I hope this doesn't sound too prideful, but I really like what I write. And I do a lot of writing as the Public Relations & Media Specialist for LuxuryRealEstate.com.

Original movie poster of Die Hard (1988). Copyright of Nick Slide on Flickr.While my blogs on ActiveRain and the LuxuryRealEstate.com Blog are sometimes quickly written and they don't have the benefit of as much outside editing as I usually receive for my other work, I think they give you a taste of my writing skill and style.

My mind is constantly working before, during and after the writing process. I think about what is interesting about the story I am currently writing about. I ponder why my target readers would bother to read what I've written. I try to decide which points are most important and how best to convey them. I only have a limited amount of time to create my news releases, newsletters, magazine articles and other works, so I need to make quick decisions.

For the Week in Review newsletter I create each week, I receive a lot of news releases from members of the LuxuryRealEstate.com network. I am very grateful for that fact because it helps me keep our newsletter filled with great material. Many of the stories I receive are really interesting while others are about new employees, anniversaries and other topics that don't seem too interesting at first. However, once I go through a news story, I can usually find something remarkable in it and I usually rewrite the headline so it's much more eye-catching.

With these thoughts in mind, I'd like to talk about my recent experience writing a news release on a seemingly average topic: a Ewing & Clark, Inc. broker celebrating her 20th anniversary. I don't mean that the broker, Jane Powers, is average; I'm just saying that I've read many stories similar to hers. As I approached this story I tried to remember that this is an important moment for her, and she has many great stories to tell after 20 successful years in the Seattle luxury market.

Jane Powers, a top broker with Ewing & Clark, Inc. who recently celebrated her 20th anniversary with the company.So I sat down to write about her story. Many times when I write I have a sudden inspiration that I know did not come from me. This time was no different. I suddenly had a thought that I should look up remarkable events that occurred in July 1988, when Powers started with her company. As it turned out, I discovered that a little movie called "Die Hard" debuted in theaters the same day that Powers began working at Ewing & Clark.

I was ecstatic by the creative opportunities opened up by this coincidence.

I am a big movie buff and I couldn't pass up this chance to add some really unique flavor to Powers' story. So that's exactly what I did. You can see the final product here. I wrote the first and second-to-last paragraphs first and then worked on the rest of it. I had a blast writing this story.

I got butterflies of nervous excitement when I showed it to Powers herself for approval. Luckily, she liked my take on her story and I got to distribute it through my usual PR sources.

I believe any story can be interesting to read. I could have written Powers' news release in a really boring, run-of-the-mill way, but I found that little something special that turned it into a great story. I hope that you can find the greatness in your stories and, as long as you're a LuxuryRealEstate.com member, I'd love to post them in the Week in Review!

The copy of the "Die Hard" movie poster is from www.flickr.com/photos/nickslidepics/442646618 and it is the copyright of Nick Slide.

 
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5 Comments on Turning an average news release into a great one

JUL
23
2008
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Interesting and imaginative. Well done. Jane must be pleased.

1:49pm • #1
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Dear Michelle,

Thank you very much for your comment. It's definitely a challenge to be creative, but it's worth the effort. Have a great day!

Sincerely,
Robert Lockard

1:53pm • #2
JUL
24
2008
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Dear Kym,

Excellent question. I sent it to the two local Seattle newspapers, The Seattle Times and Seattle Post-Intelligencer, and I got a response from the Times' real-estate editor, thanking me for sending it to her. I'm not sure if she'll publish it, yet. I'll hopefully get it published in a publication soon, though. Thanks for asking!

Sincerely,
Robert Lockard

9:53am • #4
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Just as an update, I just saw that my news release was picked up by RISMedia. Excellent!

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