How To Create Advertising That Sells

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He was dubbed  “the most sought-after wizard” in advertising by Time Magazine. Some of the products he helped make famous include Dove Soap, Rolls Royce and Hathaway shirts. In just one year he increased Mercedes-Benz sales by 400%.

Of course I am talking about David Ogilvy. This is a follow up post on the David Ogilvy video I posted. Here you will discover 38 points David Ogilvy shared in an ad where he describes what he found to work in developing an ad campaign, he covers both television and print.

The picture you see above is a image of the orginal editorial style ad he ran to promote his agency. It is a rather famous ad he ran to get more clients, and there is a lot we can learn from it. You can read the entire ad in the text below. 

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Ogilvy & Mather has created over $1,480,000,000 worth of advertising. Here, with all the dogmatism of brevity are 38 of the things we have learned.

1.  The most important decision. We have learned that the effect of your advertising on your sales depends more on this decision than on any other: how should you position your product? Should you position Schweppes as a soft drink – or as a mixer?  Should you position Dove as a product for dry skin or as a product which gets hands really clean?  The results of your campaign depend less on how we write your advertising than how your product is positioned.  It follows that positioning should be decided before the advertising is created.  Research can help.  Look before you leap.

2.  Large promise. The second most important decision is this:  what should you promise the customer?  A promise is not a claim, or a theme, or a slogan.  It is a benefit for the consumer.  It pays to promise a benefit which is unique and competitive, and the product must deliver the benefit your promise.  Most advertising promises nothing.  It is doomed to fail in the marketplace.  ”Promise, large promise, is the soul of an advertisement”  - said Samuel Johnson.

3.  Brand image. Every advertisement should contribute to the complex symbol which is the brand image.  95% of all advertising is created ad hoc.  Most products lack any consistent image from one year to another.  The manufacturer who dedicates his advertising to building the most sharply defined personality for his brand gets the largest share of the market.

4. Big ideas. Unless your advertising is built on a big idea, it will pass like a ship in the night. It takes a big idea to jolt the consumer out of his indifference – to make him notice your advertising, remember it and take action. Big ideas are usually simple ideas. Said Charles Kettering, the great General Motors inventor: “this problem, when solved, will be simple.” Big, simple ideas are not easy to come by. They require genius – and midnight oil. A truly big one can be continued for 20 years – like our eye patch for Hathaway shirts.

5. A first-class ticket. It pays to give most products an image of quality – a first-class ticket. Ogilvy & Mather  has been conspicuously successful in doing this – for Pepperidge, Hathaway, Mercedes Benz, Schweppes, Dove and others. If your advertising looks ugly, consumers will conclude that  your product is shoddy and they will be less likely to buy it.

6. Don’t be a bore. Nobody was ever bored into buying a product. Yet most advertising is impersonal, detached, cold – and dull. It pays to involve the customer. Talk to her like a human being. Charm her. Make her hungry. Get her to participate.

7. Innovate. Start trends – instead of following them. Advertising which follows a fashionable fad or is imitative, is seldom successful. It pays to innovate, to blaze new trails. But innovation is risky unless you pre-test your innovation with consumers. Look before you leap.

8.  Be suspicious of awards. The pursuit of creative awards seduces creative people from the pursuit of sales.  We have been unable to establish any correlation whatever between awards and sales.  At Ogilvy and Mather, we now give an annual award for the campaign which contributes the most to sales. Successful advertising sells the product without drawing attention to itself, it rivets the consumer’s attention on the product.  Make the product the hero of your advertising.

9.  Psychological Segmentation. Any good agency knows how to position products for demographic segments of the market – for men, for young children, for farmers in the south, etc.  But Ogilvy and Mather has learned that it often pays to position for psychological segments of the market.  Our Mercedes-Benz advertising is positioned to fit non-conformists who scoff at “status symbols” and reject flim-flam appeals to snobbery.

10.  Don’t bury news. It is easier to interest the consumer in a product when it is new than at any other point in its life.  Many copywriters have a fatal instinct for burying news.  That is why most advertising for new products fails to exploit the opportunity that genuine news provides.  It pays to launch your new product with a loud boom-boom.

11.  Go the whole hog. Most advertising campaigns are too complicated.  They reflect a long list of marketing objectives.  They embrace the divergent views of too many executives.  By attempting too many things, they achieve nothing.  It pays to boil down your strategy to one simple promise – and go the whole hog in delivering that promise.

What Works Best In Television

12.  Testimonials. Avoid irrelevant celebrities.  Testimonial commercials are almost always successful – if you make them credible.  Either celebrities or real people can be effective.  But avoid irrelevant celebrities whose fame has no natural connection with your product or your customers.  Irrelevant celebrities steal attention from your product.

13. Problem-solution (don’t cheat!) You set up a problem that the consumer recognizes. And you show how your product can solve that problem. And you prove the solution. This technique has always been above average in sales results, and it still is. But don’t use it unless you can do so without cheating: the consumer isn’t a moron. She is your wife.

14. Visual demonstrations. If they are honest, visual demonstrations are generally effective in the marketplace. It pays to visualize your promise. It saves time. It drives the promise home. It is memorable.

15. Slice of life. These playlets are corny, and most copywriters detect them. But they have sold a lot of merchandise, and are still selling.

16. Avoid logorrhea. Make your pictures tell the story. What you show is more important than what you say. Many commercials drown the viewer in a torrent of words. We call that logorrhea, (rhymes with diarrhea.) We have created some great commercials without words.

17. On-camera voice. Commercials using on-camera voice do significantly better than commercials using voice over.

18.  Musical Backgrounds. Most commercials use musical backgrounds.  However, on the average, musical backgrounds reduce recall of your commercial.  Very few creative people accept this.   But we never heard of an agency using musical background under a new business presentation.

19.  Stand-ups. The stand-up pitch can be effective, if it is delivered with straightforward honesty.

20.  Burr of singularity. The average consumer now sees 20,000 commercials a year; poor dear.  Most of them slide off her memory like water off a duck’s back.  Give your commercials a flourish of singularity, a burr that will stick in the consumer’s mind.  One such burr is the mnemonic device or relevant symbol – like the crowns in our commercials for Imperial Magazine.

21.  Animation and cartoons. Less than 5% of television commercials use cartoons or animation.  They are less persuasive than live commercials.  The consumer can not identify herself with the character in the cartoon and cartoon’s do not invite belief.  However, Carson-Roberts, our partners in Los Angeles, tell us that animation can be helpful when you are talking to children.  They should know, they have addressed more than 600 commercials to children.

22.  Salvage commercials. Many commercials which test poorly can be salvaged.  The faults revealed by the test can be corrected.  We have doubled the effectiveness of a commercial simply be re-editing it.

23.  Factual versus emotional. Factual commercials tend to be more effective than than emotional commercials.  However, Ogilvy & Mather has made some emotional commercials, which have been successful in the marketplace.  Among these are our campaigns for Maxwell House Coffee and Hershey’s Milk Chocolate.

24.  Grabbers. We have found that commercials with an exciting opening hold their audience at a higher level than commercials which begin quietly.

What Works Best In Print?

25. Headline. On the average, five times as many people read the headline as read the body copy.  It follows that, if you don’t sell the product in your headline, you have wasted 80% of your money.  That is why most Ogilvy and Mather headlines include the brand name and the promise.

26.  Benefited headline. Headlines that promise to benefit sell more than those that don’t.

27.  News and headlines. Time after time we have found that it pays to inject genuine news into headlines.  The consumer is always on the lookout for new products or new improvements in an old product, or new ways to use an old product.  Economists – even Russian economists – approve of this.  They call it “informative” advertising.  So do consumers.

28.  Simple headlines. Your headline should telegraph what you want to say – in simple language.  Readers do not stop to decipher the meanings of obscure headlines.

29.  How many words in a headline? In headline tests conducted with cooperation from a big department store, it was found that headlines of 10 words or longer sold more goods than short headlines.  In terms of recall, headlines between 8-and-10 words are most effective.  In mail order advertising, headlines between 6-and-12 words get the must coupon returns.  On the average, long headlines sell more merchandise than short ones – headlines like our “At 60 miles an hour, the loudest noise in this new Rolls-Royce comes from the electric clock.”

30.  Localize headlines. In local advertising, it pays to include the name of the city in your headline.

31.  Select your prospects. When you advertise your product which is consumed by a special group, it pays to flag that group in your headline – mothers, bedwetters, going to Europe?

32. Yes, people read long copy. Readership falls off rapidly up to 50 words, but drops very little between 50 and 500 words (this page contains 1,909 words, and you are reading it). Ogilvy & Mather has used long copy – with notable success – from Mercedes Benz, Cessna Citation, Merrill Lynch, and Shell Gasoline. “The more you tell, the more sell.”

33. Story appeal and picture. Ogilvy & Mather has gotten noticeable results with photographs, which suggest the story. The reader glances at the photograph and asks himself, “what goes on here?” Then he reads the copy to find out. Harold Rudolph called this magic element “story appeal.” The more of it you inject into your photograph, the more people look at your advertisements. It is easier said than done.

34. Before and after. Before and after advertisements are somewhat above average in attention value. Any form of visualized contrast seems to work well.

35. Photographs versus art work. Ogilvy & Mather has found that photographs work better than drawing – almost invariably. They attract more readers, generate more appetite appeal, are more believable, are better remembered, pull more coupons, and sell more merchandise.

36. Use captions to sell. On the average, twice as many people read the captions under photographs as read the body copies. It follows that you should never use a photograph without putting a caption under it; and each caption should be a miniature advertisement for the product – complete with the brand name and promise.

Number 37: Editorial layout. Ogilvy & Mather has had more success with editorial layouts, than with addy Layouts. Editorial layouts get higher readership than conventional advertisements.

Number 38: Repeat your winners. Scores of great advertisements have been discarded before they have begun to pay off.  Readership can actually increase with repetition – up to five repetitions.

Is this all we know?

These findings apply for most categories of products. But, not to all. Ogilvy & Mather has developed a separate and specialized body of knowledge on what makes for success in advertising food products, tourist destinations, proprietary medicines, children’s products – and other classifications. But, this special information is revealed only to the clients of Ogilvy & Mather.

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Real Estate Rev

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Comments (20)

Joan Whitebook
BHG The Masiello Group - Nashua, NH
Consumer Focused Real Estate Services

This post is priceless-  I am going to try incorporate these tips into my advertising and marketing in 2014~

Mar 08, 2014 11:59 AM
Charles Stallions
Charles Stallions Real Estate Services - Pensacola, FL
800-309-3414 - Pensacola, Pace or Gulf Breeze, Fl.

Wow that is a lot of information I believe I read a book by him a long time ago. I will bookmark this for rereading for sure

Mar 08, 2014 12:18 PM
Michael Jacobs
Pasadena, CA
Los Angeles Pasadena 818.516.4393

Hi Eric - I read this in school many years ago and the information remains so valuable. A great reminder.  

Mar 08, 2014 11:56 PM
Joe Petrowsky
Mortgage Consultant, Right Trac Financial Group, Inc. NMLS # 2709 - Manchester, CT
Your Mortgage Consultant for Life

Outstanding post! I read some of his work in the past. There is so much good information it is difficult to capture it all. I copied you post and will share it with everyone in my office.

Mar 09, 2014 01:03 AM
Dan Hopper
Dan Hopper - Gold Way RE - Westminster, CO
Denver Broker / Author / Advocate/Short Sale

Thanks Eric, great information!!  There are a lot of points that you can incorporate to do a better job of reaching the audience you need to capture!!

Mar 09, 2014 03:43 AM
Eric Galuppo
Real Estate Rev - More Leads Means More Revenue

Joan, glad you found it helpful. thanks for letting me know.

Charles, you probably did. "Ogilvy on Advertising" is considered a classic. Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.

Michael, reminders are always a good thing 

Hi Joe, It is hard to capture it all. Thanks for sharing.

Dan, thanks for letting me know you liked it.

Mar 10, 2014 06:57 AM
Marco Giancola
Beachfront Realty - Miami Beach, FL
Realtor (305)608-1922, Miami Beach Florida

Hey Eric-I like marketing and there were a lot of good tips here from a pro-thanks for posting!

Mar 10, 2014 08:14 PM
Roy Kelley
Realty Group Referrals - Gaithersburg, MD

This is very comprehensive advice and will be very beneficial for the real estate professionals that follow these guidelines.

Mar 10, 2014 09:21 PM
Eric Galuppo
Real Estate Rev - More Leads Means More Revenue

Hi Marco Thanks for letting me know you liked it. Glad you found it informative.

Roy, good to see you again. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

Mar 12, 2014 02:32 AM
Wayne Zuhl
Remax First Realty II - Cranford, NJ
The Last Name You'll Ever Need in Real Estate

Eric,

This is a LOT of really good information.  Thank you so much for posting.

Mar 14, 2014 01:00 AM
Eric Galuppo
Real Estate Rev - More Leads Means More Revenue

Glad to do it Wayne and Jean! Thanks for letting me know you liked it.

Mar 14, 2014 05:02 AM
Gita Bantwal
RE/MAX Centre Realtors - Warwick, PA
REALTOR,ABR,CRS,SRES,GRI - Bucks County & Philadel

Thank you for the great tips and for the inspiration. Have a good weekend.

Mar 14, 2014 09:01 PM
Anne Hensel
South Beaches Real Estate Professionals - Saint Petersburg, FL
Realtor - Broker - St. Pete Beach, Treasure Island

What a great article!!  Thanks for sharing!

Mar 15, 2014 07:51 AM
Inna Ivchenko
Barcode Properties - Encino, CA
Realtor® • Green • GRI • HAFA • PSC Calabasas CA

This is a great blogs post with tons of valuable information!

Bookmarking,

Suggesting!

Mar 15, 2014 05:32 PM
Rebecca Gaujot, Realtor®
Lewisburg, WV
Lewisburg WV, the go to agent for all real estate

Eric, great post with so much information, this is a keeper and is being bookmarked.

Mar 16, 2014 12:01 AM
Eric Galuppo
Real Estate Rev - More Leads Means More Revenue

Hi Gita, Glad to make it available. Thanks for letting me know you liked it.

Anne, Happy to share. Glad you liked it Thanks for saying hi.

Inna, Thanks! I have been a little behind on my blogging, but your comment is good encouragement to keep going.

Hi Rebeca, Thanks for letting me know you liked it.

Mar 17, 2014 08:10 AM
Diane M. Phillips Realtor 443-286-4365
Frankly Real Estate Inc. - Manchester, MD
Specializing in Carroll Co., MD

Eric ~ What an interesting article. I had never heard of David Ogilvy before. Thanks for the introduction!

Apr 03, 2014 02:49 AM
Eric Galuppo
Real Estate Rev - More Leads Means More Revenue

Hi Diane, I am happy to make the introduction. 

Apr 05, 2014 09:31 AM
Jennifer Fivelsdal
JFIVE Home Realty LLC | 845-758-6842|162 Deer Run Rd Red Hook NY 12571 - Rhinebeck, NY
Mid Hudson Valley real estate connection

Eric I saw David being interviewed on TV I don't remember the show but I remember it was informative, so thanks for your blog.

Apr 20, 2014 03:06 PM
Eric Galuppo
Real Estate Rev - More Leads Means More Revenue

Hi Jennifer, David is a legend in the world of advertising. Glad to make this post available. Thanks for leaving your comment. 

Apr 21, 2014 05:20 AM

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