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Are you confusing your prospects with abbreviations?

By
Services for Real Estate Pros with Marte Cliff Copywriting

Whether you’re sending a text message or an actual letter, stop and think before you use a set of initials in place of words. 

Even the common ones used in real estate, such as NAR and MLS, might not mean anything to a recent immigrant or to someone who has never paid much attention to real estate in the past. Then when you get into individual states, it can get worse. Will someone from Minnesota automatically know that CAR stands for the California Association of REALTORS®? 

If you’re writing to another member of your profession, abbreviations and jargon are fine because you both understand the meaning (at least if you're in the same State). When you’re writing to anyone else, they may or may not know what you're trying to say. 

Initials that stand for organizations aren’t the only ones causing confusion. Now that so many are texting, text abbreviations are sneaking into their other written communication. And I suppose that’s OK, but only if they know that the person they’re writing to is also familiar with texting abbreviations and will know what they mean. Even recently, I've had people ask me if I had any idea what LOL means, because they sure didn't know. 

I harp a lot about being careful with word usage and proofreading carefully to avoid putting stop signs in the middle of your marketing messages. 

Unexplained initials are huge stop signs. 

Not long ago I received an “urgent message” from an organization that identified itself only through its initials. They simply assumed that I would know who they are and what they stand for. I got a pretty good idea of what they were about by skimming the message – but I still don’t know their name. 

I wasn't curious enough to try Googling those initials to get a clue. In the past, when one of my agent bio clients used them when answering my questionnaire, I've tried using Google. What I found was that it is far too time consuming, and I still might not get an answer. For any given set of initials there are dozens, if not hundreds of organizations, text abbreviations, or “jargon” usages. Those who are determined to find the meaning can go through all of them and try to find the one that fits the context of whatever they were reading. I don't even try any more – I just write and ask.

question marksSo – your reader might be able to figure it out, but if they take the time to try it will interrupt the flow, and then… the message you were trying to convey will be forgotten. 

If you really don’t want to take the time to write out the words throughout your message, or if writing them out would make the message lose its rhythm, give your readers a break. Define the initials the first time you use them. For instance, if referring to the National Association of REALTORS® simply put NAR in parentheses following the name. 

And as for texting abbreviations – save them for texting. 

Remember that when you’re writing to the general public or prospecting to a niche market, there are still people who do not text. They won’t have the first clue what you’re talking about, so your letter will go quickly to the round file.

    

 

Comments(48)

Carla Muss-Jacobs, RETIRED
RETIRED / State License is Inactive - Portland, OR

TYVM!  I'm SITD when it comes to TXT.  In my POV if I have to RBTL I DC.  B4N

Oct 08, 2016 04:04 AM
Jim Broline

Thank You Very Much!


Still In the Dark


TXT usually means text message

Oct 08, 2016 05:02 AM
Jim Broline

That is funny.

Oct 08, 2016 04:05 AM
Marte Cliff

OK Carla Muss-Jacobs, Principal Broker (503) 810-7192  - can't get the first part, but think I got the second "sentence." 


point of view


read between the lines


I Don't care


Before now


Oh wait, is SITD "so in the dark?" Now I'm just stuck on TYVM

Oct 08, 2016 04:21 AM
Jim Broline

Scary. I understood the entire message. Or, I think I did.


It is like guessing the words on Wheel of Fortune. 

Oct 08, 2016 04:19 AM
Carla Muss-Jacobs, RETIRED

Still in the dark and thank you very much!  LOL 

Oct 09, 2016 04:22 AM
Gene Mundt, IL/WI Mortgage Originator - FHA/VA/Conv/Jumbo/Portfolio/Refi
NMLS #216987, IL Lic. 031.0006220, WI Licensed. APMC NMLS #175656 - New Lenox, IL
708.921.6331 - 40+ yrs experience

We get so used to "speaking the language" of real estate and mortgages, that we assume everyone knows it.  They do not.  We need the reminder that others find it a foreign language all its own, Marte Cliff.  Thanks ...

Gene

Oct 08, 2016 04:56 AM
Marte Cliff

Yes Gene Mundt, IL/WI Mortgage Originator - FHA/VA/Conv/Jumbo/Portfolio/Refi  and the bad part is that some people are too shy or embarrassed to ask what you meant. 

Oct 08, 2016 05:18 AM
Dana Basiliere
Rossi & Riina Real Estate - Williston, VT
Making deals "Happen"

Marte,

As always a good post from our resident wordsmith. We can all drop way too many acronyms and alphabet soup.  Each profession has its own. I always take the time to add  in parentheses (of which I use WAY too often) what the meaning is. 

Oct 08, 2016 05:54 AM
Marte Cliff

Thanks Dana Basiliere I much prefer parentheses over confusion. Anyway, I like them. They add an element of "pace" and tone to a sentence or paragraph.

Oct 08, 2016 06:57 AM
Harry F. D'Elia III
WEDO Real Estate and Beyond, LLC - Phoenix, AZ
Investor , Mentor, GRI, Radio, CIPS, REOs, ABR

One must know how to communciate with their clients.

Oct 08, 2016 06:28 AM
Marte Cliff

Absolutely Harry F. D'Elia - without clear communication, you're lost! 

Oct 08, 2016 06:58 AM
Kimo Jarrett
Cyber Properties - Huntington Beach, CA
Pro Lifestyle Solutions

I don't do business with people that can't or won't communicate effectively either in writing or verbally, especially when money is embedded in the transaction. Great post.

Oct 08, 2016 08:54 AM
Marte Cliff

I think that's a good rule, Kimo Jarrett

Oct 08, 2016 11:09 AM
Sham Reddy CRS
Howard Hanna RE Services, Dayton, OH - Dayton, OH
CRS

Great observations!!!

When you’re writing to anyone else, abbreviations may or may not know what you're trying to say. 

Oct 08, 2016 09:25 AM
Marte Cliff

Hi Sham Reddy - I have a new one tonight. We've been reading the dog ads and there's one for puppies that are half Newfoundland and half LGD. What the heck is that? My husband said "large guard dog." I'm going to call and ask. 

Oct 08, 2016 11:10 AM
Lou Ludwig
Ludwig & Associates - Boca Raton, FL
Designations Earned CRB, CRS, CIPS, GRI, SRES, TRC

Marte

Using abbreviating has move into the extreme and we have ask the person what they are trying to say.

Good luck and success.

Lou Ludwig

Oct 08, 2016 01:17 PM
Marte Cliff

Lou Ludwig I'm trying to do just that tonight, but had to settle for leaving a message on a machine. 

Oct 08, 2016 01:38 PM
Praful Thakkar
LAER Realty Partners - Burlington, MA
Metro Boston Homes For Sale

Marte Cliff - I am sure most of us use that 'jargon' when we talk to our clients,

Sage advice for sure - and fortunately, I do not have an alphabet soup next to my name...lol!

Oct 08, 2016 02:19 PM
Marte Cliff

Praful Thakkar Alphabet soup is good to eat - not so good to read! I'm all for letting people know you have earned designations, but only if you relate it back to a benefit for them.  

Oct 09, 2016 02:21 AM
Tony and Suzanne Marriott, Associate Brokers
Serving the Greater Phoenix and Scottsdale Metropolitan Area - Scottsdale, AZ
Haven Express @ Keller Williams Arizona Realty

Marte Cliff "If you really don’t want to take the time to write out the words throughout your message, or if writing them out would make the message lose its rhythm, give your readers a break. Define the initials the first time you use them. For instance, if referring to the National Association of REALTORS® simply put NAR in parentheses following the name. "

Right on target - and - re-blog!

Oct 08, 2016 11:55 PM
Marte Cliff

Thanks Tony and Suzanne Marriott, Associate Brokers - I always appreciate your support. 

Oct 09, 2016 02:22 AM
Michael J. Perry
KW Elite - Lancaster, PA
Lancaster, PA Relo Specialist

I do remember a friend of mine who was a GRI getting calls for Mr Gree !!!

Oct 09, 2016 12:20 AM
Marte Cliff

Michael J. Perry Thanks for sharing, that is truly funny! 

Oct 09, 2016 02:22 AM
Richie Alan Naggar
people first...then business Ran Right Realty - Riverside, CA
agent & author

This reminds me of a special I watched where some people in a faraway place talked whistling...A literal using of whistling noises instead of speech. I can whistle just fine, but I cannot speak or understand it...lol.  Say what you mean!

Oct 09, 2016 12:24 AM
Marte Cliff

Richie Alan Naggar Well, dogs and cats and horses and deer... and all other creatures do have their own languages. It frustrates me that dogs can understand my language, but I can understand only a fraction of theirs.


Those who insist on talking in "text and tweet" need to realize that most normal people won't know what they're saying.

Oct 09, 2016 02:25 AM
Joe Jackson
Keller Williams Capital Partners Realty - Columbus, OH
Clintonville and Central Ohio Real Estate Expert

A good reminder to see things from the other side. Thanks for sharing

Oct 09, 2016 10:54 AM
Marte Cliff

Yes Joe Jackson - sometimes we need to look at what we're doing from our clients'/customers' points of view. 

Oct 09, 2016 01:29 PM
Alyse "Aly" Sands
AGORA Realty - Nashville, TN
It's Good To Be Home

I do exactly what you're suggesting and that is to write the full words out the first time if they even warrant initials. There are some agents who use initials to describe things and neighborhoods here in Nashville now that, I, as a seasoned broker, am not even familiar with. I think some of us are getting lazy or think it makes them look more expert or cool.

Oct 10, 2016 12:30 AM
Marte Cliff

Alyse "Aly" Sands - You have an interesting take on why some agents use abbreviations. I have always thought it was laziness - or in the case of multiple listing descriptions - a desire to cram more information into limited space. 


Looking expert and cool is a goofy reason - since we shouldn't ever try to make our clients feel stupid. 

Oct 10, 2016 04:28 AM
Victoria CB Trees
Victoria CB Trees Real Estate Services - Chiloquin, OR
Principal Broker

Excellent post!  I don't even like abbreviations in text messages.  I may just be a purist in that respect, but for some people it flows right into other mediums.  To me, it's difficult to translate numbers into words, for instance;  Go 2 the store...?  It's just ONE more keystroke for the proper "to."  Back in the day when everyone had to tap the same key a number of times to get to the correct letter, it was more acceptable.  Today most folks have qwerty keyboards at their fingertips, so constant abbreviations to me annoy me as laziness on the part of the writer.  

Oct 10, 2016 02:53 AM
Marte Cliff

Victoria C.B. Trees Perhaps they see using numbers for words as trendy and youthful. Or, as Alyse said, cool. 


I'm saved from having to endure text messages - in the mountain valley where I live and work there's no cell service, so I don't even own one of those phones. 

Oct 10, 2016 04:30 AM
Victoria CB Trees

No cell phone!  Wow... 

Oct 17, 2016 03:01 AM
Hannah Williams
HomeStarr Realty - Philadelphia, PA
Expertise NE Philadelphia & Bucks 215-820-3376

Marte Cliff  I often wonder when I abbreviate If people understand . I do when I do my city and state as both are very long . Luckily Google and the public do understand . I try not to do too much but sometimes it can not be helped . Great food for thought here .

Oct 10, 2016 03:19 AM
Marte Cliff

Hannah Williams - our city name is long too, which used to be an annoyance when we paid by the word for newspaper ads. (I'm dating myself again.) When corresponding or even conversing with other residents, most of us call Priest River "PR." 


As for states, it seems that most just use the abbreviations these days. 

Oct 10, 2016 04:33 AM
Anna Hatridge
R Gilliam Real Estate LLC - Farmington, MO
Missouri Realtor with R Gilliam Real Estate LLC

Congrats on the feature!  You touched upon one of the things that struggle with often.  Thank you.

Oct 10, 2016 06:39 AM
Marte Cliff

Thank you Anna Hatridge - I appreciate you stopping by. 


 

Oct 11, 2016 08:42 AM
Olga Simoncelli
Veritas Prime, LLC dba Veritas Prime Real Estate - New Fairfield, CT
CONSULTANT, Real Estate Services & Risk Management

Marte - this is ALL too common, I'm afraid. Try the military - all acronyms!

Oct 11, 2016 05:11 AM
Marte Cliff

Olga Simoncelli - Yes, I've heard some of that. Anyone outside of the military would have no idea what they're talking about. 

Oct 11, 2016 08:43 AM
Marie Shafer
Realty One Group - Peoria, AZ
Your dedicated, full-time full-service RE Agent.

I so agree with you! I personally do not like when people use abbreviations such as 2 for to, or b4 for before. The funniest thing that happens to me is when I use my speech to text - if it wasn't for proofreading I would be in trouble!

Oct 13, 2016 06:09 AM
Marte Cliff

Marie Shafer My husband is hard of hearing and doesn't like to use his "TV ears" so reads the screen most of the time. That's pretty well weaned me from watching TV at all, but when I do, I notice that some of the sentences their voice recognition software comes up with are hilarious. Some are actually obscene... 


Always, always proofread! 

Oct 13, 2016 07:05 AM
Laura Cerrano
Feng Shui Manhattan Long Island - Locust Valley, NY
Certified Feng Shui Expert, Speaker & Researcher

clarity should always be the main priority in all communications and everything else just muddies it.

Oct 14, 2016 04:34 PM
Marte Cliff

That's right Laura Cerrano - clarity is the most important ingredient. (Well, beyond having something to say!)

Oct 16, 2016 07:30 AM
Jan Green - Scottsdale, AZ
Value Added Service, 602-620-2699 - Scottsdale, AZ
HomeSmart Elite Group, REALTOR®, EcoBroker, GREEN

Very smart advice!  Spell everything out when writing letters and emails.  Texting is definitely for abbreviations!

Oct 19, 2016 03:08 AM
Marte Cliff

Jan Green - I'm glad I don't have to text - I'd never remember all of those abbreviations. 

Oct 20, 2016 01:28 AM