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Can Agents Bad Grammar Cause Problems For Sellers?

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Real Estate Agent with RE/MAX Distinctive / LIC in VA

Nice looking fit young lady puts house on market. Was surprised when she returned home and found several men had attentened her first open house, and actually signed in and left their real phone #s and emails. WOW, she says, I thought it was a slow market. Soon she recieves multiple offers! She accepts one over list. This is great.....!

 Contract, walk-thru all go fine! At closing buyer asks seller how she would like to convey the one-night stand?

Seller: What do you mean? It's in the bedroom. Buyer: You know what I mean! Seller: I'm not really sure what you're getting at? Buyer: You know, the "Incentive" that you promised to convey! It's right here in the MLS and in the contract. " One-night stand conveys with sale. Seller: Oh, that's not what I meant. It should have said "One nightstand". My agent misspelled it. Buyer: Well, your agent might have just gotten you into trouble. This is a legally binding contract. Seller: This can't be real? Settlement Attorney: I'm afraid he's correct Ms. seller. This seems to be a common mistake agents make....The MLS is full of similar mistakes..... You can finish the story however you want! It is not a real story, i just made it to to show that in some states like VA, agents need to be careful about what they say and write.

"Beautiful Colonial, 3 fin lvls, oversized gargage, deck, fenced yard. Many incentives- Owner says Riding Mower, Stainless Grill, Master BDR suite w Queen size bed, his and her dressers, and one-night stand all convey with sale!"

The moral of the story is, there are many choices available to agents where your writings and blog posts can be proofread, and spelling errors identified and corrected before you post. Here is a FREE one wher you can just copy and paste your blog ( or your remarks column in MLS). Visit www.grammarly.com and use their Free tool. My results for above post scored 49 out of 100. I've obviously got a lot to learn.

49 of 100

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Jeff Pearl / REALTOR/ RE/MAX Distinctive Lic in VA

703-727-4876

jeffpearlhomes.com

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Kevin Sembrat
Diversified RCS Inc; http://www.ManhattanPropertiesGroup.com - Manhattan, NY

Hi Jeff,

Your post really promotes some thought about using correct language in listings -- because of the implications your story raises, I've SUGGESTED it for Feature. 

Of course, the story does not address whether the Seller had an attorney who could have appropriately countered the Buyer's attorney's argument by pointing out that the common accepted interpretation of "one night-stand", or "one nightstand", or "one night stand" (or even nitestand, knightstand, etc.), particularly in a real estate P&S Agreement, would be one commonly known piece of bedroom furniture rather than a one-time intimate physical encounter between consenting adults who are supposed to be negotiating at arms-length as Buyer and Seller in a binding real estate contract.

That said, kudos to you for your honesty and courage in admitting to your 49 out of 100 for your blog -- and posting it as is without first amending it to be a 100 out of 100! ;-)

Best,

Kevin

May 18, 2012 12:49 AM
Jeff Pearl
RE/MAX Distinctive / LIC in VA - Lovettsville, VA
Full Service Full Time Realtor

#1- Hi Kevin, Thanks for reply. I know this could never happen in real life with attorneys involved. I was jsut fabricating a scenario to show that agents need to be more careful about what they say and write. Some States are stricter than others, and sometimes what an agent says can be enforced on the seller. I was guessing I had made maybe 5 or so mistakes, but I was sure wrong. I'll work on getting my grade up. Maybe I can get over 75 next time?

May 18, 2012 02:46 AM