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Real Estate Ad Reads "Nice Home, Nice Yard, Nice Layout...(Gag)..Can I Have Some Water Here?

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Real Estate Agent with MOOERS REALTY ME Broker License 106759

    

People come in all shapes, sizes, colors, temperaments. Real estate is the same way.

So when Joe or maine lake scene,drews lake linneus maineJosephine Broker take pen in hand or sit down to the keyboard to create a real estate advertising piece, it is not one size fits all.

If the ads in the Sunday paper seem to be all the same vanilla plain jane and even interchangeable, that newsprint and space is being wasted.

If the ad is written in the hurry it shows. If the person writing the ad has never been to the property, to be safe, it is bland. Or they are grasping at something to post that is different, remarkable, worth mentioning.

This copy is lacking the highlights, the sizzle of the steak.

Maybe all the writer had was the hard to read hen stratchings on the comment notes when the listing was hurriedly created, thrown on a desk and not posted by the lister, the guy who has walked thru the place, taken the pictures and video.

     When you create an ad, do you describe the property and assume the standard position on same ole same ole blurb? Why?

If you were looking for real estate, wouldn't it be great if the ad spoke to you about the property.

When asked a question like "How does this yard grab you?"?

And instead of a front straight on shot with four cars in the yard at sunset with bright sun obscuring the view as it floods the camera, shutting down the exposure for a dark image, you show the spectacular rear yard, or sweeping staircase as the lead photo?

Or the big backyard with a home inset from an attractive angle? Isn't that creating eye candy, the copy making your ad stand out, expecting an answer or opinion of the reader, viewer?

Asking questions is the best way to learn about someone, something and to elicit an opinion, indicating you care what the maine lake sunset,aroostook county lake waterfrontother person thinks or you need a reaction, a comment.

And if you also put yourself in the moccasins of the reader, viewer.

When you hit a chord with the ad that is so timely, so tailored to their life need at the time.

     For example, three day Memorial weekend just happened.

Wouldn't it have been nice to have a place on water in say Maine to run away to for burgers, friends and family around a camp fire with loons crying, the moon out and dancing small diamonds off the smooth as a bottle lake you get excited about from your lawn chair?

Do your ads hit a need, relate to the special niche audience you are after or are they always one size fits all copy, images, video or blog posts?

The ad headline for this property could be "What Do You Want To Be Doing Next Memorial Day Weekend? or "You Work Way Way Too Hard, Have A Lawn Chair, Take A Load maine real estate for sale,mooers realty realtorOff Your Feet".

Both are not charging into the "Nice Place On A Lake With Nice Lot" standard procedure.

Brokers are not robots and their ads should reflect the excitement, passion about what the property has to "speak" to others about.

Do your local real estate ads talk?

Or are they sleepy, boring, pretty much interchangeable and look like most of the others on the weekend edition herd in your newspaper or on line in a marketplace collection? 

Do you show the benefits to owning the property?

The activities the buyer is going to enjoy, the area it is in in your videos, the copy write up and image array? Real estate is in a fixed position location that has a lot to offer for recreation fun and convenience.  

branding your real estateWhy not test drive describe what it would feel like living here in this real estate location?

Isn't that what would hook your interest and motivate the buyer?

Not just seeing a tired not even rewritten lack luster ad copy week after week?

With the same mls photo never rotated or revisited when the snow is off the ground?

Marketing Maine real estate, sell the sizzle not the steak.

Maine REALTOR Andrew Mooers - Take it Easy, Live A Little In Maine, The Way Life Should Be.

    

Comments(41)

Chris Olsen
Olsen Ziegler Realty - Cleveland, OH
Broker Owner Cleveland Ohio Real Estate

Hi Andrew -- Great points.  Benefits, not features, should be talked about, as that is what draws people in, when well done.

May 26, 2009 03:54 PM
Christine Donovan
Donovan Blatt Realty - Costa Mesa, CA
Broker/Attorney 714-319-9751 DRE01267479 - Costa M

I think the idea of a little more creativity is a great idea and will look at it for a few of my listings.

May 26, 2009 04:35 PM
Anonymous
Paula Christo

I don't think you need an English degree to get creative. Some great ideas here.  I always gag when the description says "Too many great features to mention" . Couldn't they just print a few? LOL  Your photos and script make me want to come spend the weekend in Maine!

May 26, 2009 04:51 PM
#24
Shirley Parks
Sands Realty 210-414-0966 - San Antonio, TX
Broker, 210-414-0966, San Antonio TX Real Estate

LOL @ Andrea.  I have wondered the same thing but I think that is just an angelic halo on Andrew's head.

May 26, 2009 04:58 PM
Patricia Aulson
BERKSHIRE HATHAWAY HOME SERVICES Verani Realty NH Real Estate - Exeter, NH
Realtor - Portsmouth NH Homes-Hampton NH Homes

I think some of us have the gift and some don't.

Patricia Aulson/Portsmouth NH Real Estate

May 27, 2009 04:34 AM
Kim Dean
www.GoSimplyTexas.com - McKinney, TX
Simply Texas Real Estate - Broker/Owner

Patricia is right that some of us have it and other don't. But, for crying out loud, if you DON'T have the gift - HIRE SOMEONE WHO DOES! "Nice this and Nice that" don't cut it for the amount of money sellers are paying. Imaginative and persuading ads can go a long way without being cheesy. Great post! Hope your Memorial Day was a great one!

May 27, 2009 06:48 AM
Andrew Mooers | 207.532.6573
MOOERS REALTY - Houlton, ME
Northern Maine Real Estate-Aroostook County Broker

I think it is not always the agent/broker in a huge mega office..I think it is the person the listing gets thrown the listing and to fend for themselves. If the agent that took the listing, snapped the images, shot the video did the input, nothing should be lost in translation. Watching the video if narrated and not a slide show with ivories tinking but loaded with property information in the narrative, the person writing the ad could do a better job having had some Monarch or Cliff's Note to prepare for the property exam!

May 27, 2009 08:49 AM
Anna "Banana" Kruchten
HomeSmart Real Estate - Phoenix, AZ
602-380-4886

SOLD!  How much did I pay for that great place?  Priceless!  When can I move it?  Our kids will love it.

May 27, 2009 10:29 AM
Lane Bailey
Century 21 Results Realty - Suwanee, GA
Realtor & Car Guy

My theme this week is exceptionalism.  And copy is one of those things that we need to examine in order to be exceptional.  The standard blather is pretty tired...  Of course, HUD isn't making it any easier since they tell us we can't talk about the buyer, but only about the property. 

May 27, 2009 11:09 AM
Anonymous
paula Samuel
I have the same issue with pictures. I don't get why agents take a million outdoor shots, and one interior. Or the agents that take interior shots of filthy kitchens, unmade beds, mounds of stuff...we are all adept at reading and scanning the same old descriptives, but pictures truly speak a 1000 words.
May 27, 2009 12:34 PM
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Candice A. Donofrio
Next Wave RE Investments LLC Bullhead City AZ Commercial RE Broker - Fort Mohave, AZ
928-201-4BHC (4242) call/text

We're always selling a lifestyle in addition to a property . . . I would think that using all the senses to describe the feeling could provide material even in the midst of writer's block . . . :)

May 27, 2009 02:51 PM
Sharon Alters
Coldwell Banker Vanguard Realty - 904-673-2308 - Fleming Island, FL
Realtor - Homes for Sale Fleming Island FL

English major here - and I totally agree with you about the bland descriptions in many ads. We added AdWriter to our repertoire last year. We don't use it verbatim but it helps with descriptions when we have writer's block - helpful in grabbing title ideas as well.

Sharon

May 27, 2009 03:10 PM
Andrew Mooers | 207.532.6573
MOOERS REALTY - Houlton, ME
Northern Maine Real Estate-Aroostook County Broker

Study other brokers in other markets, watch media and see how you can apply to your special property. Have fun with it the key. Dare to be different.

May 27, 2009 03:25 PM
Rob D. Shepherd
RETIRED - Florence, OR
RETIRED

I purchased a booklet a few years ago Words That Sell by George A Paukert. This has been helpful in creating interesting adds. I too wonder why agents advertise a view home with no photos of the view. Worse yet take a home with a marginal view and take a view shot three blocks away. The same boring stuff happens at MLS meetings.reading the boring planos to me  that I have already read. Tell me something interesting about the place and why I should show it!

May 28, 2009 03:57 AM
Diane Plant
Forest Hill Real Estate Inc, Brokerage - Toronto, ON
Broker, TorontoHomeSearch: Forest Hill Real Estate

Nice is a mediocre word. It lacks enthusiasm and hype.

I used to hate putting pictures in ads, but it is a necessity in todays internet home search. There is only so long you can go against the grain. It is gratifying when people get in touch and compliment the pictures and tell you that was one of the reasons they got in touch.

May 28, 2009 10:07 AM
Andrew Mooers | 207.532.6573
MOOERS REALTY - Houlton, ME
Northern Maine Real Estate-Aroostook County Broker

There is alot to being a professional top knotch broker. And we all have strengths, weaknesses. A weakness to writing ads, taking pictures are a serious handicap but the agent could be great with people, aggressive to get the details done, follow up, with lots of hussle to do other aspects. That's where a personal assistant comes in to pick up the slack. An agent, broker that is pretty talented in all the departments and hands on from start to finish for the details will do well in any market.

May 28, 2009 11:30 AM
Ray Lane
OpenHouseHD - Salt Lake City, UT

The problem is that people don't use proper marketingtechniques.  It is way to easy to say "nice yard".  The proper thing to do is to think about the property and who would really want this house.  Is it in a kid-friendly area or does it have quick access to the expressway?  You have to know your audience, hit their hotbuttons, and take a chance.  Some would say that this limits your potential market, but it will hit the highest probability group really hard.

May 30, 2009 04:14 PM
Andrew Mooers | 207.532.6573
MOOERS REALTY - Houlton, ME
Northern Maine Real Estate-Aroostook County Broker

You want to hit a large audience. You want to hit that audience many times, not just once. Fine tuning to a certain niche means your copy has to be fine tuned and beamed in that direction to make it fit, get it seen and remembered.

May 31, 2009 09:54 AM
Hannah Williams
HomeStarr Realty - Philadelphia, PA
Expertise NE Philadelphia & Bucks 215-820-3376

 Andrew.....OK you are hired ..when can you start...LOL..You are so right on ..It takes time and a little bit of effort..  and if the sellers do not notice somtweet tweete of the agents don't take pride in their ads ..Thank you

HelpfulHannah your friend in Philadelphia

Jun 01, 2009 03:08 PM
Andrew Mooers | 207.532.6573
MOOERS REALTY - Houlton, ME
Northern Maine Real Estate-Aroostook County Broker

If you are excited about the place, it shows. If your ad talks to the reader one on one, not at them or stilted like stale recycled copy of just dry as dust words, it will sell.

Jun 02, 2009 12:54 AM