I'm sitting in the airport in Las Vegas, reflecting on reBlogWorld and BlogWorld Expo and thought I'd share one of the thoughts that occurred to me during a session yesterday.
Dave Taylor gave a presentation entitled "10 Things You Need To Know About Search Engines And Findability." I didn't learn anything during the presentation that I didn't already know, but I still enjoyed it immensely. And it reminded me how lazy I can sometimes be with the basics. Dave presented the 10 tips in a way that is easy to understand and implement. I used Qik.com to stream the entire 52 minute presentation and you can watch it below. I'll be sending it to anyone who asks me about the basics from this moment forward.
I can find "Rufus Xavier Sarsaparilla", but I can't find "he, him, or his."
It hit me as I was actively singing along to my kid's Schoolhouse Rock CD, that I unconsciously use pronouns for exactly the reasons that my favorite Schoolhouse Rock song describes. My favorite is called "Rufus Xavier Sarsaparilla." I loved it when I was a kid and I love it now. My kids get a kick out of me belting it out at the top of my lungs.
Here's the best part of the song:
Now I could tell you Rafaella Gabriela and Rufus Xavier Sarsaparilla and Albert Andreas Armadillo found an aardvark, a kangaroo, and a rhinoceros. And now that aardvark and that kangaroo and that rhinoceros belong respectively to Rafaella Gabriela Sarsaparilla and Rufus Xavier Sarsaparilla and Albert Andreas Armadillo!
Whew! Because of pronouns I can say, in this way: "WE found THEM and THEY found US and now THEY are OURS and WE're so happy."
Thank you, pronouns!
You see a pronoun was made to take the place of a noun, 'Cause saying all those nouns over and over Can really wear you down.
Yes, it can really wear you down. That's why we use pronouns. But if I say that's why "WE" use pronouns, then I miss out on an opportunity.
Here's the problem. Type he, him, or his into a google search and see what you find. Search results for he, him, his. The results are all over the board. Here's what you get when you search on Rufus Xavier Sarsparilla: Search results. There are 816 results and even if you go the last page of the results, they all point to Schoolhouse Rock references.
Make Jeff Turner's point, Jeff Turner! (Jeff Turner is now going to show ActiveRain members Jeff Turner's point by over exaggerating Jeff Turner's point. Because Jeff Turner really does have a point.)
If ActiveRain bloggers want to get the biggest bang from the Active Rain bloggers' ActiveRain blog posts, ActiveRain bloggers need to look the ActiveRain Bloggers' posts over carefully. When ActiveRain bloggers can replace a pronoun with a noun and not sound as ridiculous as this paragraph sounds, ActiveRain bloggers have increased the chances that the posts ActiveRain bloggers write will show up in search results.
That's obviously ridiculous. Here's how we would all normally write that paragraph:
If you want to get the biggest bang from your blog posts, you need to look your posts over carefully. When you can replace a pronoun with a noun and not sound as ridiculous as that paragraph sounds, you have increased the chances that the posts you write will show up in search results. This is subtle, but effective, and won't take much time.
Write to engage. Read to improve.
Don't even think about nouns or pronouns when you're writing. Just write. Write to engage the reader. Then save it as a draft and go get a cup of coffee, or take a nap, or kiss your loved ones, or mail me a dollar. When you're done, come back and read it to improve it's search engine attractiveness.
This speaks somewhat to the long tail searches, the more "specific" we are in our content, the more likely we may be found for something that isn't a key word but something we still know a lot about.
I am thankful for your insight as usual Jeff Turner, I am the Friend of Jeff Turner, and Jeff Turner is a friend of Connor MacIVOR. Both Jeff Turner and Connor MacIVOR have little or no hair.
Once again thank you for taking the time out of your business and posting such an amazing and useful blog filled with information. So many good ideas to implement, yet so little time
I love your common sense advice to write to engage, take a break, then come back to improve the SEO. I won't mail you a dollar, but I would be happy to buy you a drink next time you are in Orange County!
Jeff Turner - your comments on Search Engines and Findabililty (surely it can't hurt to repeat the subject in the comments) are well taken. You certainly do help real estate agents grow.
We should think of using keywords as anchor text for links, instead of Click Here. Same search result, no doubt.
Jeff, That post of yours was one of my favorites. And I actually do still think of it often when reading and editing my posts & making them right for people and the engines. Sounds like you had a great trip. I'll make one of those conference eventually.
Jeff - Great reminder. When editing I try my best not to sound like the paragraph "active rain bloggers". BTW I love your active rain customizer! ~Rita
Oh. Wait let me say that again...............OH! I need to look through my posts. of course! That makes perfect sense. Thanks Jeff. Another brilliant blog. :)
Finally someone who spells it out. I was starting to scream at the various members on active rain that use the same word in every sentence 40 times. Just write normal. Using the same word 100 times will just devalue your ranking.
Just dropped your dollar in the mail (not). But seriously, I already do a lot of this. I've found that if I write something and post it right away, when I come back later, I find a ton of typos, and a lack of key words. So I totally get the part about walking away for a while.
Jeff- When you start getting momentum flowing and things start jelling, the biggest mistake we all make, if letting go of what brought us to that point in the first place. Never forget the basics.
Thanks Jeff Turner - While I write my ActiveRain Blogs to be informative and a contribution to the ActiveRain community, I blog for search engine presence to grow my Royal Oak Real Estate business. From now on, I will be looking over all my posts to see where I can insert a few more descriptive valuable words. Thanks for the great Jeff Turner perspective.
Thanks Jeff I am putting some of this to use now. Great advise and of course you should know. Hope your having a little fun out there as well. Can't wait to see more of what have in store from Vegas.
This ties into good writing in general. When people write term papers they often use the words he she or it. The problem is you dont know who she he or it is referring to. Sometimes it makes logical sense if its right after you mentioned a single person over and over but when you are talking about a variety of people and ideas who she he it refers to is often unclear. Thats why we are taught to replace these and constantly reinforcing who you are talking about. I guess when you are used to writing like this it is easy but I think its good to mention for sure.
Thanks for sharing what you learned. I love your advice and I will try to keep this in mind. I find it crazy that the posts I fret over the least get the most comments, but I know I need to think about the composition more.
I used to love all the School House Rock commercials...but I don't remember ever hearing that one! And yes, point made...and a good point at that. Thanks for sharing the video.
So how many dollars do you have by now? :) Thanks for posting Dave Taylor's presentation and reminding us that keywords incorporated cleverly in our writing does indeed improve SEO.
Jeff - thanks for sharing in a way that always makes the point crystal clear. Are you coming to Orlando in Nov? Would love to increase my YEO and get to meet you in person :)
Jeff - those are great tips amnd so easy to ignore. Folks sometime get so hung up on SEO that they forget to write conversationally. Try reading the artilce out loud - you pick up the grammr stuff that way too.
Appreicate your sharing Dave Taylor's talke - I missed that one (but did not miss yours, which was terrific, as I expected). High energy, good information and practical - just what we needed at 5 in the afternoon.
Renee Burrows thinks Jeff Turner is brilliant. Renee Burrows does like kissing, coffee and naps. Renee Burrows never thought about mailing Jeff Turner a dollar, hmmmmm.
Renee Burrows will have to come back to watch Jeff Turner's video in a little while after Renee Burrows takes Renee Burrows' daughter to school.
Renee Burrows is sure that Mike Burrows will like Jeff Turner's kissing advice and will advise Renee Burrows to blog more often :)
I hit the submit button on this post just seconds before I jumped on a plane to Burbank, CA yesterday. I'm glad it's resonated with you all. I think keyword density is an art, but as Jeff Dowler says above, if you read your post out loud, you'll be able to hear when the number of keywords becomes too much. Writing normally, then coming back to check pronoun use is a simple way to insure you're going far enough, without going too far.
Jeff: I am so glad you captured this session. It was perhaps the best one in the entire event. These are tips we tend to overlook or forget. Thanks for putting this up for the troops to benefit from!....
this was great stuff Jeff, I would have never thought about the tip of replacing a pronoun with a noun but it makes sense after looking at it from the google juice perspective,
Great post Jeff, I'm going to check out the session. Never really thought about it this way, but it makes sense. Ok, now, Ana Connell is off to do her homework! Lol!
Joan, a couple people have complained about the audio, but I don't have trouble hearing it. Unfortunately, I didn't take any notes... because I was taking the video. :)
Jeff Turner-
Thanks for posting this great information for Carla Freund and all the AR bloggers. Carla Freund plans to put this advice into practice.
Thanks Jeff Turner & have a great week!
Carla Freund
Thank you so much for the link to Schoolhouse Rock, as I have been singing the "I'm just a bill" song for my husband (who is English, now an American and didn't get our great Schoolhouse commercials in his youth) and my memory was sadly lacking. Made me laugh outloud to hear it again!
Georgie Hunter thinks Jeff Turner is pretty smart with Jeff Turner's Active Rain blog and Georgie Hunter will be sure to keep this tip in mind for Georgie Hunter's Active Rain blog, and will take the time to watch the video - thanks!
Jeff, always a good reminder to just write with our own "voice." That is what typically engages the reader - Teri Ellis personality, Teri's charm, gift of gab - oh, and Teri's knowledge about real estate! ;-)
Jeff this is good info, however, I might need another cup of coffee to absorb the subtleties of what you are saying....boookmarked for post-caffiene reading...
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