The original advert:
The www.reallysold.com rewrite
On this one we’re not going to rewrite the entire advert – just suggest some different, more eye catching headings all from
www.reallysold.com .
Sparkling by day, captivating in the city by night
Leave the car at home – or better yet, sell it!
At your convenience…
Heightened Lifestyle
Vibe on the City Fringe
How Central Do You Need!?
Sanctuary in the City
Spunky Neighbour Showers with Blinds Open (just joking, but we got your attention!)
Footsteps to the City
Who needs a car?
Where Perfection has Personality
Cosmopolitan lifestyle with bonus Cosmos in the bar down the road
Eye on the City
A total city concept
A life less ordinary
Give the lawn mower away
Hot in the City!
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Happy advert writing,
the rewriter
Know of a listed property in need of a re-write? Email me the web link and I’ll see what I can do: rewriter@reallysold.com Or – funnier still, if you want to rewrite it – shoot it on through!
*Please note that the rewriter has not been asked to rewrite this advert for commercial purposes and is doing so merely to show you what www.reallysold.com can do
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