4 Frequent Copywriting Mistakes and How to Avoid Them

Real Estate Agent with Na Pali Properties, Inc.

Whether online or offline, when your marketing materials aren’t generating the results you’d hoped for, take a closer look at them. Sit down and read your copy carefully because it’s possible you’re making one (or several) of these 4 common copywriting mistakes.
Mistake #1. You’ve written copy that starts with the product instead of with the prospect. Customers don’t buy products, they buy what the products do for them (i.e. benefits).
DO: Begin with the concerns of your reader. Tell him/her “what’s in it for me?” As a writer, create a picture in your mind of your ideal customer – their lifestyle, their wants/needs, their pains or frustrations. Then, identify with your customer, put yourself in his or her shoes and write.
Mistake #2. Where’s the big idea? The mistake is the absence of a big idea also known as a unique selling proposition (USP). Direct marketing pro Bob Stone says that people respond to any given proposition for one of 2 reasons: to gain something they do not have or to avoid losing something they now possess.
DO: Write about something specific or inherent to your product (i.e its unique difference). Do your best to express the big idea in a single sentence. For instance, “Speak Spanish Like a Diplomat” (created by colleague Don Hauptman for a set of language tapes)
Mistake #3. The sin of superficiality or not digging deeply enough. You copy is lacking in details.
DO: Tempt your audience or tease them.. What are your prospect’s biggest fears (i.e. the desire to avoid loss) or opportunities he perceives he’ll gain (i.e. the desire to gain something)?
Mistake #4. The lack of social proof. You don’t establish a sense of trust so there’s no incentive to read further.
DO: Use tools that increase your credibility. Be sure copy is anchored in reality, human interest (i.e. testimonials, real life incidents), mention actual events, give results, etc.
5. Burying your strongest selling point.

DO: Start with your strongest selling point.
So go ahead and re-read your marketing copy. Are you making any of the aforementioned mistakes? If so, give your content “new life” by following one or all of the 4 tips suggested above. Then, let me know how it goes by entering your comments below. Or, if you’d like a 20 minute complimentary one-on-one consultation, submit the Contact Form on my Web site for The Write Direction (in addition to being a Realtor-Associate, I'm a professional copywriter) and we’ll schedule a call. I’d love to hear from you.

Thanks and have a great day.

Debra A. Jason, RA, ABR

When paradise is calling you, call me!

Na Pali Properties, Inc.

Conveniently located on the highway in the heart of Hanalei.


Comments (1)

The Niche Agent
The Niche Agent
Your Niche Is Our Niche

Great post! Speaking of copywriting, I wanted to share the episode of my podcast that I just launched where I interview Chris Barr from Barr Direct. Chris is an awesome copywriter and we discuss real estate and copywriting. 



Ryan Smith - The Niche Agent

Apr 28, 2014 09:03 AM