After receiving an email on a property today with an inquiry about "issues" on a property. So I decided to look up the property and to my surprise I seen this piece.

"HUGE Price drop.Back on market. Home sold as is There are some issues (we have inspection report) Seller no longer making payments! This will be a short sale! All offers will be subject to underlying lien holders approval.Three bedroom with territorial view.full wrap around deck,Large double car garage and shop plus additioanl storage in back. The living room/ dinning room area has very nice hardwood floors."

Broken and choppy writing is nothing new for agents to do when entering into property descriptions into MLS. But it should be noted that these descriptions are not only viewable to agents anymore. Since everyone and their brother has an IDX on their site these description are now viewable to all who use IDXs to search.

I recommend not to write for other agents when it comes to the MLS because it is more than just agents reading. Descriptions can be written effetively as well as fluidly even in the minimal characters allowed by the MLS. Just a quick thought.