Proofreading: Does Your Real Estate Marketing Send the right Message?

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Always re-read before publishing... 

Original content by Marte Cliff

Proofreading: Making sure your real estate marketing messages represent you as a professional.

How many times do you read and re-read a marketing message before you hit send?

How often do you go back to your web pages to make SURE that they're correct?

Proofreading is by far not the most entertaining or pleasurable part of writing, but it IS one of the most necessary parts, because silly mistakes can give your readers the wrong impression about you.

At the very least, they'll convey a message that you don't pay attention to details. At worst, they'll make people think you don't know any better, so they'll question your abilities.

Always re-read before publishing... draft or final signposts

Some time ago I wrote an article for someone based on some very sketchy information he had sent. I thought I had the facts and figures down right, but I wasn't quite sure. So I sent it to him with a note saying "Please read this and check for accuracy. I'm not positive that I understood this correctly."

When I saw the article as an email blast from him, I thought it must have been correct. But no – he had gone ahead and pasted it into an email without reading it, and there was an error. That's called teeth-gnashing time for me.

Always read your own website, especially if someone else has been working on it…

Visualize what can happen when words that are intended as a subheading get stuck on the beginning of a sentence. It can make the whole message sound ridiculous, especially when there's no period at the end.

That can happen when copy gets handed to a 3rd party to upload - and they don't bother to read it. Even someone who knew nothing about the subject would see that the sentence didn't make sense.

A couple of years ago I was hired to "clean up" a site that had had a variety of writers contributing to it over the years. Some were very good - and some were terrible. I found misused words, misspelled words, and an abundance of rambling copy that must have been written by someone who thought "the more words the better" as they repeated the same point in sentence after sentence. Who knows, maybe they were paid by the word so wanted plenty of words.

And then there was the redundancy: I found things like: "Currently, sales at this time…" (And why did they use those words in the first place? Marketing copy should be conversational. Why not say "Right now, sales…")

Apparently the site owner believed that since he had paid someone to write those words, they must be fine - so he didn't check. 

Proofreading isn't easy.

In fact, if you're the one who wrote the copy, it's downright difficult. That's because you wrote it and you "know" what it says. That makes it difficult to see the kind of mistakes that happen when you're editing and miss removing an "a" when you replaced it with a "the." You can also easily miss repeated words, or missing words, because your brain is racing ahead, seeing what you intended to write.

If you can, get someone else to proofread for you. If not, try reading it aloud. And do turn on spell check and grammar check. They're often incorrect, but they'll alert you to things that might be wrong, so you can stop and give them a second thought.  

If you think they're wrong and you're right, but you aren't sure, either ask someone who is a grammar and spelling whiz, check a dictionary, or look it up on Grammar Girl.

If you've found a proofreader, ask them to also flag anything that's confusing or "clunky." (Remembering that you KNOW what you mean, but someone else might not.)

Emphasize the fact that you want them to be brutally honest. It took me years to convince my husband to read my copy as a critic. Now he finally understands that I'm not looking for approval – I'm looking for input that will let me see and fix errors or re-write anything that might confuse a reader.

edits and corrections

 

No one should ever feel bashful about needing a proofreader...

Those well-known authors who write the books we purchase hire proofreaders - and sometimes their work is read and re-read by multiple proofreaders. And yet - every now and then I find a typo in a hard-bound book published by a major publishing house. 

 

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Comments (12)

Gita Bantwal
RE/MAX Centre Realtors - Warwick, PA
REALTOR,ABR,CRS,SRES,GRI - Bucks County & Philadel

Good morning Roy. This is a good choice for a reblog. I hope others will read it too.

Jan 29, 2016 07:43 PM
Roy Kelley
Realty Group Referrals - Gaithersburg, MD

Please be sure to leave comments at the original blog by Marte Cliff

Jan 29, 2016 08:48 PM
Sussie Sutton
David Tracy Real Estate - Houston, TX
David Tracy Real Estate for Buyers & Sellers

Oh Roy! I still suffer from this!

I try proof reading my post backwards. I went to a grammar class to try and help myself. That was one of the self help ideas that they posed for us to use. I still stumble around when writing. However, it is done with love to those it is intended for.

Jan 29, 2016 11:57 PM
Anna Hatridge
R Gilliam Real Estate LLC - Farmington, MO
Missouri Realtor with R Gilliam Real Estate LLC

Great choice for a reblog.  I am going over to thank Marte Cliff now.

Jan 30, 2016 02:31 AM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Thanks so much for the re-blog Roy. I'm flattered! 

Jan 30, 2016 02:51 AM
Linda Guess
Keller Williams Tri-Lakes Branson, MO - Branson, MO
Branson area real estate sales.

Nice reblog.  Proof reading is very important. 

Jan 30, 2016 09:52 AM
Evelyn Johnston
Friends & Neighbors Real Estate - Elkhart, IN
The People You Know, Like and Trust!

Such a great post to reblog Roy, we should always have our marketing proofread.

Jan 30, 2016 10:29 AM
Roy Kelley
Realty Group Referrals - Gaithersburg, MD

Good Monday morning to all. I hope your weekend was outstanding. Have a very productive February!

Jan 31, 2016 09:57 PM
Roy Kelley
Realty Group Referrals - Gaithersburg, MD

We had more snow in Maryland today. Commuters should be prepared for a very icy Wednesday morning.

Feb 09, 2016 09:03 AM
Roy Kelley
Realty Group Referrals - Gaithersburg, MD

We have a chilly and rainy Saturday in Maryland. Enjoy the weekend.

May 21, 2016 02:19 AM
Roy Kelley
Realty Group Referrals - Gaithersburg, MD

I hope you are enjoying a most productive summer.

Have a great Friday and an outstanding weekend.

Aug 05, 2016 01:47 AM
Roy Kelley
Realty Group Referrals - Gaithersburg, MD

Good Thursday morning to all. We have another beautiful day in Maryland and life is good.

Mar 09, 2017 04:50 AM

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