The Journey Home ~ A Fictional Tale ~ Chapter 2

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Chapter 2 - People Come into your life when you need them.

Jacob couldn't settle down, couldn't get easy.  It felt like he had had too much coffee that morning but he'd only finished part of a cup.  NO, that wasn't it...  but Jacob wasn't used to having that knot in the pit of his stomach.  He was only a couple of blocks from the post office and today was the day to pick up his new computer.  It was being delivered to his personal post office address that he had rented in his curent name Jacob Melroy.   He had finally gotten used to using the name that the U S Marshals Office had given him five years ago. 

 

Ava didn't know anything about his past and she didn't need to know.  It was better this way.  The program furnished them a home, medical care, etc.. Ava thought they were paying rent on their home.  The less she knew, the better.  Jacob was growing tired of playing this game though and was ready for a home of his own, ready to become what the government said he was to pretend to be.  He knew that any purchase he made would have to be in his new name...but oh how he missed his real name and his former life, his friends and family.  They had been told that Michael Geniene had died.  There was even a funeral..  Jacob chuckled as he thought about it.. he had attended his own funeral, in disguise of course. 

 

He really needed to sit Ava down and talk about buying a home.  The Marshals Office had supplied him with a good history, Jacob Melroy had an excellent credit rating, everything would fall in place.  They could be in a new home in 45 days if they wanted to. The office was so thorough, Jacob had no doubts that his new life could withstand the scrutiny it would take to get what he wanted.  Real Estate Agents just took your information and found you a home, right?  They wouldn't have any reason to dig around and verify EVERYTHING that they came across wit his name on it, would they?  I mean, the banks and underwriting would be the people to dig around in his information.. right? 

 

Jacob still had it on his mind as he pushed his way through the glass doors of the post office to pick up his new computer.  He should have been paying more attention instead of absent mindedly making steps.  He didn't see her until he had already collided with her.  Amy Kastedy,.  REALTOR, proclaimed the name badge that was pinned over her left breast.  

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8 Comments on The Journey Home ~ A Fictional Tale ~ Chapter 2

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23
2011
335,521 Points 23 Featured Posts Outside Blog Called Shot Master

Judi, I think you are fabulously inspiring to strati a fictional story. I started a non-fictional book and intend to sell an electronic version. I've written the first page and a an outline.  We'll see where this goes.

I love your writing style. Intriguing.
9:27pm • #1
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Cathy,  I'm enjoying starting this.. we'll see where it goes.. Jacob and Ava have so much going on.. I'm sure they will have at least one issue that every real estate agent has dealth with.  Thank you so much for coming by, reading, and commenting. 
9:32pm • #2
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And the plot begins to thicken...keep it rolling Judi, so far so good.
10:33pm • #3
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Judi- ok... read both parts 1 and 2 and I'm ready for more.  I've always wanted to write, so good for you.  I'll live vicariously through you.
10:37pm • #4
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Judi, I didn't expect Chapter 2 this soon but I am thrilled to see it. I think the story is getting more intriguing as you go.  Can't wait for more Chapters.

I hope you and your family have a wonderful Thanksgiving.

10:59pm • #5
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24
2011
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Anita,  Thanks for coming by!

Kathy,  We have to try to get these guys happy and in a home, right? 

Gary,  I'm trying to write every day to keep the posts from being too long. Thank you for the Thanksgiving Card. 

Happy Thanksgiving!
7:53am • #6
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Boy...!!!!       Lots of issues .....

 

this might not have a happy ending !!!
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Judi:  I realy like this line:

"Real Estate Agents just took your information and found you a home, right?"

IT REALLY IS FICTION!
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