Five More Minutes

By
Real Estate Agent with Choice 1 Realty

While at the park one day, a woman sat down next to a man on a bench near a playground.  "That's my son over there," she said, pointing to a little boy in a red sweater who was gliding down the slide.

 

"He's a fine-looking boy," the man said.  "That's my daughter on her bike."

 

Then, looking at his watch, he called to his daughter.  "What do you say we go, Melissa?"  Melissa pleaded, "Just five more minutes, Dad.  Please?  Just five more minutes."

 

The man nodded and Melissa continued to ride her bike to her heart's content.

 

Minutes passed and the father stood and called again to his daughter.  "Time to go now?"  Again Melissa pleaded, "Five more minutes, Dad.  Just five more minutes."  The man waved and said, "OK."

 

"My, you certainly are a patient father," the woman commented.

Give someone you love five more minutes of your time today!

 

 

The man smiled and then said, "Her older brother Tommy died last year in an accident.  I never spent much time with Tommy and now I'd give anything for just five more minutes with him.  I've vowed not to make the same mistake with Melissa.

 

"She thinks she has five more minutes to ride her bike.  The truth is, I get five more minutes to watch her play."

 

Comments (5)

Brett Noel
Keller Williams - Paso Robles, CA

I love this story, I am going to share it in my Ezine if you dont mind,

 

I loved it

Aug 20, 2008 04:50 PM
LS Rogers Realty
LS Rogers Realty - Richardson, TX

What a touching story. We take time for granted way too much. I hope this gets around.

Aug 20, 2008 04:57 PM
Dinah Lee Griffey
Windermere Peninsula Properties - Allyn, WA
Managing Broker Windermere Peninsula Properties

Heart touching. Thank You for sharing!

Aug 20, 2008 05:20 PM
Christine Donovan
Donovan Blatt Realty - Costa Mesa, CA
Broker/Attorney 714-319-9751 DRE01267479 - Costa M

This story made me tear up.  My brother died a few years ago, a few months before his 30th birthday.  From one minute to the next, he was gone. You never know.  It makes me cherish the time with my family and friends.

Aug 20, 2008 05:22 PM
Libby Cousins
Extraordinary Processing - Spokane, WA
Contract Mortgage Processor, licensed in WA

Boy, it is the simple things in life, huh? I try to give my kids and husband the time they need and wish I could give them all of the time I have. Thanks for the reminder. It's something that you don't think about all of the time. I remember an email that goes around that says that if you died tomorrow, your employer could replace you in a matter of weeks but your family can never replace you. So true!

Aug 20, 2008 06:28 PM

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