grammar in real estate marketing copy: Searching for the subject or verb
- 07/17/17 04:03 PM
Have you ever started reading a long sentence or paragraph and suddenly become lost? It happened to me today when I was reading bios on a company’s website.
I thought “Why am I getting so confused here?” Then I realized – many of the sentences were missing either their subject or their verb. Or, in some cases, both. They were perhaps 20 words long, but they weren’t “going anywhere.”
Who did what? Who is what?
These sentences were better suited to be broken down into bullet points – with some kind of introductory sentence to tell the reader what he or … (19 comments)
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Have you ever started reading a long sentence or paragraph and suddenly become lost? It happened to me today when I was reading bios on a company’s website. 
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