The original advert:
The www.reallysold.com rewrite
Hawks Soar High (over these 85 acres)
Like Alice in Wonderland you could get lost amidst these amazing gardens and lawns in what is really a lush and private oasis. The care shown externally don’t stop there though with the internal features of this three bedroom home quite lovely indeed from the ambiance of the extensive use of timber to the convenience of the internal garage. Those looking for an element of self-sufficiency will be pleased to note the ample water to the property through the large dam and watering network along with the veggie garden and orchard for the green thumbs among us. Want more? How about 5 acres of open pasture, full protection from furry predators with netting fence and gorgeous bushland with trees stretching to the skies. Let this home be your fairytale ending.
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