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Here are 7 "formulas" that can help you write more powerful headlines:

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Home Inspector with CROOKERHANCOX HOME INSPECTIONS INC. 04061414

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     Here are 7 "formulas" that can help you write more powerful headlines:

 

1--Ask a question.
   
But make sure it's a question to which the reader wants to know
the answer.


Weak: "Do You Know What XYZ Company is Up to Lately?"


Here's one that was a strong control for Economics Press years
ago:


Strong: "What Do Japanese Managers Have That American Managers
Sometimes Lack?"


2--Tie-in to current events.


A news angle is especially effective when promoting financial
publications and other products affected by current events on a
daily basis.


Example: "Stay One Step Ahead of the Stock Market Just Like
Martha Stewart - But Without Her Legal Liability!"


3--Create a new terminology.


You can literally create a brand or product category by
expressing an old idea in a fresh and compelling way.


Example: "New 'Polarized Oil' Magnetically Adheres to Wear Parts
in Machine Tools, Making Them Last Up to 6 Times Longer."


4-- Use the words "new," "introduction," or "announcing" in your
headline.


It works because people are interested in what is new.


Example: "Announcing a Painless Cut in Defense Spending."


5-- Give the reader a command; tell him to do something.
         
Example: "Try Burning This Coupon."


The above headline was for an ad advertising a fireproofing
compound.


The paper the ad was printed on was coated with the fireproofing
chemical.


So when you followed the instructions in the headline -- and
held a match to the ad -- it didn't burn.


Result: an instant on-the-spot demonstration proving the product
works.


6-- Promise the reader useful information.


Prospects are more likely to read your ad if they feel they can
learn something useful by doing so.


Example: "The Secret to Richer, Moister Chocolate Cake." (Duncan
Hines)


Example: "How to Win Friends and Influence People." (Dale
Carnegie)


7-- Highlight your offer.


If the offer is new, unusual, or especially strong, put it right
up front.


Example: "You Can Now Subscribe to the Best New Books - Just as
You Do to a Magazine."


The above headline was used in an ad to launch the Book of the
Month Club.


Sincerely,                                                                                                                                  Chuck Crooker and Steve Milton/CROOKERHANCOX HOME INSEPCTIONS INC.   www.crookerhancox.com

Anonymous
Concerned Citizen

Can't believe you so brazenly ripped off Bob Bly. Sad to see a hardworking expert get robbed by a plagiarist like you.

Feb 22, 2013 06:26 AM
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