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She Kicked Me Right In The Funyuns

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Real Estate Agent with Transaction Alliance 513.520.5305 www.LizTour.com SAL.2002007747

Or

Some Tricks, Some Treats, Welcome To Real Estate Life

Or

That Egg Didn't Hatch

Or

There's No Such Thing As A Sure Thing

 

Okay, before you think I'd done gone and lost my mind, there's a reason for the ORs above.

Consider this a bonus Ask An Ambassador post, a treat to offset a night of tricks (in the space of a 3 hours I've had a "sure thing" listing go POOF, a tree fall across our driveway and one of our cats do a Linda Blair impression).

 

And back to the point of this post.

Titles.  Everything above could be used for the EXACT same post, or a half dozen other different ideas.

Titles are the curb appeal of your blog post. 

They're the first thing a potential reader see and hopefully an invitation that says "come on in, you're going to like what's inside!"

 

We're in a competitive world.  Realistically in a given day I probably read less than a half dozen posts in the Rain.  Nothing personal, it's just a wicked bad time constraint managing my dual career life AND being a part time zookeeper to our furry herd.

So as I scroll through a blog roll,  one of two actions is going to happen.

I'm going to click to open or I'm going to keep on scrolling.

 

What pushes that decision point?

1.  The title

OR

2.  The writer's established reputation  (if someone has a well established track record, I'll probably click no matter how great or not great the title is).

 

As I mentioned before, I'm REALLY tight on time most days, so I'm primarily looking for blog posts that do one of two things:  Educate or entertain.

The title is the key to telling me what to expect and if I'm likely to find one of those two things inside the post.

Now true, there's sometimes bait and switch.  Those clickbait masters are out there, fool me once, fool me twice....


Now there are times I'm not seeking to create a big hook of a title.  If I'm writing something VERY factual, I'm not going for pizzazz.  I'm going for SEO.

Patio Homes For Sale In Cincinnati

New Construction Homes in Mason's Crooked Tree

What's My Springboro Home Worth?

A consumer looking for these topics is probably typing in a Google query VERY close to those titles, and the closer I can get to those queries, the better my odds of ranking and being found.

So spend a little time on your titles, it may be the difference between being found, or just being scrolled past.

Bill of Bill & Liz aka BLiz

 

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Comments(29)

Kat Palmiotti
eXp Commercial, Referral Divison - Kalispell, MT
Helping your Montana dreams take root

Those were three interesting hours - I'd laughed at the cat comment!

I agree, titles can be the difference between being read and not being read - but they have to relate to the post being shared.

Enjoy your Sunday!

Nov 03, 2019 06:42 AM
Liz and Bill Spear

It was certainly a "thank you sir, may I have another!!" few hours :)

Nov 03, 2019 07:03 AM
Alan May
Jameson Sotheby's International Realty - Evanston, IL
Home is where the hearth is.

Yep, titles are the "sizzle" in your steak.

Ruth's Chris Steak House brings your steak to your table on a metal platter, sizzling in butter.  It makes such a loud sizzle (think Sizzling Rice Soup) that the entire dining room turns to watch its delivery... (and I'm sure there's a whole lotta "I'll have what he's having" going on shortly thereafter).

Ya gotta have some sizzle.

Nov 03, 2019 08:00 AM
Liz and Bill Spear

I'll have the ribeye :)

Nov 03, 2019 12:55 PM
Gayle Rich-Boxman Fishhawk Lake Real Estate
John L Scott Market Center - Birkenfeld, OR
"Your Local Expert!" 503-739-3843

Well, BLIZ you caught me with your title. And the fact that Kathy Streib highlighted it this week. You did both: entertained and edge-em-uh-cated. 

So, did you have to clean up the Linda Blair cat "stuff"?? 

Nov 03, 2019 09:42 AM
Liz and Bill Spear

Yes, and fortunately as these things go, it was minor and controlled.  Other times it's out the 3rd floor of the kitty condo, all over the bars, down the wall and on the baseboards and floor.  At least this time 90% landed on the in-condo rug and bed. 

Nov 03, 2019 12:56 PM
Wanda Kubat-Nerdin - Wanda Can!
Red Rock Real Estate (435) 632-9374 - St. George, UT
St. George Utah Area Residential Sales Agent

Better than a kick to the bunions Bill. Your title grabbed and pulled me in, congrats on another stellar post!

Nov 04, 2019 05:13 PM
Liz and Bill Spear

Thanks!

Nov 04, 2019 07:17 PM
Diana Dahlberg
1 Month Realty - Pleasant Prairie, WI
Real Estate in Kenosha, WI since 1994 262-308-3563

You had me at "She kicked me right in the FUNYUNS" ... ROFL

Nov 04, 2019 05:40 PM
Liz and Bill Spear

The hook worked :)

Nov 04, 2019 07:17 PM
Greg Mona
West USA Realty - Scottsdale, AZ
Professional Real Estate Representation for YOU!

Your blog post title drew me right in like a moth to a flame! Good, common-sense tips here. Thanks for sharing!

Nov 04, 2019 06:40 PM
Liz and Bill Spear

Sometime the brain cells are creative :)

Nov 04, 2019 07:18 PM
Monica Hill
RE/Max Associates - Wilmington, DE
the REALTOR to help you discover Delaware

Great reminders! Thanks.

Nov 04, 2019 06:42 PM
Liz and Bill Spear

You're welcome!

Nov 04, 2019 07:18 PM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Wonderful advice. I wish those click-bait people wouldn't take it! Over time, we learn which emails are going to be bogus, so can send them directly to junk.

At least there aren't many here in the Rain who employ that nasty tactic.

Nov 04, 2019 07:27 PM
Liz and Bill Spear

I know in my news feed (Yahoo, Facebook) there are certain words I KNOW are prime click bait triggers.  Click and be disappointed.

Nov 04, 2019 07:35 PM
Sharon Tara
Sharon Tara Transformations - Portsmouth, NH
Retired New Hampshire Home Stager

Well your title certainly got me. Glad it did...great post. Title is very important and many writers don't give it the thought they should.

Nov 05, 2019 04:47 AM
Liz and Bill Spear

Two things I think are challenging for me:  the right title and the right eye candy.  The actual writing of the post is usually not an obstacle for me.

Nov 05, 2019 06:32 PM
Steve Loynd
Alpine Lakes Real Estate Inc., - Lincoln, NH
800-926-5653, White Mountains NH

We Ad - men write copy its called the "Hook" the title gets you to read the post, thanks as always for drawing us in.

Nov 05, 2019 08:36 AM
Liz and Bill Spear

The right bait for the right audience.

Nov 05, 2019 06:32 PM
Tammy Lankford,
Lane Realty Eatonton, GA Lake Sinclair, Milledgeville, 706-485-9668 - Eatonton, GA
Broker GA Lake Sinclair/Eatonton/Milledgeville

Titles are key... the SEO from a good long tail title can be awesome.  Speaking of tails.... how's the demon possessed kitty doing?

Nov 05, 2019 05:00 PM
Liz and Bill Spear

He's doing fine, no more outbreaks since last week.  He does that once every week or two.  Liz is working with our vet to try and figure out why and best treatment.

Nov 05, 2019 06:33 PM
Lyn Sims
Schaumburg, IL
Real Estate Broker Retired

I liked the title, that's why I'm here. I also like Funyuns. I recently had a bag & now am addicted again.

Nov 07, 2019 10:59 AM
Liz and Bill Spear

It's been a long time since I've had any of those.  I tend more towards chips or cheetos

Nov 07, 2019 11:02 AM
Debe Maxwell, CRS
Savvy + Company (704) 491-3310 - Charlotte, NC
The RIGHT CHARLOTTE REALTOR!

Okay, I have to know how the Linda Blair kitty is, Bill. 

My Charlotte is not doing well. I've spent the better part of the day with her - at the vet - or trying to help orient her and help her walk.

I am so worried she won't make it through the night. At 17, she can check out - it's okay but, I'm going to be lost without my sweet, little princess!

As to the rest of the post - LOVE the title! And, yes, that is almost always what draws me in - and I expect the post to deliver if the title did! 

Now you and Lyn Sims have me craving Funyuns...and it's after midnight here!

Nov 07, 2019 09:23 PM
Liz and Bill Spear

Swayze is okay, it's just one of those things he does about once a week.  He eats too quickly and then blaaaahhhhpppp.  It wouldn't be so bad if contained in one small  spot, but he tends to launch from the 3rd story of his kitty condo, so out through the bars and let the mayhem commence.

We just went through the same thing with our Sage recently.  She was one of our initial mom cats.  We always miss them.  It took me a lot of conscious thought to NOT put out a bowl in her assigned spot for the nightly dinner making.  Prayers for Charlotte and hope you've got more quality time left with her.

Nov 08, 2019 05:03 AM
Scott Godzyk
Godzyk Real Estate Services - Manchester, NH
One of the Manchester NH's area Leading Agents

I love coming up with and using fancy or crazy titles. It is when i get a ocmment base don my title that has nothing to do with what i actually wrote that i know some one did not read my blog. BUT the whole point of eye catching titles is to get people to read my blog. 

Nov 08, 2019 04:56 AM
Liz and Bill Spear

True, titles can be good bait to trap those who don't read.  Greg Nino did a post once about his new $10 million dollar listing, and at the end revealed it was a joke.  He had a number of comments congratulating him on his new listing.  Busted!!!

Nov 08, 2019 05:05 AM
Nick Vandekar, 610-203-4543
Realty ONE Group Advocates 484-237-2055 - Downingtown, PA
Selling the Main Line & Chester County

Good reminder, thank you, need to work on my titles.

Nov 08, 2019 06:14 AM
Liz and Bill Spear

We all have our moments!

Nov 08, 2019 04:20 PM
L. Scott Ferguson
Ask4Ferguson - Your House-SOLD Name in Real Estate - West Palm Beach, FL
Sunny Florida Real Estate Professional

Hilarious read with VALID points.  Thanks for making my Friday!

 

Blessings!

Nov 08, 2019 10:40 AM
Liz and Bill Spear

We can always use a good laugh :)

Nov 08, 2019 04:21 PM
John Henry, Florida Architect
John Henry Masterworks Design International, Inc. - Orlando, FL
Residential Architect, Luxury Custom Home Design

Good ideas for post titles and the whys.  Thanks Bill!

Nov 08, 2019 11:06 AM
Liz and Bill Spear

Always happy to help!

Nov 08, 2019 04:21 PM
Jeff Dowler, CRS
eXp Realty of California, Inc. - Carlsbad, CA
The Southern California Relocation Dude

Hi Bill:

Well your title did what it was intended to do (besides serving as a great example), and that was to draw people in to read and be educated.

I suspect many of us worry more about keywords in our titles, and SEO, than about writing titles that will capture interest and readership.

Thanks for a great read, and have a terrific weekend. Hope that cat settles down!

Jeff

Nov 08, 2019 08:28 PM
Debe Maxwell, CRS
Savvy + Company (704) 491-3310 - Charlotte, NC
The RIGHT CHARLOTTE REALTOR!

Thank you, Bill. Today is Day-6 of no food and I have NO idea how she is still with us but, she's still drinking and using the litter box. Go figure. I have a smorgasbord laid out for her and we are following her around the house with it but, she had zero interest in food, even with appetite stimulants at the vet. 

I read your comment aloud to Ray - we got a good chuckle out of the 3rd floor condo throw-up...reminded us both of stories of roommates from college who had a little too much to drink!!

Nov 09, 2019 07:11 PM
John Juarez
The Medford Real Estate Team - Fremont, CA
ePRO, SRES, GRI, PMN

This post reminds me of the attention grabbing headline

MAN BITES DOG!

which is always held up as so much more interesting than

DOG BITES MAN

Nov 16, 2019 08:05 AM