The original advert:

The www.reallysold.com rewrite

Heaven in a High Rise

Have your buddies around to Budd’s beach – you’ll have all the space you need because this apartment offers size and more! With three spacious bedrooms, large sunny timber entertaining deck and 2 other balconies all your living needs are met. For comfort – how about a new kitchen and two full renovated tiled bathrooms? And for the cherry on top you get access to secure parking, the pool, jetty/pontoon and a sweet North / East aspect. Now the only question is – will you move in and enjoy it yourself or will it form part of your investment portfolio?

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*Please note that the rewriter has not been asked to rewrite this advert for commercial purposes and is doing so merely to show you what www.reallysold.com can do