Build a Better Slogan, Tagline, or Brand

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                            Thank you Pat Starnes, Brandon, MS 

The slogan generator is an Interesting idea.  I need to check it out.  Thanks for sharing.

Good mornng, Pat Starnes, Brandon, MS great job with your slogan... perfect....

Good morning Pat. I think you nailed a good one and enjoyed reading about your process.

You state that it's not about me, but about them.

I agree with that.

But I don't think the three pictures you show have anything to do with "them". 

I think it should be something like a young couple with a baby looking at their new home and maybe you in the background with a caring smile on your face knowing that you are helping them create a bright future in their new home.

Maybe something about planting roots raising a family.  

Something about dreams.  Or the future is now.

Or "own your future"

or "build to own your future"

Great post!  I can see why Kathy chose it this week to highlight!

Words are hard, also think how it works with SEO for you as well so you get found. I have been using Selling The Main Line for a while, but recently have focused on using Tredyffrin Easttown Realtor, I also combine the two on videos as well. I searched the other day on Google and I am on the front page for Tredyffrin Easttown Realtor just behind Zillow and Realtor.com. 

Hi Pat

I like the emotionality that your tag line generates. I need to give some more thoughts to mine.

Jeff

Phooey - my silly computer only shows me about the top 1/4 of your creation.

I'm stuck on the word "building" .... makes me think of new construction. If you don't specialize in new construction I wouldn't use build or building.

I like Tim Maitski's suggestion of using the word "own".  I also agree with his suggestions on the pics. The three you have shown don't balance well together. I think you should be in the middle and the two outside pics should be homes or yards with happy buyers.

Front Gate Realty caught my eye and I thought maybe something about gateway to a happier future or gateway to your future home.

Hi Pat, I like the advice you have received, both adding the YOUR, and the home photo suggestion. 

Hi Pat Starnes, Brandon, MS, you received some great suggestion from Tim and Sharon. I wouldn't use the word Build or Building. It would be nice if you can get a picture with your clients in front of  a home. 

You could so something like "your gateway to home ownership."

do you only work with buyers?

Pat, I think you came up with a great slogan.

I will look into the slogan generator.