This is the last of 17 entries I've written for the "Mortgage Creative Writing Challenge".    Whew!

The traditional Japanese Haiku format follows the syllable pattern of 5 - 7 - 5. 
The writer might bring in a word or concept (kiga) that evokes memories of a particular season. 
The last line is usually in sharp contrast (caesura) to the body of the poem.

I chose to backdrop each poem with a traditional Japanese watercolor or photograph.  Some in contrast, others not.

To the Haiku purist the following might not be proper in the strict sense.  Your latitude is appreciated.

Mortgage Haiku # 17

Can you Haiku? 

Why 17?  It is the total number of syllables in a Haiku, no other reason.
Why separate them?  Each one should be read and engaged individually. 

You can find my whole series here:  Mortgage Haiku

 Can you Haiku Too?

 

3 Comments on Zen and the Art of Mortgage Haiku (17 of 17) Whew!

MAR
28
2008
8 Featured Posts
WOW! This is a terrific ending! I am sorry to see this series conclude, but you did so very eloquently. This message is very hopeful. I could use a little hope right now.
9:27am • #1
153,996 Points 18 Featured Posts Outside Blog

Creative yes

Cutesy too

Mortgage helpful

Not a clue

Haiku

10:27am • #2
APR
01
2008
114,350 Points 29 Featured Posts Localism Sponsor Outside Blog
I love this one, very clever and gives a good volume of depth to your readers.  I hope these Haikus are visible to your prospective borrowers.
10:43am • #3

This blog does not allow anonymous comments

 
Rainmaker_large

Mike Mueller

Walnut Creek, CA

More about me…

Tech and Social Media Consultant

Email Me

Technology for RE


Meet me at
REBarCampSF
August 4th, 2009


Meet me at
REBarCampSF
October 8th, 2009


Did you know this site is available on the kindle?

Get this on your kindle!
(Click on image)


Are We Connected on

are you following me?
Are We Friends Yet?
It's not just a Rolodex
You've got to see this...
Feed Your Reader

Honored to be
Featured in Alltop



Social Media Help?
I can help!
Social Media can be a little overwhelming. Getting it right is critical. If you need help,
just ask.

Shoot Local Video?
Your videos on Your map!
Put it on the Map!

Bay Area Social Media Group

The Breast Cancer Site

TwitterCounter for @mikemueller


Connected to Site Meter Wonderful ActiveRain Members!

Join our Support Group!



Links

Archives

RSS 2.0 Feed for this blog

Find CA real estate agents and Walnut Creek real estate on ActiveRain.