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Another of my wandering babbles, adrift, awisp

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Real Estate Agent with Better Homes & Gardens Wine Country Group DRE # 00770113

Clouds

A wisp of vapor

A thousand faces

So many realized

A hint of souls

A wishing well

No coins to toll

Once more closed eyes

Only to open, behold

The face of God

Then demons

All in one glance

Finally to awake

And then float

On Heaven’s perchance

What fools

We mortals are

To try and understand

Such circumstance

Hence I see

What I want to be

And more

Then huff and puff

And guess what

Glimpse once

Gone

Glimpse twice

 Delight

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Comments(6)

Endre Barath, Jr.
Berkshire Hathaway HomeServices California Properties - Beverly Hills, CA
Realtor - Los Angeles Home Sales 310.486.1002

That's it it is confirmed the Edgar Alan Poe of Active Rain! CVC!!!Endre

Aug 29, 2015 09:16 AM
Curtis Van Carter
Better Homes & Gardens Wine Country Group - Yountville, CA
Your Napa Valley Broker Extraordinaire

Endre

I try, cheers cvc ps, Edgar is one of my favorites. A bit of my dark soul captured a hundred years ago. cheers cvc

Aug 29, 2015 09:24 AM
1~Judi Barrett
Integrity Real Estate Services 116 SE AVE N, Idabel, OK 74745 - Idabel, OK
BS Ed, Integrity Real Estate Services -IDABEL OK

LOL Andre, When I was much younger loved to read Edgar Allen Poe.. 

Aug 29, 2015 09:47 AM
Curtis Van Carter
Better Homes & Gardens Wine Country Group - Yountville, CA
Your Napa Valley Broker Extraordinaire

Endre

Any woman who likes POe, me too, a hidden vicous murdered.

Now this is the point. You fancy me mad. Madmen know nothing.

  Ah, broken is the golden bowl! the spirit flown forever!
   Let the bell toll!- a saintly soul floats on the Stygian river;
Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered, weak and weary,
Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore,
While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping,
As of some one gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door.

My continuations of the Raven

My Follow up of Poe, The Raven and and more of his darker side. To Endre

My blacken soul awakes, quivers and peeks at your door
to no avail, to never, to never more
Once more awaken to my mere being
To the henchman who stands within me
Till then, the blade glistens, sharpness unbound
in the moonlight, and the flash of a moment
Swift downward flails, mortality unfolds
Then, and only then the blood flows
Till I understand the finality of what I cause to be
Then and only then this moments settles
Fate awaits me, a mere mortal
To answer for my consequences of my choice
To succumb to the depth of their desires
Quiver, swallow, inhale, breathe once more
God please show me to the door
I want out, Away, to survive
To alight and live once again
Second chances are a-rare
but all I ask of you, once more
One more time to regale, to reach the sublime
One more happenstance to be me
That is all I ask of Thee
Please, let me understand Poe's darkness in me

Aug 29, 2015 10:15 AM
Larry Johnston
Broker, Friends & Neighbors Real Estate and Elkhart County Subdivisions, LLC - Elkhart, IN
Broker,Friends & Neighbors Real Estate, Elkhart,IN

Hi Curtis Van Carter ,  Thanks for sharing some of Edgar's work.

Aug 30, 2015 02:24 PM
Robert Bob Gilbert
Berkshire Hathaway HomeServices Anderson Properties - Katy, TX
Your Katy TX ( West of Houston) Real Estate Expert

Curtis, 

This is some excellent prose like I have said in the past. Deep thoughts are provoked by your work. 

Aug 31, 2015 05:56 AM