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Getting My Daughter High at the Beach.

By
Real Estate Broker/Owner with Joel McDonald -- www.AutomatedHomefinder.com

Ha ha -- made you look...

Whether writing a blog post, a classified ad for your listing, an Adwords Ad, or anything else - the headline is 90% of the equation when it comes to readership. A boring headline (whether relevant or not) could get 99% less traffic than a compelling headline.

I'm on vacation with my extended family, and my brother took a great picture of my daughter and me playing in the waves.  When I shared with my Facebook & Twitter friends, I used a headline something to the effect of "Playing at the beach in North Carolina" I got less than a dozen views in the first hour.

Then, I thought of a funny headline, so for kicks, I deleted the old post and reposted the picture. The jump in response rate was pretty interesting...

 

 

 

Even though it was the same exact picture, and only an hour after the first time I posted, it, my twitter post of "Getting my daughter high at the beach" got over 100 views before an hour had passed. (152 views after 77 minutes, to be exact.)

Next time you're writing an ad that you want to get as many eyeballs on as possible, it might be worth your while to do some pre-testing of a couple titles to see which is the most catchy. Below are a few ways to do your testing:

  1. Set up a BudURL.com account to track your clickthroughs, and post a couple different titles to your Twitter account with a budURL link pointing at your blog post.  If one gets a better clickthrough rate than the other, use that title & you're likely to get better readership over time.
  2. If you're testing website content, it might be worth pre-testing by running a couple different Adwords ads with different headlines. Whichever ad has the higher clickthrough rate (which Google automatically tracks for you) should be the winner. Take that ad copy, incorporate it into your web copy, and you'll likely see an increase in the number of website visitors that turn into leads! (For more information from me about Adwords as a traffic source, visit TripleYourTraffic.net.)
  3. Mturk.com is probably one of the best websites I've ever found for testing headlines.  In a nutshell, you can get instant feedback for as little as a few pennies per opinion.  If you're debating between a couple different headlines for your blog post, press release, or classified ad, "just mturk it"!  All you have to do is bid a few pennies per opinion, and ask "Which headline makes you more interested in reading the article that follows: "A) Cute picture of me & my daughter jumping at the beach or B) Getting my daughter high at the beach."  For a total of $2.50 (a nickel per opinion) -- 10 minutes later, you could have 50 "votes" from people around the united states who will chime in with what they feel is the more compelling headline...

Next time you want to get traffic to your blog, website, or phone - try adding a little extra zing to your title or headline... I bet you'll see a big difference in response rates.

 

 

 

 

 

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Linda Breeding
Keller Williams Realty - Pinehurst, NC

I love this post! What a wonderful tip. You are bookmarked! Hmmm.........think I might go back and look at some of my headlines.

 

Jul 14, 2009 09:09 AM
Michael J. Perry
Fathom Realty - Lancaster, PA
Lancaster, PA Relo Specialist

Reeled me in .......

Jul 14, 2009 09:17 AM
Bill Blair
Coldwell Banker Realty - Covington, GA
Covington Georgia Realtor Covington Living Homes

Great tips, Joel!  When I think about it.... well, duh!  Of course the headline is what grabs you.  Yours certainly grabbed me.  So thanks for the info and the post.  It's certainly something I'll think about from now on.

Jul 14, 2009 09:23 AM
"The Lovely Wife" The One And Only TLW.
President-Tutas Towne Realty, Inc. - Kissimmee, FL

Joel...

The trick has always been to make a reader curious. Curiosity kills the cat ya know :)

TLW...ROAR!

Jul 14, 2009 09:30 AM
Christianne O'Malley
Dickson Realty - Reno, NV
Exceptional Service - Delivering Results in Reno!

Very cute! I love the photo too!

Jul 14, 2009 09:35 AM
Michelle Gibson
Hansen Real Estate Group Inc. - Wellington, FL
REALTOR

Joel - Great post and tips!  You pulled me in with that headline.

Jul 14, 2009 09:35 AM
Anna "Banana" Kruchten
HomeSmart Real Estate - Phoenix, AZ
602-380-4886

Great photo!  And the headling does make a difference.  Thanks for all the great tips.....I didn't know anything about any of them.  Love it!

Jul 14, 2009 11:13 AM
Jason Crouch
Austin Texas Homes, LLC - Austin, TX
Broker - Austin Texas Real Estate (512-796-7653)

Joel - You are one of today's "catchiest headline award" winners.  I also use BudURL to track clicks, etc.  I know the guy who owns the company.

Jul 14, 2009 11:26 AM
Elizabeth Bolton
RE/MAX Destiny Real Estate Cambridge, MA - Cambridge, MA
Cambridge MA Realtor

Hi Joel ~ These are new to me - thanks for the tips.

Liz

Jul 14, 2009 11:47 AM
Jeff Belonger
Social Media - Infinity Home Mortgage Company, Inc - Cherry Hill, NJ
The FHA Expert - FHA Loans - FHA mortgages - USDA loans - VA Loans

Joel... you make a good point... and I think it is really good when you are social networking. ...  ie : here on AR, through Twitter, and maybe facebook. I think you would have a better click rate on AR and Twitter, before facebook.  But I will disagree and say that I could do better by building an online presence by blogging, with rich key words.   I don't consider myself a pro at this... and twitter and several others are really new... but I bet I could get more leads off a well written blog with key words than I could with a catchy title. I guess it depends on your audience and what you are trying to accomplish. Again, I think you have some good tips, but this could be misleading to many new members on AR....  they might do catchy titles on here, but lack searches. Keeping in mind that your subject alone, with the right key words, could be powerful and get better searches... just my .02.

jeff belonger

Jul 14, 2009 02:48 PM
Chris Olsen
Olsen Ziegler Realty - Cleveland, OH
Broker Owner Cleveland Ohio Real Estate

Hi Joel -- It looks maybe like you were in the Outer Banks?  I've been there many times and what a fun place.  And, what an exceptional photo, what a treasure.  Thanks for the practical tips as well.

Jul 14, 2009 03:41 PM
Christine Donovan
Donovan Blatt Realty - Costa Mesa, CA
Broker/Attorney 714-319-9751 DRE01267479 - Costa M

Your title definitely caught my attention, and you've given us a lot of good ideas to make sure that we've written catchy titles.

Jul 14, 2009 04:25 PM
Bob & Carolin Benjamin
Benjamin Realty LLC - Gold Canyon, AZ
East Phoenix Arizona Homes

All great tips -- thanks for the advise and tips -- and have fun at the beach.

Jul 14, 2009 07:59 PM
William James Walton Sr.
WEICHERT, REALTORSĀ® - Briotti Group - Waterbury, CT
Greater Waterbury Real Estate

You definitely got my attention, Joel. It was good that you actually explained why you used the title that you did for this blog entry. I didn't think your mind was in the gutter, but I did raise my eyebrow a bit when I read the title, and thought, WHAT????

Jul 15, 2009 01:13 AM
Nicholas Goraczkowski
Aurora, CO
Your Mortgage Resource - (720) 83-RATES

Wow. that is a strong stat. great way to illustrate your point.

Jul 15, 2009 05:25 AM
Angela Zuyus
Keller Williams Realty-Abilene - Abilene, TX

Well you got my attention! I had to check this out to see exactly how high your daughter got!!! I have two little girls, too!

Jul 15, 2009 06:12 AM
Rebecca Gaujot, RealtorĀ®
Lewisburg, WV
Lewisburg WV, the go to agent for all real estate

Joel. thanks for the tips.  The title was great...and definitely caught my eye.

Jul 15, 2009 07:42 AM
Joel McDonald
Joel McDonald -- www.AutomatedHomefinder.com - Castle Pines North, CO

Thanks again for the kind words everyone.  I'd love to address each one of you, but as Matt said -- I am still on vacation ;-)

Jeff B - I agree with you 100%, and you're right - I could have pointed out that keywords are still important.  However, every post can't be completely keyword optimized. Otherwise, readership would suffer.  Although I agree that keywords are very important if you want to be found by the search engines, clickthroughs will suffer if a title tag looks spammy like this:

Denver CO real estate | Denver Metro homes for sale | Denver Colorado Realtor®

vs.

Instantly access thousands of Denver CO homes for sale. No registration required.

OK - kids are done with naps... Back to the beach ;-)

Jul 15, 2009 08:20 AM
Jeff Belonger
Social Media - Infinity Home Mortgage Company, Inc - Cherry Hill, NJ
The FHA Expert - FHA Loans - FHA mortgages - USDA loans - VA Loans

Joel.....  true, about how you tag something.  But your post was about catchy titles....  which in many cases can be handled differently. .. at least in my opinion.   thanks for the feedback.  And have fun on your vacation. I will be on one for 7 days at the end of this month.

jeff belonger

Jul 15, 2009 06:38 PM
Joel McDonald
Joel McDonald -- www.AutomatedHomefinder.com - Castle Pines North, CO

Jeff: When I refer to "Title Tag" I'm referring to the title (or headline) that shows up in the SERPS, not tags themselves.  I think we're saying the same thing.

Jul 15, 2009 10:37 PM