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September 2024 Challenge: 53 Word Story

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Kissed by the waters of the Sassafras River, asleep Grove Point lies in wait. Friendships were formed there, bonds tied tight ‘round campfires and along the trails in her sheltered woods. We laughed our way from childhood to adulthood there and now, we bid her a fond farewell. Grove Point has been sold.

 

 

Inspired by the post by Michael Jacobs and then by Kat Palmiotti's post, I took on the 53-word challenge. When I started writing about Grove Point, I thought it would be hard to contain the initial piece to 53 words, but it sort of flowed. I think the 300 word part will be harder to contain. 

Grove Point is a Girl Scout camp in Maryland, nested beside the Sassafras River which flows into the Chesapeake Bay.  It was our GS Council's only open water camp but even that couldn't save it. The costs to repair what has become worn and damaged (the dining hall, etc.) have become too great. The burden is not unique to our Council; volunteer organizations across the country have been faced with decisions to sell camps, headquarters, etc. and membership declines and securing volunteers becomes increasingly more challenging.

The loss of Grove Point makes my heart ache. I first discovered this camp when I was in high school. Within my GS Troop, though we all were friends, I established a tight inner circle with a few girls who instantly made me feel welcome. We ventured out of camp (the places you are not supposed to go have such a strong allure, don't they?) to the home of the Swamp Lady, who was much nicer than her name implies, though a bit eccentric but incredibly knowledgeable about the fossils in the cliffs and the indigenous plants and animals that lived there. I'll save the story about the flying squirrel that lived in a hollow tree in her family room and the metallic fibers that ran through the fabric in her couch for another day. 

Daybreak meant jungle breakfasts, hikes in the woods, and either attending or leading programs. Gathered round campfires every night, we sang our way through all of the time-honored camp songs and added in all of the folk music of the 60s and 70s.

Years later, I took my own daughters to Grove Point along with the girls in their Troops. As their Leader, I laid the path before them, hoping they, too, would fall in love with Grove Point, and they did.

There's a song about Grove Point that tells the tale better than my 53 words or 300 words can, so that might be the hardest part of this assignment. 

"The water under silvery light, the shadowed paths nearby. Beneath the hush of an evening star asleep Grove Point will lie.

This is the camp we offer you, this the love we give, and though tomorrow we may part in our hearts, Grove Point will live."  From The Grove Point Song

So, my beloved Grove Point, as we pass you on to your new stewards, may they treasure your land, not develop it (as they have promised they will not), and may future generations be loved and healed by the woods, the shore, and the magic that is Grove Point. 

https://www.gscb.org/en/discover/our-council/reserve-a-property/camp-grove-point.html

Patricia Feager, ABR,CRS,GRI,MRP
DFW FINE PROPERTIES - Flower Mound, TX
Selling Homes Changing Lives

Hello Monica Hill - thank you for participating in the 2024 September Blog 53 Word Story. I loved it! I could relate to it so well having been a Girl Scout Leader for my daughter's troop and working at Wyonegonic Camps in Denmark, Maine for five summers while my children were campers, counselors-in-training, and Counselors.

Your 53 Words were beautiful! And your backstory had me feeling like I was reading a good novel. You certainly are a gifted writer and a great addition to ActiveRain. Also, your photograph is gorgeous!!!

 

Here's the link for you to add your link to Nick Vandekar, 610-203-4543 post. 

Sep 11, 2024 08:08 PM
Monica Hill

Thanks, Patricia! I took that photo at a unit called Osprey (named after the birds that nest in the area) on the banks of the river the last time I was there. We had a campfire there, with the setting sun reflecting off the water, singing our favorite songs. So glad to hear you were a Leader, too! You gain SO much when you work with the girls in that capacity. I'd love to hear some of your stories!

Sep 12, 2024 07:44 AM
Endre Barath, Jr.
Berkshire Hathaway HomeServices California Properties - Beverly Hills, CA
Realtor - Los Angeles Home Sales 310.486.1002

Monica Hill   good for you, not sure if I want to participate or will have the time to do so, Endre

Sep 11, 2024 09:54 PM
Monica Hill

Thanks, Endre. Part of what I enjoy about Active Rain is the opportunities it presents to either read or write, depending on where you are at the time. 

Sep 12, 2024 07:42 AM
Michael Elliott
Fathom Realty - Burlington Township, NJ
Burlington, New Jersey Residential Sales

Well done, as always, Monica.  Childhood memories are awesome.  And Michael and Kat are inspiring!   

Sep 12, 2024 12:08 AM
Kat Palmiotti

Too kind!

Sep 12, 2024 05:29 AM
Monica Hill

Thanks, Michael. They are inspiring!

Sep 12, 2024 07:41 AM
Debra Leisek
Bay Realty,Inc Homer Alaska - Homer, AK

Another Beautiful post Monica Hill 

 Some of my fondest memories of life revolve around Girl Scouts. Grove Point sounds like a supreme place to have been lucky enough to enjoy! I hope they retain some of the pristine beauty of Grove Point.

Sep 12, 2024 12:22 AM
Monica Hill

Thanks, Debra. Despite my sadness about the sale, I'm happy that it will not be developed into housing. The new owners will retain it as an outdoor experience. 

Sep 12, 2024 07:40 AM
Lew Corcoran
Better Living Real Estate, LLC - East Bridgewater, MA
Expert guidance. Exceptional results.

Thank you, Monica, for sharing your heartfelt reflections on Grove Point both in your full story and the concise 53-word version. Your ability to capture the essence of those cherished memories is truly moving, and I appreciate the reminder of how important such places and experiences are in our lives.

Sep 12, 2024 01:19 AM
Monica Hill

Thanks, Lew. It will forever be a cherished part of my memories. 

Sep 12, 2024 07:39 AM
Michael Jacobs
Pasadena, CA
Pasadena And Southern California 818.516.4393

Hello Monica - thank you for the mention.  The 53-word challenge and the process behind it were both explored wonderfully.  And your feature image captures the overall theme so well.  

Sep 12, 2024 02:49 AM
Monica Hill

Thanks, Michael. I took that photo on the banks of the Sassafras the last time I was at Grove Point. 

Sep 12, 2024 07:38 AM
Kat Palmiotti
eXp Commercial, Referral Divison - Kalispell, MT
Helping your Montana dreams take root

Thank you for mentioning me! As for your post, I am involved in several non-profits and membership declines and lack of volunteers is definitely an issue now. I'm sorry to hear this camp where beautiful memories were made had to be sold. I hope they stay true to their agreement to not develop it!

Sep 12, 2024 05:30 AM
Monica Hill

Kat, it makes me wonder why volunteerism is on the decline. I think some groups suffer from declining membership due to there being SO many options available for children to join, chiefly all the sports groups. I don't know how some of the younger parents juggle all of it!

Sep 12, 2024 07:37 AM
Dorie Dillard Austin TX
Coldwell Banker Realty ~ 512.750.6899 - Austin, TX
NW Austin ~ Canyon Creek and Spicewood/Balcones

Good morning Monica,

A great entry into the 53 word challenge! I love thinking back to childhood memories. They are what shaped us and our values. It's a shape this camp had to be sold but hopefully the new stewards of the land will really live up to their agreement.

Sep 12, 2024 05:40 AM
Monica Hill

Thanks, Dorie! The new owners previously assisted with preservation of part of the camp and are invested in the ecology of the area, and... have said that Girl Scouts will still have access to the camp... so the signs are good. 

Sep 12, 2024 07:36 AM
Kathy Streib
Cypress, TX
Home Stager/Redesign

Good entry, Monica. And it reminded me of my Girl Scout Days. I just looked up the GS camp I went to here and it's still around!  Can't believe it. 

Sep 12, 2024 06:40 PM
Monica Hill

Kathy, thanks! I'm happy that your camp is still there. That would make a great feature in your area!

Sep 15, 2024 04:07 PM
Nick Vandekar, 610-203-4543
Realty ONE Group Advocates 484-237-2055 - Downingtown, PA
Selling the Main Line & Chester County

Wow, I could see and smell it from your 53 words. I led my sons and Cub Scouts down to the Chester County Camp in Maryland Camp Ware, and so I totally understand your feelings about this camp. Well done, this was a fantastic entry. Hopefully it will remain a place of refuge and safety for others to come under the stewardship of the new owners.

Sep 20, 2024 12:03 PM
Monica Hill

Thanks, Nick. Glad your life was graced with Scouts, too!

Sep 20, 2024 12:05 PM
Patricia Feager, ABR,CRS,GRI,MRP
DFW FINE PROPERTIES - Flower Mound, TX
Selling Homes Changing Lives

Monica Hill 

Here are answers to some of your questions. 

How to tag people in my posts. To tag a name like Monica Hill, first you have to make sure you click FOLLOW the person you wish to tag. If you wanted to tag me you will have to be on my Page, look under my Profile in the top right corner. You will see FOLLOW, PROFILE, and BLOG. If you never clicked follow, you won't be able to tag me. Follow first, then when you want to tag, click on the @symbol on your keyboard and a box with list of names will populate. Choose my name, and I will be tagged. Some names can be tricky. If I don't find the name right away, I may just type in the last name like "Timm" and then I usually get the first and last name to select. 

Propertly uploading photos. I see you already mastered that skill. Good for you! Okay, so the next step to learn is how do you insert your photos into the body of your blog post. Let's say, you want to insert a photo in between your paragraphs that begins with "Years later..." and "There's a song." Drop down a few spaces between the two paragraphs, I chose to center my photos, then chose the square next to the paperclip above, choose your photo and drop in the picture, such as:

 

Step 1, Click the Insert/Edit Image by using the square with the mountain peaks next to the paper clip above. (That's the source where you find your pictures.) When you know which photo you want it will find your photo. I skip over the "Source & Alternative Descriptioin." Below it you will see two boxes "Width" and Height." You must change the first box "Width" to get a size you want. In my sample photo in this comment, "Please Take Nothing But Pictures..." I put in 100 for Width. For my blog posts, if I want to make a big picture, I never put more than 600 in Width and I never change the Height because it corresponds and changes with the height Width you choose. Or for Wideth, you could try 500, 250, or whatever is right for you.

I hope my instructions work. If not, let me know and I'll try to help you some more. 

Sep 20, 2024 01:42 PM
Jan Green - Scottsdale, AZ
Value Added Service, 602-620-2699 - Scottsdale, AZ
HomeSmart Elite Group, REALTOR®, EcoBroker, GREEN

LOVE your post!  Your writing really draws the reader in to finish and experience your writing by imagining what the rest of Grove Point looks like.  You have a rich history with the land and camp.  I hope future generations are able to contine visiting!

Oct 01, 2024 04:23 PM
Monica Hill

Thanks, Jan. It has been a magical place for me and countless other girls, too. 

Oct 01, 2024 07:18 PM