To Be Loved ...

By
Services for Real Estate Pros with Auto & Home & Life Insurance throughout North Carolina

The tugs came rampant and vibrant and poetic and with that, I give you ... one of the best poems I've ever laid my soul upon:

I Will Wait


I am an arrow
Aimed with trust and devotion
Adrift in the falling dark,
Sailing above white fences
State lines and through the Milky Way

Seasons change and I disappear
Beyond the horizon
Unraveling,
dissipating into oblivion.
Far into my flight there is
No turning back.
I watch the light break through the sky
My pilgrimage before me in the blue distance.

Flames break free and
Frightening spikes of passion become
Wedged between hours and months and
Rainfalls.
And if I don't stop,
It will be impossible to tell where I end
And you begin.
With only the here and now,
The once was,
And the soon to be...

I will wait for you.

~By Jennifer Monroe~

How can I not cuddle up to that?  Time to hit the sheets ... and the other half of my soul.  No worries, we got a room:)

Comments (20)

Tammy Lankford,
Lane Realty Eatonton, GA Lake Sinclair, Milledgeville, 706-485-9668 - Eatonton, GA
Broker GA Lake Sinclair/Eatonton/Milledgeville

awesome love

Jan 12, 2011 04:08 PM
Larry Bettag
Cherry Creek Mortgage Illinois Residential Mortgage License LMB #0005759 Cherry Creek Mortgage NMLS #: 3001 - Saint Charles, IL
Vice-President of National Production

I was gonna make a smart ass comment like "stick it," for fun....but after I read it....let's be honest.....awesome poem dude.  Awesome!

Jan 12, 2011 04:09 PM
Carla Harbert
www.LorainCountyHomeSales.com - Avon, OH
RE/MAX Omega: Lorain-Medina County Area

That is absolutely touching - beautiful words. Thanks for sharing!

Jan 12, 2011 04:12 PM
Wendy Betts
RE/MAX PROGROUP - SOUTH DELTA /SOUTH SURREY & WHITE ROCK - Tsawwassen, BC
South Delta & S. Surrey Realtor

Yes - what a wonderful prose... could be lyrics to a beautiful love song, Jason! 

Jan 12, 2011 04:12 PM
Peggy Hughes/pha logistix, inc.
pha logistix inc - San Francisco, CA
SF NYC LA

Thank you for sharing... it is a really beautiful poem.

Jan 12, 2011 04:15 PM
Celeste "SALLY" Cheeseman
Liberty Homes - Mililani, HI
(RA) AHWD CRS ePRO OAHU HAWAII REAL ESTATE

She is just so beautiful in words that come from the depth of her soul ....ah, but the definite two souls who cannot mesh together...but have separate entities ...so as to compliment each other.  Now...go cuddle :)

Jan 12, 2011 04:18 PM
Jason Sardi
Auto & Home & Life Insurance throughout North Carolina - Charlotte, NC
Your Agent for Life

Make no mistake, this lyrical work here was the articulation of my bias (but hard to argue against case) choice for the best damn writer not published or Published for that matter ... Jennifer "F'N" Monroe!

And Bettag, never hold back with the smart-ass stuff.  An appropriate insert of humor can be just as beautiful.

Jan 12, 2011 04:23 PM
Charles Buell
Charles Buell Inspections Inc. - Seattle, WA
Seattle Home Inspector

Jason, you are one lucky dude---I recommend hugging as soon as possible and all the time---even when you can't be there.

Jan 12, 2011 04:39 PM
June Lewis
Northwood Realty Services - New Castle, PA
Realtor Northwood Realty - New Castle,Pa Lawrence Co 7247304571

Wow....you two never cease to wow and amaze me......a match certainly made in heaven...There is such a beautiful depth and creative genius to you both " I will wait " just has to be published.  It needs to be shared.

love you both..............................

Jan 12, 2011 06:24 PM
Kate Bourland
Marketing with Kate - Redding, CA
Onlilne Marketing Mobile Marketing

Jason, I haven't read your blog in a while.  What gem, I'll definitely be back more often!

Jan 12, 2011 06:37 PM
Kimberly A Norgard
Devlin McNiff Halstead Real Estate - East Hampton, NY

Beautiful, eloquent and lovely.  This one will stick with me throughout the day.  Thank you.

Jan 12, 2011 07:51 PM
TeamCHI - Complete Home Inspections, Inc.
Complete Home Inspections, Inc. - Brentwood, TN
Home Inspectons - Nashville, TN area - 615.661.029

Pretty Cool. I like it...

Jan 12, 2011 09:58 PM
Liz and Bill Spear
RE/MAX Alliance 513.520.5305 www.LizTour.com - Mason, OH
RE/MAX Alliance Cincinnati & Dayton suburbs

And that was completely different, and worthwhile too!  You've hit the jackpot Mr. Sardi, but I believe you already know that!

Jan 12, 2011 10:17 PM
John MacArthur
Century 21 Redwood - Washington, DC
Licensed Maryland/DC Realtor, Metro DC Homes

Son...

You have fulfilled your duty. When words find the page following the gentle whisper of the muse, they are but petals on a flower at the stroke of midnight. They remain in the darkness until that time when the sunrise of sharing allows them to stand tall in our morning.

Once shared, they move beyond the realm of fantasy and privacy and give the world the opportunity to stop, look and listen. The reader is offered the opportunity to wander the vast network of their own experiences and give picture to prose, music to words and feeling to ambiguous emotions.

These thoughts cascading from first word to last are no longer Jennifer's. She has unlocked the tablet door and given them to you. Unselfishly you have given them to us. In return, some will comment, some will remain quiet, but all have benefited.

Our experience and growth through your sharing finally gives Jen access to the karma created. We are better for receiving this gift and she is better for opening that door.

thanks

 

 

Jan 13, 2011 12:10 AM
Nevin Williams
Fairway Independent Mortgage Corporation - Cary, NC
Senior Mortgage Advisor

Jason - Way to go dude!

Jan 13, 2011 12:14 AM
Russell Lewis
Realty Austin, Austin Texas Real Estate - Austin, TX
Broker,CLHMS,GRI

Jason...when it comes to this lottery...you and I hit the JACKPOT!

How could you not cuddle up to that ;-)

Jan 13, 2011 06:58 AM
Jennifer Monroe
Savvy + Company Real Estate - Charlotte, NC
Real Estate REALTORĀ®/Broker in Beautiful Charlotte

Thank you baby :) I remember exactly how I felt when I wrote this for you. I can't imagine ever feeling any other way :)

Jan 13, 2011 12:52 PM
Sharon Lee
Sharon Lee's Virtual Assistance - Jonesborough, TN
Retired and loving life

Jason-You got yourself a talented and classy lady so you better be damn good to her.

OK I made a comment so put me on your Excel spreadsheet so you don't take me off your subscriber list LOL

Jan 14, 2011 02:01 PM
William James Walton Sr.
WEICHERT, REALTORSĀ® - Briotti Group - Waterbury, CT
Greater Waterbury Real Estate

Jason, you've got it good, man. One can only hope to ever find a love like that...

Jan 14, 2011 04:08 PM
Alexsandra Stewart
Remax equity group - Portland, OR
Broker - Portland Oregon Real Estate

Nice-- you know I love her writing. But it didn't explain the Sky Watcher name change.  Unless you are turning to astrology!   Still on my quest.

Jan 18, 2011 05:47 PM