One Copywriter's Pet Peeve: Lazy Copy

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Services for Real Estate Pros with Marte Cliff Copywriting

Every writer has pet peeves that make him or her cringe. I actually have two.

The first one is “I want to thank…” It must just be me, because I see it and hear it all the time. Every time I do, my instant reaction is “Well, then why don’t you do it if you want to?”

The other pet peeve, however, I believe is simply the sign of a lazy writer. It marks someone who can’t be bothered to tell the whole story. It’s also generally an untruth.

What is the word? “Needs.”

Everywhere you look you can find ads that say “Call on us for all your (whatever) needs.”

Why can’t the writer take time to tell what the business or person actually has to offer? Especially since no one business or person can take care of all of anyone’s “needs.”

I specialize in writing marketing copy for the real estate industry. If I wrote an ad that said “I’ll take care of all your copywriting needs,” I would be offering a false statement.

For instance, if someone called on me to write a newsletter about the stock market, I’d say no. Ditto for a technical manual about an electronics product – or about how to do coding on the Internet. And, there are some subjects I wouldn’t write about for any amount of money.

I also don't write product inserts or catalog copy - or government pamphlets!

When a Realtor says “Call me for all your real estate needs,” that’s probably just as false. Some agents handle residential real estate and some are experts at commercial and business transactions. Some sell farm and ranch land while others wouldn’t have a clue about how to do it. Some do property management and some do not.

And, aren't mortgage loans "real estate needs?" Few agents provide those.

Even if someone can handle almost anything that comes up, it’s more effective to spell it out and let those potential customers see what he or she has to offer. Why make them guess, especially since the “needs” word is so often ill-used?

We’re all busy today, and often in a hurry. So when we go in search of someone to do a job for us, we’re more apt to at least begin the search with someone who says they do what we want done. Not someone who will simply take care of all of our “needs.”

For instance, a residential plumber may be available to plumb an entire house from start to finish, or to make repairs – or both. He or she may or may not be available for emergency service in the middle of the night.

A graphic designer may specialize in creating posters or book jackets or headers for web pages – but also be willing to design your business card or the logo for your letterhead.

No one said it was easy not to be lazy...

If you offer many services, it can be a trick to convey all you offer in the space of a business card or a small ad. But work at it. Use your creativity to at least categorize your offerings. And if you have space in an ad, at least mention the tasks you most enjoy performing.

 

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Debbie Reynolds
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The more specialized and focused agents do define there business niches. Others are not sure where they are going and will try their hands at whatever comes there way.

May 25, 2017 08:25 PM #14
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Praful Thakkar
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Marte Cliff - I am sure people just copy what they see. If someone uses 'needs', few others would do the same.

Lazy? Maybe not. Perhaps the lack of creativity. And who wants to spend money on creating something new?

May 25, 2017 09:17 PM #15
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Kat Palmiotti
Grand Lux Realty, 914-419-0270, kat@thehousekat.com - Monroe, NY
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The claim to do "all" of anything is usually not true. 

May 26, 2017 03:58 AM #16
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Debbie Gartner
The Flooring Girl - White Plains, NY
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Yes, those lazy need statement are annoying, and they certainly don't communicate much.  It's better if you can actually explain what you do.

One of my pet peeves is "we specialize in..." and then they say everything (e.g we specialize in residential and commercial real estate. )  That basically tells me a) they don't specialize at all (master of none) and they need to improve their language skills (and perhaps not very well educated).  Drives me bonkers.

May 26, 2017 04:09 AM #17
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Janelle Ancillotti
Seneca Home Staging - Syracuse, NY
HSR Certified Home Stager, Syracuse, NY

"Any and All Needs" was the name of a one-person business my husband hired to do some handyman work. He soon realized the name should have been "Jack of all Trades, Master of None".

May 26, 2017 04:22 AM #18
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Thomas J. Nelson, Realtor,CRS,e-Pro
Big Block Realty 858.232.8722 - La Jolla, CA
Co-Host of Mail-Right's: Real Estate Agent Podcast

Marte Cliff I want to thank you for pointing this out, especially about any needs.

You reminded me of my pet peeve of speakers: "I just wanted to say..."

Then say it!

Great post and thanks for the kick in the pants to leave lazy out of my posts!

May 26, 2017 04:30 AM #19
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Chris Lima
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Thanks for a great post, Marte.

May 26, 2017 04:37 AM #20
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Tony and Suzanne Marriott, Associate Brokers
Haven Express @ Keller Williams Arizona Realty - Scottsdale, AZ
Serving Scottsdale, Phoenix and Maricopa County AZ

Marte Cliff "Even if someone can handle almost anything that comes up, it’s more effective to spell it out and let those potential customers see what he or she has to offer."

Right on target - and - re-blog!

May 26, 2017 05:16 AM #21
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Sally K. & David L. Hanson
Keller Williams 414-525-0563 - Brookfield, WI
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This is why we often have multiple attachments to our listings...MLS does not allow enough room to explain the WHOLE house !

May 26, 2017 05:20 AM #22
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Matthew O'Hare
F-FPA - Osterville, MA

Lazy communication seems to run rampant in today's society.

May 26, 2017 05:54 AM #23
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John Wiley
Jones & Co. Realty - Fort Myers, FL
Lee County, FL Real Estate GRI, SRES,GREEN,PSA

Your pet peeve of people being lazy is a common one. Many agents are copy cats and have never been shown how that affects their results.

Thanks for a good reminder.

May 26, 2017 06:41 AM #24
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Dave Halpern
Keller Williams Realty Louisville East (502) 664-7827 - Louisville, KY
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Very well said. The more you tell the more you sell.

However, I wouldn't call agents lazy. Writing copy is generally not our expertise and for many of us we just need to collaborate with third-party experts when crafting important marketing material.

Personally, I find it very difficult to write good property descriptions for the MLS public remarks field. 

Could you create a tool that would help us convert dry technical descriptions of property features into an exciting and inviting description?

 

 

May 26, 2017 06:57 AM #25
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Elizabeth Weintraub Sacramento Real Estate Agent, Top 1% of Lyon Agents
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Can't say I've ever tried that approach but I've certainly seen it, Marte. Generally I close blogs if you're interested in selling a home, call Elizabeth. If I'm writing about investment properties, I might change it to if you're interested in selling a rental home. I don't want people to wonder what I do.

May 26, 2017 07:21 AM #26
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Corinne Guest, Managing Broker
Barrington Realty Company - Barrington, IL
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I do try to write about what I want to sell and to whom. But we all get in auto mode at times and yes those lazy cliches come out of our fingers on to a keyboard because we are not thinking. Where's that auto pilot off switch!

May 26, 2017 07:24 AM #27
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Nina Hollander
RE/MAX Executive | Charlotte, NC - Charlotte, NC
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Nothing to argue about here, Marte. All great points to make us think about what we say and write. Nothing like clarity about our calls to action.

May 26, 2017 04:11 PM #28
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Nathan Gesner
American West Realty & Management - Cody, WY
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Nice blog, Marte Cliff . I learned a few things and will try to imlement them immediately in my writing. Congratulations on being featured!

May 27, 2017 05:35 AM #29
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Mary Hutchison, SRES, ABR
Better Homes and Gardens Real Estate-Kansas City Homes - Kansas City, MO
Specializing in Brookside, Waldo, Prairie Village

It's easy to slip into commonly used copy and phrases. YOu bring up a good point about 'needs'.  The focus should be on what you can do for the customer, perhaps something like "I can help with finding that special older home in X area' or "Do you know a senior who plans to downsize? That's one of my specialities"

May 28, 2017 03:34 PM #30
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Thomas McCombs
Century 21 HomeStar - Akron, OH

Well said! I see so many blurbs written by Realtors which actually impart no information whatsoever, but do make claims that you know can't be accurate.

May 30, 2017 04:23 AM #31
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Mick Michaud
Distinctly Texas Lifestyle Properties, LLC Office:682/498-3107 - Granbury, TX
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I want to thank you for an insightful article.  I may get around to it some day.  :)

I totally agree with that one.  And the "Call me . . . " (I'm a door mat, use me, abuse me, whatever).  I hate that. 

Be selective and focused. 

And seriously, thanks for putting words to the frustration.

May 30, 2017 11:05 AM #32
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Thomas McCombs
Century 21 HomeStar - Akron, OH

Well said! I see so many blurbs written by Realtors which actually impart no information whatsoever, but do make claims that you know can't be accurate.

May 31, 2017 05:18 AM #33
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