


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