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September 2024 Challenge: 53 Word Story

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Real Estate Broker/Owner with eXp Commercial, Referral Divison RRE-BRO-LIC-75443

The September challenge "Blog 53 Words Challenge" is being hosted by Nick Vandekar and Patricia Feager. The assignment is to write a 53 Word Story about any topic of interest. With the topic of the challenge being a wide open book, I looked out the window, picked my subject and came up with the below story.

 

She embraced me, held me close and said, “welcome home.”
Her countenance often changed by the minute
Sometimes stormy and other times calm or beautiful
She required a lot of work in terms of upkeep
But I was always rewarded for my energy
I continued to love her anyway
Who is she?
"Montana"

 

That was my 53 word story. But we're not done yet! The challenge also asks us to share in at least 300 words, what we did, whether it was easy or hard and to share our tips and advice. I'm thinking 300 words might result in some fluff so I will answer the main question and that is, I found this to be a relatively easy challenge because the idea of what to write about just popped into my head. The way the challenge actually works (on the official website shared in the contest post) is you are given a topic and then have to write about that. That would be more difficult.

So why did I pick the topic of Montana? Well, because the first time we drove into Montana we felt an affinity for everything - the people, the food, the scenery, the lack of humidity, the trails, the outdoor activities. We truly did feel as though she had welcomed us home. And when we got here we couldn't wait to get our Montana license plates and Montana phone numbers.

But I also mention storminess - that's because the weather here can change from moment to moment. We could have all four seasons in one day! Some snow, some rain, cold temperatures in the morning and hot in the afternoon. My car has everything in it I might need including rubber boots, socks, a jacket, gloves, summer shoes. I have to say I even love that - Montana is wild and unpredictable!

One other thought - I purposely did not add a title, even though a title wouldn't count towards the 53 words. I didn't want to give away who I was talking about! (or what).

And there you have it! An entry into a challenge on the second day of the month. I think that's a record for me..

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George Souto
George Souto NMLS #65149 - Middletown, CT
Your Connecticut Mortgage Expert

Kat Palmiotti I have to give some thought to the 53 word challenge this month.  Great job on getting the challenge started.

Sep 02, 2024 12:19 PM
Kat Palmiotti

I look forward to reading your entry George Souto !

Sep 02, 2024 02:10 PM
Lew Corcoran
Better Living Real Estate, LLC - East Bridgewater, MA
Expert guidance. Exceptional results.

Thank you for sharing your inspiring 53-word story about Montana, Kat! I appreciate your vivid depiction of Montana and the emotions it evokes; it truly captures the beauty and unpredictability of your home.

Sep 02, 2024 01:34 PM
Kat Palmiotti

Thank you Lew Corcoran 

Sep 02, 2024 02:11 PM
Wanda Kubat-Nerdin - Wanda Can!
Red Rock Real Estate (435) 632-9374 - St. George, UT
The best agent in Southern Utah!

Wow! That is quite the entry, Kat and congrats on the feature! Have been working on mine as well...we shall see what comes to the imagination.

Sep 02, 2024 04:51 PM
Kat Palmiotti

Wanda Kubat-Nerdin - Wanda Can! - you are very creative, I'm sure it will be great! What could one say about a zucchini? haha.

Sep 02, 2024 05:30 PM
Kathy Streib
Cypress, TX
Home Stager/Redesign

Hi Kat- you outdid yourself with this one!!!!  As you can tell, your large photo is stunning and mesmerizing!!!  What a great entry to this month's challenge. Your chosen topic is perfect!!!!  Your creativity is showing!!!!!!!

Sep 02, 2024 06:17 PM
Kat Palmiotti

Thank you very much Kathy Streib !

Sep 03, 2024 04:32 AM
Debe Maxwell, CRS
Savvy + Company (704) 491-3310 - Charlotte, NC
The RIGHT CHARLOTTE REALTOR!

Hi Kat! WOW! The September Challenge bar is now SET!! What a cool way to present your 53 word story - and I loved that you kept us in suspense until the last word! Just beautiful. Thank you so much for participating in this month's challenge - and rockin' it as the first one too!

Sep 02, 2024 10:34 PM
Kat Palmiotti

Thank you Debe Maxwell, CRS - I'm surprised I entered so quickly!

Sep 03, 2024 04:33 AM
Endre Barath, Jr.
Berkshire Hathaway HomeServices California Properties - Beverly Hills, CA
Realtor - Los Angeles Home Sales 310.486.1002

Congratulations Kat Palmiotti  after this who can top it? On a side note good for you, not sure if I will participate on this one, Endre

Sep 02, 2024 11:15 PM
Kat Palmiotti

Endre Barath, Jr. - Thank you for your comment. Hope you decide to enter!

Sep 03, 2024 04:34 AM
Endre Barath, Jr.
Berkshire Hathaway HomeServices California Properties - Beverly Hills, CA
Realtor - Los Angeles Home Sales 310.486.1002

p.s.: also Congratulations on your Featured status, btw I tried posting twice above before it got accepted,Endre

Sep 02, 2024 11:18 PM
Debra Leisek
Bay Realty,Inc Homer Alaska - Homer, AK

Hey Kat Palmiotti  This is just a beautiful post in every way! Your photo is beyond gorgeous. Your 53-word story was poetry in motion! You really hit it out of the park! 

Wyoming is a beautiful state and you made it even more attractive. The state should hire you to do come to Wyoming Ads

Sep 03, 2024 02:06 AM
Kat Palmiotti

Thank you Debra Leisek !

Sep 03, 2024 04:34 AM
Brenda J. Andrew
ULTIMA REAL ESTATE - Willis, TX
Professional Realtor in N Houston & Corpus Christi

Wow Kat, this is amazing!  You had me at every word.  I didn't see this challenge until I read your post.  This one will be tough to follow but you definitely gave us all something to ponder on.  My brother and sister n law live in Montana and it is on our list to see.  Now this really makes me want to take the trip!  I can see why they love it as well now through your post.  

Sep 03, 2024 02:09 AM
Kat Palmiotti

Brenda J. Andrew - How exciting! What town do they live in?

Sep 03, 2024 04:35 AM
Brenda J. Andrew

They live in Hamilton.  I'm not sure how close that is to you, but I know they absolutely love it there.

Sep 03, 2024 08:37 AM
Brian England
Ambrose Realty Management LLC - Gilbert, AZ
MBA, GRI, REALTOR® Real Estate in East Valley AZ

Wow, I knew that you would come up with something good!  Mine publishes tomorrow and I am certain that everyone will be disappointed in my storywriting skills, haha.

Sep 03, 2024 07:11 AM
Kat Palmiotti

No we will not Brian England - I am sure it will be great!!!  53 words about pickleball maybe?

Sep 03, 2024 07:28 AM
Brian England

Kat Palmiotti it definitely won't be about pickleball, sorry to disappoint Ray Henson, but it will be about Marigold Village, haha.  I have a feeling that the powers that be will reject my entry and ask for me to try again, haha.

Sep 03, 2024 07:29 AM
Ray Henson

Whatever you write, Brian England, it will be great, just not as great as if you added a little spice of pickleball in it.  😃

Sep 03, 2024 10:15 AM
Brian England

I highly doubt that Ray Henson but I appreciate your support.  FYI, my friends in Minnesota forced me to try pickleball and they were impressed, I kicked their asses the first time I played, haha.

Sep 03, 2024 10:22 AM
Ray Henson

I knew you would be a natural, Brian England, so much talent!  I bet you would even beat me on the courts, especially with me have tennis elbow.  OUCH! 

Sep 03, 2024 10:27 AM
Marney Kirk
Cummings & Co. Realtors - Towson, MD
Towson, Maryland Real Estate

What a great 53 word story, Kat! You really made Montana so inviting! I will say, I think I am going to have an easier time with the 300 words on why this is so hard. 😬

Sep 04, 2024 10:43 AM
Kat Palmiotti

Haha, Marney Kirk - the 300 words was harder for me!

Sep 05, 2024 04:54 AM
John Juarez
The Medford Real Estate Team - Fremont, CA
ePRO, SRES, GRI, PMN

Thank you for your very creative post, Kat Palmiotti 

It is clear that you love where you live and that is wonderful

Sep 05, 2024 11:04 AM
Kat Palmiotti

Thank you John Juarez !

Sep 05, 2024 11:22 AM
Elise Harron
Dirt Road Real Estate - Kingman, AZ
Rural Vacant Land and Development Specialist

You captured your little part of MT perfectly.  As I was reading, I was thinking Kalispell, Townsend, Ronan - and BOOM there you are letting the cat out-a-the-bag with the tricity area!!!!  You truly live and work in God's country - thank you for a trip down memory lane.... I could smell the drive around Flathead.... thankfully I didn't think about Missoula, cause my memory would have included THAT smell!  giggle 

Sep 05, 2024 04:12 PM
Kat Palmiotti

OMG you know Montana! Elise Harron - it's time for you to come visit Kalispell/Flathead again!

Sep 05, 2024 05:17 PM
Bob "RealMan" Timm
Ward County Notary Services - Minot, ND
Owner of Ward Co Notary Services retired RE Broker

Beautifully written Kat Palmiotti . I was not at all excited about moving from the BIG city to rural America but it truly grew on me, especially since my second move with-in ND to Minot.

Sep 06, 2024 07:01 AM
Kat Palmiotti

I'm glad it grew on you Bob "RealMan" Timm !

Sep 06, 2024 07:32 AM
Ed Silva, 203-206-0754
Mapleridge Realty, CT 203-206-0754 - Waterbury, CT
Central CT Real Estate Broker Serving all equally

 A beautiful entry for the Challenge, you gave the description and the photos bring it all together. Well done.

Sep 08, 2024 01:17 AM
Kat Palmiotti

Thank you very much Ed Silva, 203-206-0754 !

Sep 08, 2024 04:51 AM
Leanne Smith
Dirt Road Real Estate - Golden Valley, AZ
The Grit and Gratitude Agent

Congratulations on your feature and your post.  Funny thing we can find almost anything to write about given if we just look outside of our doors.

Sep 09, 2024 07:34 AM
Kat Palmiotti

Good morning! That's the truth Leanne Smith - all we have to do is look up!

Sep 09, 2024 07:49 AM
Mark Don McInnes, Sandpoint-Idaho
Sandpoint Realty LLC - Sandpoint, ID
North Idaho Real Estate - 208-255.6227

Hello Kat.  The 53 words seem to show off ones creativity and the 33 dives a bit more into the personality.  Well written on both.  m

Sep 09, 2024 02:22 PM
Kat Palmiotti

Thank you very much Mark Don McInnes, Sandpoint-Idaho !

Sep 09, 2024 02:35 PM
Monica Hill
RE/Max Associates - Wilmington, DE
the REALTOR to help you discover Delaware

Love it, Kat! Your post had me wondering and imagining many possibilities. Like others, I have GOT to get to Montana, more than just the short stay I had in West Yellowstone. 

Sep 11, 2024 06:57 PM
Kat Palmiotti

I hope you do visit as some point Monica Hill - I'm in the NW near Glacier!

Sep 12, 2024 04:48 AM
Jeff Dowler, CRS
eXp Realty of California, Inc. - Carlsbad, CA
The Southern California Relocation Dude

Hi Kat:

What a wonderful entry for the Challenge. I'm not sure how I missed this earlier in the month, especially given the well deserving feature, but I'm so glad to have found it. I've never been to Montana but your words and photos took me there and make me want to visit for real some day! Well done.

Jeff

Sep 15, 2024 04:36 PM
Kat Palmiotti
eXp Commercial, Referral Divison - Kalispell, MT
Helping your Montana dreams take root

Jeff Dowler, CRS  Thank you so much!

Sep 15, 2024 06:10 PM