Remember The Audience Before Going Off The Rails

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Real Estate Agent with RE/MAX Elite 513.520.5305 www.LizTour.com SAL.2002007747

Cass Scenic Railroad in Cass WVThis afternoon I started reading an online article about the Women's World Cup (soccer aka football).  As a guy who used to bounce around between the goalposts, I still take an interest in the sport.

 

The article was rather long, and I'm okay with long if the topic is appealing and  the author keeps it interesting.  I read to learn and to think a bit.  The author does the job well and the words flow. 

 

But the author broke the "rules".  Out of nowhere he goes into a political tirade.  A tirade that was totally without relevance to the topic, but off the rails he went.

 

And with that, I lost interest in the article.  There MIGHT have been some great content later in the article, but the author forgot his audience and made it solely about him.  It's not that I don't have any thoughts about politics, but there's a time and a place and I don't do ambushes.

 

 

 

 

I doubt any English or journalist professor ever laid out the following outline to use as a template:

Introductory paragraph

Explore topic for 2 paragraphs

Assault unrelated topic the reader didn't expect

Return to main topic

Conclude

 

As a blogger or website content creator, it's critical to stay on target and to NEVER forget the target audience.

My approach is dependent upon my audience.  If I'm writing to other Rainers, my topic selection and style may be totally different than a consumer directed post that is likely to be much more factual and much less opinion piece.

I'm not in the business of making people click away before they get to the end.

And with that, I'll keep this one short :)

Bill of Bill & Liz aka BLiz

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Wayne Martin
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Good morning Bill. In the age of instant gratification and short attention spans, more important than ever. Enjoy your day.

Jun 22, 2019 04:38 AM #3
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Debb Janes EcoBroker and Bernie Stea JD
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It's much like the Awards ceremonies from Hollywood, the stars often forget they are in the entertainment industry. Movies and the magic of Hollywood is for escapism - the last thing I want is to have an acceptance speech turn into a political rant.  And yet...

Jun 22, 2019 07:30 AM #4
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Carol Williams
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Hi Bill,
In addition to that, I dislike puff filled articles to make the reader search for what the Headline promised.

Jun 22, 2019 09:18 AM #5
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Bliz had to laugh at your topic outline suggestions! I've seen quite a number of articles or speeches go off the rails this past couple of years.  Hoping they all get back on the rails sooner rather than later...

Jun 22, 2019 10:42 AM #6
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Michael Jacobs
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Hello Liz and Bill - like others I enjoyed the journalism class outline but the message is an appropriate one here and in many parts of life as Chris Ann Cleland commented "an otherwise good message may simply be out of place".  Yes, the audience is important.  

Jun 22, 2019 10:53 AM #7
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Dorie Dillard CRS GRI ABR
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Good afternoon Liz and Bill Spear ,

Loved the outline that you provided that so doesn't work when you forget your audience and your message. There is a time and place for everything..keep it in perspective and stay the course and your readers will definitely appreciate your words of wisdom.

Jun 22, 2019 12:20 PM #8
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Well done Bill- I echo what Debb Janes EcoBroker and Bernie Stea JD said. I used to enjoy the awards shows but they lost sight of their audience. When that happens, I switch to something else.  

Jun 22, 2019 07:14 PM #9
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Sometiimes the human ego takes front and center while the human brain forgets the purpose of what he or she is doing.  Good reminder and what happens when the ego takes over.

Jun 23, 2019 05:35 AM #10
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Great post my friend. Back to a more classic literature? Much needed indeed. Maybe we should include on social media a rating system for each post....

Jun 23, 2019 06:17 AM #11
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Liz and Bill Spear this seems to be a common issues these days. Both my kids played soccer and I found it as a sport that brings people together internationally. Soccer truly seemed like the international language of sports. The kids had the opportunity to learn about the game and play with kids and coaches from all over the world. Politics are dividing people these days. I agree with you, they need to remember their reader and stay on subject. Let people have common ground and get along without inserting dividing issues that don't belong.

Jun 23, 2019 06:24 AM #12
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There's rarely a good reason to go off the rails at all. The only acceptable reason I've found for leaving the rail bed is .... when you've gone into a room.... and ... uh....

wait, what were we talking about??

Jun 23, 2019 06:35 AM #13
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Richie Alan Naggar
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My Jewish humor has failed many times but I didnt fail to use it....

Jun 23, 2019 06:38 AM #14
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Great points about tartget adudience, whether you are speaking from the stage on blogging!

If we are writing to other Rainers, our topic selection and style may be totally different than a consumer directed post that is likely to be much more factual and much less opinion piece.

Jun 23, 2019 12:07 PM #15
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It's very important to stay on topic Liz and Bill Spear .  In this day of reading bullet points, you'd best keep it interesting and on topic lest someone click away.

Jun 23, 2019 03:19 PM #16
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Hi Bill:

This was certainly a telling example to illustrate an excellent point for all to keep in mind in our posting, as well as all online interactions.

Jeff

Jun 24, 2019 06:25 PM #17
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I loved your outline - but do wish people wouldn't use it!

I just read an article today about how this summer's movies are not doing well at the box office. The writer felt it was because instead of entertainment they are political "preaching." People pay for entertainment in order to be entertained.

Just like people click on an article about soccer in order to read about soccer.

Jun 24, 2019 08:55 PM #18
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Endre Barath, Jr.
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Bill loved your post and did not read the comments, not wanted to get distracted... yes the last 12 years had sadly turned everything into a political crusade... but everyone focuses on the last two years... must be attention deficit... and love the fact that they slipped the political diatribe into the middle of the post... clearly if it was in the beginning you would not have read the post:))Endre

Jun 24, 2019 10:51 PM #19
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Great piece! I see that almost everywhere these days. Keeping politics out of business is the best way forward. There is no reason anyone with whom I do business needs to be privy to my thoughts on the political landscape. Either way you go you've lost half your audience, why alieanate people when you can bring them in with your words and artful painting of the pictures you describe.

thanks for sharing!

Jun 25, 2019 05:27 AM #20
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Harrison K. Long
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Your article here is a valuable reminder that content creators should stay on target, avoid political ramblings, and remember the target audiece.

 

Jun 25, 2019 10:28 AM #21
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Great point!  I totally agree ... whether it is a blog, a commercial or a tv program, I tend to get turned off when politics get intertwined ... changes my whole perspective.  Thank you for sharing this very informative post.

Jun 25, 2019 04:51 PM #22
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