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Unlike the 7 Words From George Carlin, These Are 7 Words You Can Use!

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Home Stager with Fluff My House! Home Staging Inc. 250.486.6369

Unlike the 7 Words From George Carlin, These Are 7 Words You Can Use!

George Carlin was the man! He talked about the 7 words you couldn't say on TV. (R rated)

That obviously was before cable!

When you are writing copy for an ad there are 7 words that are proven to grab a readers attention! These are power words and they produce results! So make sure you use them in your marketing! And just as in life, if you use the opposite words too often people will not care to read, because it sounds like an ad, or just a brag-fest...



                 You

                                                             Your


    Now

                                                              Discover


                                      This


       These

                                 Amazing


 

Also asking a question with the word you in it, will make the person stop and consider what your ad is about and is a great advertising technique. Be careful of asking a question you might not like the answer to. Make sure the question is sure to have a positive, rather than negative response! (no's and I don't care's shouldn't even enter the readers mind!)



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Using the present tense is better than using past tense, because the readers will think "it's over, or I missed it" and not bother to read further.

 

 

 



 

 

Headlines are are over ten times more powerful than content, so try to spend that amount of time trying to figure out a catchy Title or headline! Headlines need to be succinct and get your point across in less than 11 words.

Try to make your ad look like a story rather than an ad. people tend not to read ads, unless something catches their eye.



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Photographs are key; it's the first thing a reader will see.

The caption is the next thing they will read so make sure you caption with purpose! If you are using a photo of a person, make sure their eyes are looking into the camera, that gets a higher response than eyes looking somewhere else!

 

 



 


If you are not using a picture make an offer, an ad that looks like an “ad” won’t get read.

 



A great ad has white space. If there is just a block of text, people's eyes will tire or lose their place and they will give up reading!

 



  • Make lists or use bullet points!
  • People love that rather than a block of text.
  • It makes them think they're getting just the important stuff!




Make it fancy! Use a
Drop  Cap! Ads with “Drop Caps” get noticed more than ads without.

If you put copy in "quotations" it will get read more than sentences without quotations.

Try to make your ad deliver some news, people value information and they will read something that does that.



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Try to cause a stir or buzz with your name or business name involved! That gives people a great story to tell, and by them telling the story it makes them interesting. You want them to say:  “Hey did you hear…” or “Hey, you’re never going to believe…” and then they tell a story that you've got free advertising in!

 



There are opportunities everywhere, everyday! Let's get our names and faces out there!

 

 

 



 






 

Comments(112)

Mike Henderson
Your complete source for buying HUD homes - Littleton, CO
HUD Home Hub - 303-949-5848

Great blog not nearly as funny as the Carlin material.  One of my all time favorites.

Jun 06, 2011 03:05 PM
Peg Barcelo
Fluff My House! Home Staging Inc. 250.486.6369 - Summerland, BC
The FlufftasticStager from Summerland, BC

Mike, even when I was doing stand up comedy, I would never have compared myself to Carlin. He was the man! Thanx! :)

Jun 06, 2011 03:29 PM
Mel Ahrens, MBA, Kelly Right Real Estate
Kelly Right Real Estate - Hood River, OR
Customized Choices for your Real Estate Needs

Thanks for your blogging suggestions. I'm always looking to improve my writing and I'm afraid I'm guilty of using those words. I'm finding that the longer I'm in the business, the less original my descriptions are getting. Thanks for your advice.

Gretchen

Jun 06, 2011 03:49 PM
Peg Barcelo
Fluff My House! Home Staging Inc. 250.486.6369 - Summerland, BC
The FlufftasticStager from Summerland, BC

Gretchen, if you use these words it's a good thing! They are attention getters, people pleasers, and will get your ad noticed! Continue!

Jun 06, 2011 04:05 PM
Gwen Kelly
Broadmoor Realty, Inc - Long Beach, CA
Long Beach, CA Real Estate

Great post ~ thanks for the tips and good luck on your marketing campaign!

Jun 06, 2011 05:46 PM
Peg Barcelo
Fluff My House! Home Staging Inc. 250.486.6369 - Summerland, BC
The FlufftasticStager from Summerland, BC

Gwen, thanx! Glad you liked it!

Jun 07, 2011 02:27 AM
Jeremy Wrenn
Winslow Homes - Youngsville, NC
VP of Finance, Winslow Homes

Yeah, I think you're right on the present tense thing.  I would not have thought of that, ever.

Thanks!

Jun 07, 2011 04:24 AM
Pat & Steve Pribisko
Keller Williams Greater Cleveland West - Westlake, OH

Great post!  Not only did you give informative advice, but also demonstrated how to use it.

Jun 07, 2011 07:28 AM
Gene Riemenschneider
Home Point Real Estate - Brentwood, CA
Turning Houses into Homes

Very good post.  Thanks for the information.  I am going to book mark this to help with my e-mails.

Jun 07, 2011 01:17 PM
Ric Mills
Keller Williams Southern Az - Tucson, AZ
Integrity, Honesty, and Vast Real Estate Knowledge

Made my day.  Thanks for the advise and comment.

Jun 07, 2011 02:07 PM
Peg Barcelo
Fluff My House! Home Staging Inc. 250.486.6369 - Summerland, BC
The FlufftasticStager from Summerland, BC

J-Man, try it and see how that works! :)

Pat&Steve, that's just me playing! :D

Jun 07, 2011 03:23 PM
Peg Barcelo
Fluff My House! Home Staging Inc. 250.486.6369 - Summerland, BC
The FlufftasticStager from Summerland, BC

Gene, great, glad to help! :D

Ric, Glad to make your day!

Jun 07, 2011 03:24 PM
James Quarello
JRV Home Inspection Services, LLC - Wallingford, CT
Connecticut Home Inspector

It worked, you grabbed my attention with your title :) Love George Carlin. This is a great post with info I use in the future.

Jun 08, 2011 03:19 AM
Peg Barcelo
Fluff My House! Home Staging Inc. 250.486.6369 - Summerland, BC
The FlufftasticStager from Summerland, BC

JQ, Glad you noticed! I had to use Carlin as an example, I've loved his work since the first time I saw it! Glad there's stuff in this post you can use!

Jun 08, 2011 02:18 PM
Jamie R. Bell
Bell Realty Group at Berkshire Hathaway HomeServices NEP - Glastonbury, CT
Your Central CT Realtor

Hi Peg,
Great tips and I like you passed out the text and gave the examples too. Oh and where can I find the "guy"?

Thanks,
Jamie

Your Central CT Realtor

Jun 15, 2011 12:54 AM
Peg Barcelo
Fluff My House! Home Staging Inc. 250.486.6369 - Summerland, BC
The FlufftasticStager from Summerland, BC

Jamie, thanx! The guy came to me in a dream email... :D

Jun 15, 2011 03:14 AM
Lynn B. Friedman CRS Atlanta, GA 404-617-6375
Atlanta Homes ODAT Realty - Love our Great City - Love our Clients! Buckhead - Midtown - Westside - Atlanta, GA
Concierge Service for Our Atlanta Sellers & Buyers

Dear Peg,
Enjoying reading your posts and learning from you!
Have a happy day -
Lynn

Jun 17, 2011 11:15 PM
Peg Barcelo
Fluff My House! Home Staging Inc. 250.486.6369 - Summerland, BC
The FlufftasticStager from Summerland, BC

Lynn, That's great! I've been learning so much here in AR, it's nice to know I can help too!

Jun 17, 2011 11:19 PM
Maya Swamy
Funds Available - Long Beach, CA
Ph.D. Long Beach, CA - fundsavailable.com

Peg great points here. I would like the importance of who? what? when? where? why? and how? 5 words that equally important for marketing.

Dec 10, 2011 06:29 AM
Peg Barcelo
Fluff My House! Home Staging Inc. 250.486.6369 - Summerland, BC
The FlufftasticStager from Summerland, BC

Maya, you are right, since those are the questions that generally come from the buyer. These words I've pointed out are used to grab their attention!

Dec 10, 2011 09:00 AM