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1) Writing Brilliant Posts and Average Headlines-Headlines are the Marketing Piece that creates the desire to click “more.” Advertisers spend millions of dollars each year to find the one sentence, the 15 second elevator pitch that will (not sell their product, but) get consumers to take just one look at the meat of their marketing… What will motivate your readers to click…? A few guidelines here... a. The headline MUST match the story. You can’t write a headline that says, “Naked People Inside! “Unless there are…. You get it. Make the headline strong and curious, but truthful. b. Make your Headline keyword rich… Keywords are king... Include YOUR blogs’ keywords within the title, permalink, etc… c. Use common English…Make your Headline understandable to everyone…not just informed readers… Don’t use acronyms or abbreviations that some may not understand…

2) Not getting Personal-Blogs ARE personal. They are LOGS of your thoughts, your experience, and your feelings. They are YOUR opinions… All these things are personal. Take a chance and let your expressions flow… Show your Readers, YOU.

3) Talking AT, not TO- Blogging is not BROADCASTING. It is a conversation, a discussion. You are simply speaking first. Treat your blog this way. Speak TO your Readers as if you expect them to speak back… Make sense? 

4) Trying to be Interesting. When I do the 4RealzED seminars with Dustin Luther, this is my FAVORITE part of his blogging presentation. Dustin’s lesson to our audience, AND ME, is to stop worrying about being INTERESTING, and blog about things that you are INTERESTED in. Be INTERESTED. Your passion, knowledge, and general interest are contagious.

5) Promoting YOU. Blogging is a community and to build a community you need to reach out… To reach out, you have to get OUT of YOUR community and read other peoples blogs… When you find something interesting, write a blog post and LINK to the blog that inspired you… Link Out, Link Out and then Link Out some more… This is the single most difficult concept for my clients to understand… “Why would I send my readers to someone else’s blog?” TO ENGAGE THEIR READERS….

6) Trying to always write BRILLIANT PROSE... Blogging is a discussion (see a theme developing here?) Write as if you are speaking to me, not as if you are writing a book… Heck, if I want to read great prose, I’ll keep McEwen, Marques, or Nabokov by the bedside. If I want to know about you and what is INTERESTING to you? I really prefer to hear it in your unfiltered voice…

7) Stating Opinion as Fact… The written word is instant history. Your blogs will be filtering around cyber-space long after you have “left the building.” Daunting thought, huh? Your grandchildren’s, grandchildren could be rummaging through cyber space to figure out who his or her ancestors were and find YOUR AR Blog… downright spooky. Ensure that your facts ARE facts, or state them as opinion. Make sure the statements are not only true, BUT DEFENDABLE… Your blog lives and dies, with your readers trust in you. BE BEYOND REPROACH...

Jim Marks is the founder of Virtual Results, a company dedicated to creating online strategies and websites that work, for Real Estate Professionals...

 

63 Comments on 7 (not so common) Mistakes YOU may be making with your blog...

MAR
09
2009

Good suggestions. I'm still at the beginning of the learning process but catching on fast.

3:09pm • #1

Jim, this was very informative to me.  I am a blogging newbie who is always looking for good information.

3:15pm • #2
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These are all GREAT suggestions.  I am bookmarking this.  I think I have a hard time "talking to" my reader.  I love the idea of finding a great blog and linking to it.  That's a great idea.

Thanks for the much needed list :)  Maybe this can help me improve my blog!

3:16pm • #3
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Jim - Love the list. I like #1 and it's one of the things I have a hard time with, but still try to be clever with. I don't succeed all of the time, but I've sometimes spent more time thinking about what my headline should be than on my post itself.

3:20pm • #4

Great suggestions, especially for all of us who are blog beginners.

3:25pm • #5
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Great suggestions JIm.  I do believe you speak the truth with your points in here.  Great reading for newbies.  KM

3:31pm • #6

Jim, this was great advice! I especially like the one about always trying to write "Brilliant Prose". I like the idea of a friendly approach to blogging where we get to know the real person. I believe in making an effort to use correct grammar and spell check! But most of us are not writers, and it can be quite charming to let our personality show.

3:58pm • #7

Thanks for the information!  I am still new to all this and I am thankful to receive all the help I can get!

4:08pm • #8
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Jim !! -- I subscribe to each and every one of those tips - we are totally on the same page !!! Nice to see affirmation that I'm on the right track :o)

Great pointers.

Cheers !

Sheldon

4:31pm • #9

Norma and Andrea,

Thsis stuff is MORE important when you are a "noob..."   It takes months or years to establish a meaningful social media reputation...  days to ruin one...

5:10pm • #11

Kim

CAN you spend too much time thinking about the headline?  Best part for sure....

5:11pm • #12

Lourdes,

I, too, TRY to spell correctly..  But grammar?  uh.... maybe not so much...

5:13pm • #13

Jim, Loved #7! The printed word, whether on paper or the web, has amazing staying power. Everytime I blog now I'll be thinking about my potential grandchildren:) 

5:15pm • #14
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Hi Jim,

I read your tips and thought about something personal that happened to me today. Thanks for giving me the motivation to share it. I put a link to this blog on my blog. Thanks!

5:46pm • #15

Jim thank you for the pearls of wisdom! I am now working on my very first blog, which I was feeling was somewhat insignificant even though it is from the heart. Your advice is very much intune with what I'm trying to convey. Thanks again!

Steve Bush
5:55pm • #17
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I like number 7 the best. Many time people do not stop and think what some of their rants will taken them down the road. 

6:12pm • #18

Jim, thanks, just getting started myself.  And my gut tells me a lot of what you say is absolutely right on. 

Dave

7:23pm • #19

Good tips Jim. I usually post about events, open houses, etc. never making them too personal. need to try and provide the personal touch more. thanks

7:27pm • #20
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Jim, I loved this post.  People like being talked to, not AT.  There are other wonderful hints here as well for better blogging.

7:34pm • #21

Eugene,

Try to think like a reader that stumbled onto your site...  Do you think they care about your open house, etc, listings, etc?...  I actualy advise NOT to blog about listings, (unless it can be done is a very special way) I advise NOT to blog about the right time to buy or sell, etc... Blog about what you are INTERESTED in... and if thats Real Estate that is cool....

7:45pm • #22
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OMIGOSH -- you mean we're NOT Journalists?!?  Only bloggers . . .

7:47pm • #23
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Jim - I love your Dustin quote "stop worrying about being INTERESTING, and blog about things that you are INTERESTED in. Be INTERESTED."

Take some passion, combine it with knowledge, turn it into a post, and serve widely.

7:48pm • #24
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Great post, thanks for all of the information.

8:15pm • #25
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I'll show property to a prospective buyer tomorrow who found my blog on AR.  She's interesting, interested in learning more about the local market, and we have common interests.

 Buyers are choosing agents they want to spend time with so let the real you shine through and you'll attract buyers and sellers you like to work with. 

8:51pm • #26
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Of my posts, the ones that seem to be the most engaging are the ones I write spontaneously and hit the submit button - the rest sound like and are just ads.

9:02pm • #27
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Great points Jim! While I am somewhat experienced at writing, I am new to blogging, and agree with you whole heartedly! The thing I seem to be having the toughest time with is the Headlines. which I must admit surprises me just a bit. However, your first point is well taken, and I will continue to work on it. Continued success to you!

9:10pm • #28
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Jim...thanks for these great tips. I know I have challenges with my headlines catching the attention, but also trying to be key-word rich....hard to do both!

But I'm going to a blogging seminar tomorrow....hope I can bring some new tips to the table!

9:17pm • #29
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Evening Jim -

Very good Blog with timely info.  I wish you could give a class (who knows maybe I'm guilty but I don't think so), as even in our AR community so many MISUSE the spirit of Blogging as some type of Advertising medium.  I'm sure you've seen post that are nothing more than ADS. 

Anyway, like you indicated Blogs provide us with a platform to voice our OPINION.

Keep it up (p.s. I was in Laguna Beach last week)

Cheers

9:22pm • #30
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Jim,

These are all good points. I'm going to read them once again before I write my next post.

Brian Madigan

9:24pm • #31
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I have the same problem as Virginia and it seems that being interested is the solution.  When I'm fired up or excited about something I can write a post quickly without agonizing over it and those are always my favorites!

9:25pm • #32

Great tips! I've read a lot of blog posts about blogging and this is truly great advice. I don't seem to have a hard time writing and expressing myself, but coming up with great headlines and knowing that my posts may be around for years and years and years is a bit daunting! Our real estate team will definitely work on these things. Thanks!

9:50pm • #33
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Hi Jim, Your post and the comments have been very interesting! I really love writing the headlines. So much fun!

10:28pm • #34

You had me at "7 mistakes"! I clicked even though I expected to see the same old tired list about blogging. Thank you though for some refreshing points instead.

10:57pm • #35
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Jim... this is a great post with 7 great tips.. thanks for sharing.

11:29pm • #36
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Thanks for some good advice.  I've bookmarked for future inspiration.  My problem now is writer's block...

11:42pm • #37
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Good post.  I really need to work on my titles.

11:43pm • #38
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10
2009
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Jim,

Thank you for your recommendations.  I have learned so much from you and Dustin and greatly appreciate it.

12:19am • #39

"Buyers are choosing agents they want to spend time with so let the real you shine through and you'll attract buyers and sellers you like to work with. "

Norma, I could not have said it better myself....

 

12:19am • #40

Gina,

 

Check you email "Sent Box"  I bet you have a bunch of great emails you have sent to clients over the years...  MIne those for inspiration...

 

Christine,

Simply..Thanks.  You know we are neighbors..  ever go to the OC Tweetups?  Search Twitter for #tworco, last one was in CM...

12:23am • #41
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Jim:  Awesome post.  Thank you!

I noticed that it has not been submitted to any groups.  Submitting it to groups ensures that it will be read and commented on.  You can submit each blog to a maximum of five groups. 

I would love for you to post this to our Optimist Group.  Thank you!

12:34am • #42
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I just re-blogged it, but will not post it to the Optimists, so we can have your original post there instead. 

I just couldn't help myself; it's just too good and I had to have it!

12:38am • #43

Mirela,

 

Help your self...  Thanks for the compliment....

12:52am • #44
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Thanks for the seven tips.  I read this last night and left it up on the computer so I could re-read it this morning

5:44am • #47
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Thanks Jim - you sure took a lot of the pressure off!  Here I thought we had to be brilliant... ;)  My fave - #2 - get personal.  Can't tell you how many times I've gone to read through the blogs on someone to learn more about them and found nothing...  Great info - great post!

6:41am • #48
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Jim...

Stating opinions as facts is a pet peeve of mine. I see a lot of that anytime the topic of politics comes up. We can not see into the hearts of men, nor are we privy to their intent. To say to we can do either is, to me, like saying: "I'm a God" :)

Now, I think my biggest mistake as I've Blogged around here for almost three years is naming my Blog "The Crap-A-Rama". I ruined everything with that nonsense. Or not :)

P.S. Loved. Loved. Loved, This post Good Sir. The next time I see someone turning a strong opinion into a 'factual' opinion, I'm sending 'em over here :)

TLW...ROAR!

7:21am • #49
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Oh...

And it's a good thing I've already shown my Grand Children (the older ones anyway) my "Crap-A-Rama". Nice to know it won't catch them by surprise. They already know Grammy's a loon :)

TLW...ROAR!

7:24am • #50

Thanks Jim,  It is alot of fun and addicting to blog.  At the same time it can be very intimidating.
Being a genealogy researcher #7 REALLY hit home  :)

7:40am • #51
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Good post and your tips are so much easier said then done.  It is something I strive to do every time I blog and I think I am becoming better at it all the time.

7:56am • #52

One of the things I know I need to work on are the headlines. I'm not an experience writer, but looking at other people's blogs is a good idea for inspiration. Thanks.

Diane Schubach
8:58am • #53

Thanks for the info, I'm always looking for ways to improve my internet image so any time I see an article such as yours, I make sure I read it thoroughly.  I'm still perfecting my blogging skills and find articles such as yours very helpful.  Thanks again.

Jill Nelson
11:13am • #54

Jim,

Very interesting and great advises!

It gives me good tips to be more confident when writing on my blog!

 

12:03pm • #55
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All good points, but especially no. 7. 

Let's remember that someone reading our posts in the FUTURE will form an opinion about what we write NOW.

Thanks!

12:04pm • #56

I'm new to the blogging world!   Thanks for the tips.

2:04pm • #57
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Great points, I know I've been guilty of some of these in the past.  Thank you for sharing as I'm working on taking my blogging to the next level! 

6:22pm • #58
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11
2009
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Jim:  You have brought up some great points... and I appreciate that.  You've emphasized a few things that I have gotten away from in my posts... thank you for that.  Take care... and thanks for sharing.

12:01am • #59
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Jim,

Excellent post.  I shall take these into consideration in my future blogging.

Ann Hayden in cold Wildwood, Missouri

10:21pm • #60
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15
2009
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Jim,

All seven points are helpful.

The one that seems most valuable to me is, "...stop worrying about being INTERESTING, and blog about things that you are INTERESTED in. Be INTERESTED. Your passion, knowledge, and general interest are contagious."

Thanks

10:43am • #61
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18
2009
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Thanks Jim!  I definitely just need to relax and keep writing.  I feel like everything that goes out needs to be perfect, but I need to just keep telling myself that I'm not writing for the Wall St. Journal!

12:25pm • #62
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27
2009
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Jim - excellent information, you're so right about titles, they are critical for a good blog.

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