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on you

By
Real Estate Agent with Century 21 Redwood DC-SP98366576
i watch the sunrise
slowly night becomes day
grey shadows become mist
cool air
gone
 
I smile
somewhere the same sun rises
on you
and brightens your day
and warms you
 
and
 
if sharing the sunrise
is all that one can have
today
then i love the sunrise
on me
on you

Comments (6)

Jennifer Monroe
Indigo Home Team powered by Compass - Charlotte, NC
Real Estate REALTOR®/Broker/Designer
Every sunrise is more precious than the one before it. Lovely :)
May 06, 2008 02:39 PM
John MacArthur
Century 21 Redwood - Washington, DC
Licensed Maryland/DC Realtor, Metro DC Homes
Jennifer - if you think about it, it is no surprise that you see the power in such a short poem. the person it was written for can put a lifetime in a smile and ease the pain of centuries with a smile. sharing the sunrise truly begins each day beautifully. much the best to your and your love and life.
May 07, 2008 04:05 PM
Paul Slaybaugh
Homesmart - Scottsdale, AZ
Scottsdale, AZ Real Estate
I am always pulled in several directions at once emotionally when I read your poems, John.  That's about the highest praise there is for an author in my opinion.
May 07, 2008 05:44 PM
John MacArthur
Century 21 Redwood - Washington, DC
Licensed Maryland/DC Realtor, Metro DC Homes

Paul - thank you. i have such a much lower bar for gratification. if it is read and commented on, i have connected with at least one synapse. sending words out into the interweb is very dangerous. unless someone sends a note back, your words drift endlessly like some message in a bottle in world covered with water.

it is kind of you to take the time, and quite nice that you comment.

May 07, 2008 10:39 PM
Inna Hardison
ha media group - Orlando, FL
Wordpress for Real Estate & Design, Print HaMedia Group
Dearest J-Mac - beautiful, simple, yet not so simple... Like Paul, i too feel the pulled in different directions when reading you:-) No danger of your words ever drifting though - your words dance, J-Mac, across the the universe.
May 08, 2008 02:12 AM
John MacArthur
Century 21 Redwood - Washington, DC
Licensed Maryland/DC Realtor, Metro DC Homes
Inna - specific words..........intended for one........touching many........now that is more than enough......thank you for sharing ..........me
May 08, 2008 03:42 AM