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Editing

 

 

     As an English major, I've always been accustomed to having my written work edited.  Peer review, professional editing, and even doing a second (or third..or fourth) take myself are all ways I've caught errors, improved works, and put a best foot forward.  In real estate, editing isn't a regular part of the business, but it should be.

editing real estate marketing

 

     Between contract work, creating addendums, marketing, and even email communication, we do a lot of written work.  When things aren't properly edited, misspellings & poor grammar abound, and every so often, something pops up that makes you scratch your head and say, "Huh?"

 

 

     I stumbled upon a listing recently for what appears to be a pretty decent house.  By all appearances, a great property, priced well and appealing to many buyers in the market, especially first time buyers and investors.  That listing description, though?  It ends with- 

 

 

"There is many local fast food restaurants around this location.".

 

     I'm not even going to talk about the grammar.  My first thought was "Hunny, we may have to offer over-list for this beauty...there's a Carls Jr within walking distance!".  Despite the obvious fact that this home, like every home, is sure to have flaws, the only redeeming quality to get this home sold cannot be that a new buyer will be within walking distance to a daily Grand Slam breakfast.

 

 

     You have a home.  You have a neighborhood.  You have schools.  You have attractions.  You choose to talk about fast food restaurants?  Congratulations, your listing has something in common with just about every rest stop on our country's highways.  

 

 

     Editing.  Peer review.  It could have really helped here.  Simply saying "hey, what do you think of this?" would have inspired me, and I'm sure any other professional in the real estate industry to say "maybe focus on something other than the local Burger King?".  

 

 

     Not everyone is a terrific writer, and there's not enough time in the day for many people to become the John Steinbeck of real estate, but what does literally every real estate mentor, coach, and marketing system stress?  Outsource your weaknesses!  

 

 

     We work in a lonely industry.  We may love our coworkers and want to see them do well, but even the person next to us in the office is our competition.  For this reason, most people go at things alone.  We're one of a very few industries where even within the walls of our office, group-think is not something that is taken advantage of, and it should be.

 

 

     Want to improve your marketing?  See what your office neighbor thinks of it.  Ask for suggestions.  Toss it out there as a members only blog post & ask for comments.  You may learn a lot.  You may get a chance to fix a spelling or grammatical error before announcing to the world "My work is sloppy!" (whether that perception is deserved or not).  EDIT.

 

 

     Sometimes in the haste of writing a blog, I make an obvious screw up.  Often, I'll get a friendly email from a fellow rainer saying "hey dummy, it's 'there', not 'their'" (usually it's a bit nicer than that), and I greatly appreciate the editing help! Between your family, your clients, your office, and the internet, you have thousands of editors waiting to help, so start reaching out. 

 

 

Otherwise, you'd better get really familiar with the local fast food options, because you'll be submitting applications soon.

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Comments(64)

Carol Wilson
Your $imple Home - Toronto, ON

Loved your examples, John Meussner.   Thanks for writing this!

Aug 17, 2016 02:56 PM
John Meussner

Thank you Carol!

Aug 18, 2016 04:35 AM
Margaret Rome Baltimore 410-530-2400
HomeRome Realty 410-530-2400 - Pikesville, MD
Sell Your Home With Margaret Rome

 ''In real estate, editing isn't a regular part of the business, but it should be.'' Love this post and I am all open for another set of eyes on my work. Volunteers are appreciated.

Aug 17, 2016 03:07 PM
John Meussner

Thanks Margaret! : )

Aug 18, 2016 04:36 AM
Dorte Engel
RE/MAX Leading Edge - Bowie, MD
ABC - Annapolis, Bowie, Crofton & rest of Maryland

Dear John,

Good point, although I learned a long time ago that others are attracted to totally different things than I am. There must be quite a few folks out there, who love fast food.

Aug 17, 2016 09:40 PM
John Meussner

I agree, but is that really the highlight of the home?  Why not just buy another home in the area that also is surrounded by fast food?  I think it was the emphasis being on fast food nearby that's the problem with this one

Aug 18, 2016 04:36 AM
Tony and Suzanne Marriott, Associate Brokers
Serving the Greater Phoenix and Scottsdale Metropolitan Area - Scottsdale, AZ
Coldwell Banker Realty

John Meussner "Between contract work, creating addendums, marketing, and even email communication, we do a lot of written work.  When things aren't properly edited, misspellings & poor grammar abound, and every so often, something pops up that makes you scratch your head and say, "Huh?""

Right on target - and - re-blog!

Aug 17, 2016 10:12 PM
John Meussner

Thank you : )

Aug 18, 2016 04:36 AM
Dorie Dillard Austin TX
Coldwell Banker Realty ~ 512.750.6899 - Austin, TX
NW Austin ~ Canyon Creek and Spicewood/Balcones

Good morning John Meussner ,

So glad that Tony and Suzanne Marriott, Associate Brokers reblogged this post as I missed it! You make a very valid point! I'm always open for lots of eyes for corrections!

Aug 17, 2016 10:53 PM
John Meussner

Thanks Dorie, I'm always appreciative of corrections as well.

Aug 18, 2016 04:37 AM
Richie Alan Naggar
people first...then business Ran Right Realty - Riverside, CA
agent & author

My editor is worth her weight in Sushi of which we have had many meetings

Aug 17, 2016 11:08 PM
John Meussner

Glad to know I'm not the only one that can be paid via ahi and yellowtail : )

Aug 18, 2016 04:37 AM
Fred Griffin Florida Real Estate
Fred Griffin Real Estate - Tallahassee, FL
Licensed Florida Real Estate Broker

Grammar, spell check... but that Editor is so important! 

  See you at Carl's Jr.!

Aug 18, 2016 12:06 AM
John Meussner

I've never been Fred....am I missing out?

Aug 18, 2016 04:37 AM
Fred Griffin Florida Real Estate

John Meussner 


   Heard of it, but we don't have them around here.


               Carls Jr.

Aug 18, 2016 04:45 AM
Mary Weiss
Zillow Group Mortgages - Seattle, WA
Trainer & Content Manager

The fast food description had me laughing.  In all seriousness though, as a buyer, I would runaway from an otherwise good listing if I thought that the listing agent didn't appear to be professional. Who needs that headache? 

Aug 18, 2016 03:06 AM
John Meussner

Not sure that listing is going to get much attention, at least not the kind that leads to a sale

Aug 18, 2016 04:37 AM
Jill Murty, Realtor - Orange County, CA
Movoto - Laguna Niguel, CA

There are so many things written in the MLS I wish I could unsee.  Among them:

"Close to scools and shooping."  (Not close to good schools)

"Bring your fuzziest buyers."  (The fuzzier the better??!)

"Baloney off the master bedroom."  (Man, I wish it had a balcony instead.)

"This home has been maliciously maintained."  (Maintained with malice?) 

Aug 18, 2016 04:16 AM
Carol Wilson

Thanks so much for the belly laughs, Jill Murty, Realtor - Orange County, CA !  ROFL....  (Rolling on Floor Laughing for those who like me, haven't mastered texting yet)

Aug 18, 2016 01:30 PM
John Meussner

HA, love that last one ---- they've beat the house to perfection!

Aug 19, 2016 05:13 AM
Larry Johnston
Broker, Friends & Neighbors Real Estate and Elkhart County Subdivisions, LLC - Elkhart, IN
Broker,Friends & Neighbors Real Estate, Elkhart,IN

Hi John Meussner ,  I can understand why your blog was Featured.  Great read!

Aug 18, 2016 05:25 AM
John Meussner

Thanks Larry!

Aug 19, 2016 05:13 AM
Sharon Tara
Sharon Tara Transformations - Portsmouth, NH
Retired New Hampshire Home Stager

Congrats on the well deserved feature! This is fabulous! (love the humor too)

Taking the time to "edit" is something all professionals must do. 

When I see a mistake in a post I'm reading, I privately message the writer. I would hope someone would do the same for me.

Aug 18, 2016 06:20 AM
John Meussner

I'm with ya Tara.  Thank you!

Aug 19, 2016 05:14 AM
Mary Stewart
Keller Williams Atlantic Partners/Southside - Jacksonville, FL

Great read.  I make tons of mistakes and have to redo a lot of what I write.  Just a suggestion for those having problems with property descriptions, , I go to some of the luxury listings and have  copied a  notebook of beautiful phrases that I often use in describing my own listings. Many of these descriptions were written by professional writers for a fee. The agent discussed was probably trying to say that the walkability factor was high, but missed the mark.   point.  Great job on your featured article and well needed by all of us.

Aug 18, 2016 07:00 PM
John Meussner

Thanks Mary - "walkability" would have been a plus.  "Right near Taco Bell!", not so much ; )

Aug 19, 2016 05:14 AM
Evelyn Kennedy
Alain Pinel Realtors - Alameda, CA
Alameda, Real Estate, Alameda, CA

John:

My husband, the English major and lawyer, is my go to person to proof most of my flyers, etc.  He is very thorough plus he adds snide and funny comments.  

Aug 19, 2016 04:08 AM
John Meussner

Very nice, sounds like you've got a literal 'in house' assistant  :)

Aug 19, 2016 05:15 AM
Melissa Jackson REALTOR
Trinity Premier Properties - Azle, TX
Helping You Make The Right Move

I often wonder if the client reads their description or looks at the photos.  As far as listings our office manager will check before we enter into MLS.  Congratulations on the gold star.

Aug 19, 2016 02:19 PM
John Dotson
Preferred Properties of Highlands, Inc. - Highlands, NC - Highlands, NC
The experience to get you to the other side!

When high-end homes have ads that "feature" misspelling and bad grammar, I know they picked the wrong agent.  Of course, it shouldn't matter the price of the home, everyone deserves a good representation.

It really doesn't take much these days to use spell check.  Most of the word processing apps even have grammar checks...

Aug 20, 2016 01:56 AM
Lyn Sims
Schaumburg, IL
Real Estate Broker Retired

I think you write very well. I think that the agent was using what I call 'stupid filler' in his description. There are some people that just can think of great things to say about a listing - usually I don't have that problem but it can happen.

I love 'the guys' that say:  new storm door (who cares), shows a picture of the interior garage (who cares), shows the water heater (who cares), shows the toilet seat (who cares).

Aug 20, 2016 04:14 AM
John Meussner

Those toilet seat photos always make me scratch my head, too!

Aug 22, 2016 05:27 AM
Will Nesbitt
Nesbitt Realty at Condo Alexandria - Alexandria, VA
Nesbitt Realty is a family-run brokerage.

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Aug 22, 2016 01:25 AM
Tori Toth
Tori Toth, International - Howard Beach, NY
888.667.6643 NYC & Beyond, HSR, SAR, RESA, LIBOR

I  could use an editor every now and then...

Aug 22, 2016 11:20 PM
Kelly Turbeville
Keller Williams - Lake Forest, CA
Turning Real Estate Dreams into Reality

I have to admit I shake my head often with some of the descriptions in the MLS. But I also know when it comes to blogging.. I could use an editor now and then.

 

Aug 23, 2016 09:32 AM
Claude Labbe
RLAH / @properties - Washington, DC
Realty for Your Busy Life

We have one agent locally who goes the other direction.  His prose is Shakesperean and so flowery that I'm fully distracted and usually don't get anything more than how many bed/bath because the verbose and over-stimulated intellectual exercise, and dare I say, affront to my senses stuns me into complete and simple confusion.

Sep 11, 2016 03:25 PM