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Lessons learned from 7 years of blogging Purple Cows & Pink Elephants

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Managing Real Estate Broker with LoKation Real Estate

Lessons learned from 7 years of blogging Purple Cows & Pink Elephants-  This morning wasAHA a big AHA moment for me as I looked back over blog posts and re-read several comments. The fast paced world we live in, all of the social media tools we have has shortened our attention span, and I am as guilty as the next person.

A few years ago I wrote a blog about a pet peeve of mine, when sending or responding to emails, do you read the whole email, it would appear by the responses from many that most people read the headline and a few sentences and then shoot off a response.

This is the same thing with blog posts, I scratch my head some times when I read a comment left by a passerby, but when I look a little deeper I realize the Shiny object that drew them in, the headline, may not have been the full message of the post, but they responded to that headline and maybe even the first couple lines or short paragraphs of the post that reflected the headline.

I have noticed with my writing I throw out a mind stream of content with a message that is clear in my head, but since I can not type as fast as I think the message turns out to be muddled or Lost in translation.

Pink ElephantsRegardless the AHA moment came when I realized that this is a micro look at the way clients and customers are also responding to my/our messages. They read the headline and if it is good enough to capture their attention for a brief few seconds you had better have the meat of your content, your primary message, in the next few sentences or you will either lose them or send out the wrong message.

Seth Godin has written many great books on marketing Purple Cowand getting the attention of the audience and Purple Cow was one of my favorites, the message is quick and concise and very easy to understand, that you must be different to stand out in the mass blitz of marketing that exists today.

Lessons learned:

  • Capture the readers attention with a great or unique Headline
  • Keep the readers interest for as long as possible
  • Keep the message short and sweet, Damn Twitter!
  • Pique their interest so they dig deeper
  • Have something for them to dig deeper into
  • Make your message crystal clear for the audience you want to attract
  • Make it attractive to look at or at least easy to navigate
  • If you have read this far, good for you, very few others did
  • I am done for now, this is already too long, no one made it this far, if you did, just put I made it in the comment section

The point is to capture quickly the attention of the reader, to keep them engaged and then ask them to communicate with you

 

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John Marshall -Fore!

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Evelyn Johnston
Friends & Neighbors Real Estate - Elkhart, IN
The People You Know, Like and Trust!

I made it, and here is why. From your title I thought you were going to be talking about the posts you wrote that were not neatly tied to real estate or your target market. Then I saw Seth Godin's name and I like his no nonsense teachings. Then I was at the bullet points and done. Great post!

Oct 04, 2014 12:29 AM
Sussie Sutton
David Tracy Real Estate - Houston, TX
David Tracy Real Estate for Buyers & Sellers

Well if you have an eye-catcher of a title I will open it up.... If the content is an EPISTLE I don't want to read it. If I do, it is because it is REALLY interesting.

Oct 04, 2014 03:58 AM
David Shamansky
US Mortgages - David Shamansky - Highlands Ranch, CO
Creative, Aggressive & 560 FICO - OK, Colorado Mtg

Ahh yeah a great post John!

I am sure I have done this but I guarantee I have had it doe to me MANY times lol.

The topic of being concise and on point though is excellent

Oct 05, 2014 04:05 AM
Donna Foerster
HomeSmart Realty Group - Parker, CO
Metro Denver Real Estate Assistant

Awesome post John. Do you have that book? Could I borrow it, or should I pick up my own copy?

Oct 13, 2014 07:26 AM
John Marshall - FORE!
LoKation Real Estate - Cherry Hills Village, CO
Specializing in Golf Course Properties

Evelyn Johnston Yay You made it! thank you for stopping by and reading the post

Sussie Sutton SO? it must have been a catchy title, but I had to look up Epistle

David Shamansky Thank you and now if I can only learn this lesson

Donna Foerster Sorry, I loaned that book out  afew years ago and have not seen it since, hopefully it is still being passed around

Oct 14, 2014 12:35 AM
Dick Greenberg
New Paradigm Partners LLC - Fort Collins, CO
Northern Colorado Residential Real Estate

Hi John - Those are all valuable lessons. I hadn't considered your reasoning about why we get out-of-focus comments, but it makes a lot of sense. I tend to write following a chain of reason, and that could muddy the waters - I'll try to throw some chum in the water up front in the future.

Nov 15, 2014 01:25 AM
John Marshall - FORE!
LoKation Real Estate - Cherry Hills Village, CO
Specializing in Golf Course Properties

Dick Greenberg and I will try to stay on topic to support my headline

Nov 15, 2014 02:09 AM
Tammy Lankford,
Lane Realty Eatonton, GA Lake Sinclair, Milledgeville, 706-485-9668 - Eatonton, GA
Broker GA Lake Sinclair/Eatonton/Milledgeville

I read once (and I really don't remember where) that you have their attention for 90 seconds at best and that you better get that message to them before you loose them.  I've worked hard to keep my message short and to the point.  As for those who read the headline and comment.... it still irks me.

Nov 15, 2014 02:20 AM
John Marshall - FORE!
LoKation Real Estate - Cherry Hills Village, CO
Specializing in Golf Course Properties

Tammy Lankford That is when I started realizing what they were actually commenting on, and thought I had better stick to my headline

Nov 15, 2014 02:37 AM
Liz Wallace
Century 21 Sherlock Homes - Rockville Centre, NY
Broker C21 Sherlock Homes, Rockville Centre, LI, N

I have an extremely short attention span and so if I open an email or a post and it has many, many paragraphs my brain starts to ache before I even start.  I try to keep my posts short and to the point for fellow attention deficient sufferers

Nov 15, 2014 02:59 AM
Troy Erickson AZ Realtor (602) 295-6807
HomeSmart - Chandler, AZ
Your Chandler, Ahwatukee, and East Valley Realtor

John, I made it, however you are absolutely right about most people not reading emails in their entirety. I think people are just so busy they don't take the time, and don't really care because they are not placing a high value on the email. Oftentimes I will write in an email, "I have 3 questions," and then write them out 1, 2, 3.

My response back on my 3 questions will be the answer to the first question only, and then I have to send out another email, and possibly another before I get everything answered. Aarrgghh...

Nov 15, 2014 01:19 PM
John Marshall - FORE!
LoKation Real Estate - Cherry Hills Village, CO
Specializing in Golf Course Properties

Liz Wallace My brain does the same thing, even when I am writing posts or emails, i just want to get the message out short and sweet

Troy Erickson It can be very frustrating indeed.

 

Nov 16, 2014 06:29 AM